Yeh hai Prem Kahaniyan (RTMC ff) Part 9 Pg27 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ridzzi

One more RT-MC FF'''''..gr8''''..👏

first of all congo...n thanx for starting n sharing with all of us...🤗

So veer's father has already fixed his marriage with princess ananya'''''.n aryavardan too fixed his son's wedding with princess sia''''.😛

N both the princess is going to meet both princess'''''gr8''''😍

Let's see what's going to happen''''..when these four are going to meet each other'''..😉

PART-3

man anu was damn angry with her father...but his father should also understand his daughters feelings n views...

loved the way sia thinking about her sis...''kahi sach main bhag to nahi gae''...god she really doubted anu...😆

n finally both the prince meet with princess sia...n veer is never going to change...he never leave a single chance to tease his elder bro...in any way...😆

n veer she not a jungli stupid...😡...she is your would be wife...😉...well you will get to know soon about her...she is more smarter than you n beautiful too...

Thanx for the pm'''''.continue soon''''

Luv u''''.😊

They thanks first of all for liking it... Veer is definitely gonna see what Ananya is made of... he's finally gonna meet his match...😊


Woll update soon😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys , I am thinking of changing the title of "Mohabattein" ... so I have made a poll regarding the change of title... plz don't forget to cast your vote😊 as each vote counts.

Here is the link to the poll:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2968593/mohabattein-rtmc-ff-choose-title
Edited by samantha1987200 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Yeh hai Prem Kahaniyan
( RTMC ff )


Part 4

recap

Dharam (composes himself) : Rajkumari Sia aap yahan jungle mein kya kar rahin hain?

Sia: hum apni behen ananya ko dhoond rahe hain, woh naaraz ho kar yaha aa gayi kyonki vo apke bhai se shadi nahi karna chahti...

Veer : use naraz hone ke liye jungle hi mila tha... pata hai yahan
kitna khatra ho sakta hai?

Sia ( defending Ananya ): Ananya apna khayal rakh sakti hai, vo is jungle ke chape chape se waqif hai.

Veer ( mutters to himself ) : kahin vo khud to ek jungli jaanwar nahi hai?? are maa kahan fasa diya apne mujhe😉


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Dharam Veer : Chaliye hum bhi apki madad karte hai Rajkumari Ananya ko dhoondne me...

Sia: Shukriya

Dharam: Isme shukriya ki ( They hear wolves howling suddenly )

Dharam Veer : Yeh bhariyo ki awaaz kahan se aa rahi hai? Kahin Rajkumari Ananya kisi khatre mein to nahi?

Sia: Aap sahi keh rahe hain, yeh bhariyon ki hi awaaz hai, par Ananya ko unse kabhi koi khatra nahi ho sakta...😊

(Dharam and Veer look towards each perplexed. )😕

Veer (frowns)😕: Yeh aap kya keh rahi hai Raajkumari? Bheriye to bahut khatarnak kote hain...( Sia cuts in)

Sia: Aap hamari baat aise nahi samajh payenge...chaliye humare saath...

( Veer and Dharam are confused😕 but they tag behind Sia... After walking for a few minutes, they reach a circular open clearing surrounded by thick trees... A person dressed in black is standing with his back towards Sia, Veer and Dharam and he is holding a sword in his hand ... around 4-5 wolves surround him... there is a lot of tension in the air...
Dharam Veer think that the person is danger and take out their swords to help the person fight the wolves but Sia stops them from moving ahead... Dharam and Veer frown at her...😕

Veer ( annoyed )😡: Aap hume rok nahi sakti, vo khatre me ho sakta hai, hume... ( Sia cuts in )

Sia ( holds her finger in front of her lips ) : Shhh... Vo to khatre me nahi hai par aap zaroor fas sakte hain agar aap iss samay agey badhe...iss liye behtar yahi hoga ki aap yahi peron ke piche ruk jayein aur dekhte jaiye...

(Dharam and Veer frown at her and appear even more perplexed)😕

Dhararam ( frowns )😡 : humein aapse ye asha nahi thi...hume lag... ( stops suddenly as his attention is drawn towards the clearing )

( Both Dharam and Veer are looking in amazement😲towards the clearing. The man starts practicing with his sword there and wolves keep on staring at him without getting into attack mode )

Veer ( mutters ) : iss gadhe ko bhi yahi jagah mili abhyas ke liye... isko dikhta nahi ki kuchi der baad yeh un bhadiyon ka bhojan ban sakta hai...😕

( He looks back and sees Sia who has a soft smile 😊playing on her lips and Dharam's mouth is hanging open)

Veer ( mutters to himself ) : Sumaina ke pagal mere bhai ko bhi poora pagal bana denge... addha pagal to ye pehle se tha ...😆

( Veer's attention is again drawn towards the man, then to the wolves... he is confused at the abnormality of the situation )😲

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Guys i know some of you will find this part odd but this is just experimental😊😉

Plz leave your comments and suggestions...

Edited by samantha1987200 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Yeh hai Prem Kahaniyan
( RTMC ff )




Part 5

recap

Veer ( mutters ) : iss gadhe ko bhi yahi jagah mili abhyas ke liye... isko dikhta nahi ki kuchi der baad yeh un bhadiyon ka bhojan ban sakta hai...😕

( He looks back and sees Sia who has a soft smile 😊playing on her lips and Dharam's mouth is hanging open)

Veer ( mutters to himself ) : Sumaina ke pagal mere bhai ko bhi poora pagal bana denge... addha pagal to ye pehle se tha ...😆

( Veer's attention is again drawn towards the man, then to the wolves... he is confused at the abnormality of the situation )😲

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In the Forest


Veer kept on watching the man who kept on practicing without any sight of tiredness.
It seemed as if the man was venting out all pent up rage within him. He seemed like a pro at sword fighting...Veer had rarely seen such flexibility and swiftness in a person.

After what seemed like eternity, the man kept his sword aside and knelt. Veer and Dharam looked in amazement 😲as the wolves approached the man and started nuzzling him... who in turn started petting them...they almost seemed like pets almost!!!!😲

Never before had Veer and Dharam witnessed a scene like this...it was surreal...😲
After a while the man got up, took of his turban and started shaking his head...

Gorgeous Black glossy curls tumbled down... Then as if the person sensed someone watching someone watching him, he turned around...

Veer and Dharam were shocked to discover that the person was not a man but a girl😲...that too an extremely beautiful one with beautiful big black eyes and rosy lips...

Sia: Ananya kitni der ho gayi, hum kabse tumhari raah dekh rahe thay...

Ananya: Haan haan Ananya janti hai... par Ananya un bevkoof rajkumaron ko bhagane ki yogna soch rahi thi...hume nahi karni us Veer ke bache se shaadi...😆

Sia: vo vo😳

Ananya: kya vo vo Sia...?? ( suddenly Ananya notices two good looking boys standing behind Sia... she thinks that they are a threat to Sia, so she quickly takes out her sword and starts approaching them)

Ananya😡: Tumhari himat kaise hui hamari behen ( Sia cuts in and pulls Ananya back. Ananya frowns at her)

Sia: Ananya tum galat soch rahi ho ( pointing towards Dharam) Ye Raajkumar Dharam hain aur vo ( pointing towards Veer ) Rajkumar Veer hain...( Ananya gapes at her sister and then at Dharam and Veer😲 )

Sia (pointing towards Ananya ) : Ye hain humari choti behen Raajkumari Ananya...

Ananya ( embarassed 😳) : Humein maaf kar di jiye Raajkumar Dharam hume apke baare me aisa nahi kehna chahiye tha... par hum ( Veer cuts in )...

Veer ( annoyed😡 ) : Aur humse maafi nahi mangengi...

Ananya frowns at him... 😡

Ananya: Bilkul nahi, hum mangne hi wale thay par tumhare tewar dekh kar to bilkul nahi mangenge... bilkul bigade hue rais dikhte ho

Veer ( irritated 😡) : Aur tum kya ho jungli billi... tum to jungle me hi achi lagti ho un jungli bhadiyon ke beech... hum insano ke beech nahi...kya tum ( Dharam cuts in )

Dharam : Veer tum apni hud mat bhoolo ye rajkumari hai... aur Raajkumari Ananya hum Veer ki taraf se maafi mangte hain...

Ananya ( smirks😉 ) : Rajkumar Dharam kya sach much ye apka bhai hai?

( Dharam laughs😆)

Sia: bahut hua ananya ab bas bhi karo...

Ananya: par Ananya ne kya kiya ( in an innocent tone)

Sia playfully smacks her

Veer ( mutters ) jungli billi kahin ki...

Ananya : kya kaha tumne? hum jungli billi, tum kya ho ek batameez rajkumar... Hum tumhein chodenge nahi...

Veer: pehle pakdo to sahi...

Ananya starts running behind Veer but suddenly a sainik comes there...

Sainik : rajkumari sia, rajkumari ananya apko maharaj mehel me bula rahe hain ...

Sia: theek hai tum jao hum aate hain...

Sainik: ji rajkumari

Sia ( looks at veer and ananya ) : tum dono baad mein lar lena abhi hum sab mehel chalte hain...

Ananya: Theek hai hume kuch aur zaroori kam se pehle kahin aur jana...hum thodi der mein pahunchte hain...

Ananya blows a whistle, Badal comes... she mounts him and gallops away...

Veer keeps on looking at Ananya in amazement...


Edited by samantha1987200 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45

Lovely update...liked Ananya-Veer interaction

Waiting for more...

Thx for PM

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: glossyglassy

Lovely update...liked Ananya-Veer interaction

Waiting for more...

Thx for PM



Hey... thanks... would love it if you give some suggestions😊... By the way "Aftermath" is amazing... I really enjoyed reading it😊

I'll Pm you when I update😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
reso jii
will give a comment shower on sunday, along wid banner

plz spare me

i m loving d stry
and wanna comment in detail

so dat it will make u happy

but no time now as i have two entrnce test on sat n sun too
day after day



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yes, milgye
inhe tho milna hi tha.
honi ko kuan tal sakta h.
sooperbo jii
just loved it
so so amazing...

maaze aa gye by god.
veer n anu, kabi nhi sudhrenge yeh dono
phirr se jhagda.

viase agar yeh jhadenge nhi tho humme maaze kahan se aayega.

sahi kaha na!

but anu ki veer k samne entry by god, kya kamaal ki h
veer tho pakka lotuu ho gya hoga.

veer jangalii mat bolo
coz, yeh jungalli bhot jald tumhare gale padne wali h...

but yeh anu kahan gyi??????????

loved sia n dharm talks too, but veer n anu are best, b it anything.
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
Oye hoyee What a LOVELY update:-):-) Amazing:-) Ananya is so Brave:-) and Veer to Veer hi rahega;-) he called Ananya Jungli Billi;-):-) I Jus LOVE Veer's Dialogs:-):-) you are really AMAZING writer dear:-):-)... Waiting 4 next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
nice...👏
finally four royals meet each other...😛
princess anu ne toh dono prince k hosh hi uda die...😉
but loved veer n anu's fight...dhishum dhishum...😆
continue soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
superb ud samantha
luved veer-ananya's scene...
thanx for the pm...
waiting for the nxt...

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