Yeh hai Prem Kahaniyan (RTMC ff) Part 9 Pg27 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: samantha1987200



Thanks a lot...added wolves part to add more mystery to Ananya's character... 😊

I have always loved Ananya/Shera and Veer... to me the DV was Mugdha and Rajat...No one else... Vikrant wasn't bad but RT and MC are in a different league all together😊

Thanks I am glad you liked the update😊

Love ya😊


yes evn for me, dv means rtmc...
or to be more specific...

tv means rtmc, hope to see dem on tv soon , together...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
Yeh hai Prem Kahaniyan
( RTMC ff )



Part 6

recap
Ananya blows a whistle, Badal comes... she mounts him and gallops away...

Veer keeps on looking at Ananya in amazement...

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In the Forest:

Dharam: Veer!! Veer!!!!

Veer ( comes out of his trance ) : Haan haan...

Dharam ( smirks 😉): Kahan kho hue ho ... acha vo chodo... ek baat batao hume, tum Rajkumari Ananya ko aise kyon dekh rahe ho?

Veer ( embarrassed😳): Aise kaise kya matalab!!! mai kaha use dekh raha tha... Main to bas yeh soch raha tha ki vo kitni ajeeb hai 😉

Dharam: Acha? Hume to vo bilkul ajeeb nahi lagi... balki vo toh bahut bahadur hain...

Veer (smirks 😉 ) :Soch lo Dharam... tumhari shadi to Rajkumari Sia se tai hui hai par agar tum chaho to hum mamaji se uss ghamandi ke bare mein baat kar sakte hain😉... isi bahane us jungli billi se hamara picha to chutega😆

Dharam ( embarrassed 😳): Veer chup raho !!!! tum hamesha har baat ka galat matlab nikalte ho...( Dharam looks towards Sia who is smiling at the banter between two brothers )...

Veer : Maaf karna Rajkumari Sia hum to bas aise hi...( Sia cuts in )

Sia: Koi nahi... chaliye ab hum sabko chalna chahiye...
( Dharam and Veer nod and untie their horses but don't mount them as Sia had come on foot... )

Dharam : agar ap bura na mane to kya hum apse ek baat puch sakte hain Rajkumari Sia?

Sia: is me bura maane wali kya baat hai? puchiye...

Dharam : Bhadiye to bahut khatarnak hote hai phir Rajkumari Ananya ne ( Sia cuts in )

Sia: hum samajh gaye ap kya janana chahte hain... yahi na ki unhone Ananya par hamla kyo nahi kiya?

( Dharam nods )

Sia : Vo kya hai na ki bachpan se hi hamari Ananya ko pachuyon ke saath ek ajeeb lagav hai... iss baat par sabhi hairan reh jaate hain ki khatarnak se kharnak janwar bhi Ananya par humla nahi karta... kuch to hai jiski vajah Ananya unko itni achi tarah se samajhti hai aur vo Ananya ko...

Veer ( mutters to himself ) : Janwar ko janwar nahi to aur kaun samjhega... vo ghamandi sach mein jungle mein hi theek lagti hai apne doston ke saath... jungli billi kahin ki ...😉

Sia : Rajkumar Veer , kuch kaha apne?

Veer ( straight face ) : nahi nahi kuch nai😆

Sia ( starts of again ) Apko pata hai... Ananya kafi choti thi jab usko pata chala ki yahan jungle mein shikar hota... bas phir kya tha vo zid pakad ke baith gayi ki vo tab tak kuch nahi khayegi jab tak pitaji shikar par pabandi na laga de... akhirkar pitaji ko bhi humari behen ki zid ke samne jhukna pada...😆

Dharam( laughs😆 ): bahut pyar karti hai na aap unse?

Sia😊: khud se bhi zyada... usmein hamari jaan basti hai😊

Veer ( irritated😡 mutters to himself ) : pata nahi kab khatam hoga ye ananya nam ka gun gan... jabse aye hain... tabse ananya ye... ananya vo...tang aa gaya hun mai us se...

Dharam : kya apko bhi talwar bazi mein dilchaspi hai?

Sia: nahi nahi... hume iss sab mein koi ruchi nahi hai par ananya ka dil rakhne ke liye humne itni talwarbazi seekh li hai ki zaroorat ane par khud ki raksha kar sake...

Dharam : yeh to bahut achi baat hai...har kisi ko apna bachav karna ana chahiye... aur kis sab me dilchaspi hai apko?

Sia ( blushes😳) Kuch khas nahi... bas humein chitra banana aur murtiya taiyar karna bahut acha lagta hai...

Dharam : aise kaise kuch khas nahi... yahi sab to apko sabse khas banata hai ...( Dharam blushes when he realizes what he had just said 😳)

( Sia blushes and dharam and sis have an eyelock )

Veer ( smirks ) : ahem ahem... agar aap bhool gaye hain to mai aap dono ko yaad dila deta hoon ki mai abhi yahi hoon😉

Sia ( embarrassed 😳): nahi vo hum bas Rajkumar dharam ke sawalon ka jawab de rahe thay...

Veer (smirks) : hum sab samajhte hain Rajkumari Sia😉

Dharam ( embarrassed😳 ): Veer chup karo aur jaldi chalo...

Veer😉 : acha ab tumhe jaldi ho rahi hai abhi kuch pal pehle to tym ( dharam cuts in )

Dharam : Veer hum tumko chodenge nahi

Veer: pehle pakad ke to dikhao 😉

( Veer starts runnin and dharam starts chasing him)

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Edited by samantha1987200 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
yeh h last...
chalo
veer ko anu se jalan ho rhi h
gande baache...

jab shaddi ho jayegi, tab tho anu har waqt tumhare aas paa rahegi

aur veer, since anu tumne jyada cute h, tho sab usse hi jyada pyaary karegem
yah tak ki tumhari mom bhi...

tab tho tum jealousy k mare ash ho jaoge

voh sochkr hi mujhe kitni haasi aati h...🤣...
veer n jjealous, perfcet combo

dharam n veer , sooperbo interction...

dharam ne pakad liye na...tum anu ko dekh rahe the, oppps! ghoor rhe the,...
pool khul gyi bacho.

anu ka nasha chadd gya h veer k sir pr...


cool, sia kitna blush karti h...
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
lovely...👏
poor veer is irritated with anu's name...veer it's not good...she is your would be wife...😉
n loved dharam n sia's convo...😳
continue soon...
luv u...😊
Edited by ridzzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
lovely update dear..,loved it thoroughly...
Loved veer vry much
he was awesome really
janwar ko janwar hi samajh sakte h loved these lines

sia n dharam scene is also cute
awesome update dear
continue soon
thanks 4 pm
luv u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Hi sweetie
its wonderful...read all the updates...keep up the good work...and do cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
lovely ud dear...
veers reaction was hilarious when dharam n sia were talking abt anu...
luved it...ud soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
lovely story..
pls increase the size of the updates:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
hey !!
sorry 4 not replyng till now...😭...had xams...🤢
1st conzos on cr8tng RTMC ff !!! 🥳
luv d royal concept !!!
u've written evrythng beautifully !!! 👏
d story is real fun 2 read !!
luv all d parts...
Dharam n Sia seem 2 like each othr already...😳...ab bas Veer n Ananya bhi dost ban jaye...
Veer aapni future wife ki tareef sun kar irritate mat ho...😉
thnx 4 d PM !!
loads of luv...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
congrats on ur first ff
liked the starting
loved it
sorry for being late :)

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