~Good Bye~ ||ArSha OS|| *Next part-pg 12*

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Surbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: divya_luvarsha
nice one...luved the way you expressed rey's POV👏this really reminds me of arsha😭
thnx for the pm

Thanks a lot for your comments Divya! 😃

Well, it was actually Kunwar's POV and not Rey's..

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Surbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: anniemathias
hey surbhi as always have rocked i loved it
nice 2 see arsha os once again
i love u for this

Thank you so much!

I rocked like always? aww..That's a huge compliment! Thanks! 😃

once again? Well, this is my first work on ArSha..!

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Surbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: meevee
Hey Surbhi that was fab...the parting last line pulled at my heart - thtz what true luv is all about isn't it - very beautifully written & to the point 😊

Thanks a lot for your comments! 😃

I really appreciate your response..!

I am glad you loved it so much and even appreciated my writing..! 😃

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: dildostidance19
please please write another part of it..😳

I will very soon...!

Originally posted by: LOV_ARSHA_KREYA
Mindblowing<3

Thank you! 😃

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: asmaju
Awesome update subradhi.
Thanks for pm.
It was lovely one.
do write more.
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Thanks a lot for your comments Asma! 😃

I am glad you loved it..!

I'll definitely write more when I have something in mind..

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: kvarsha
ohh it nice dam i loved it plzzz continue and thanks for d pm😃

Thank you so much Varsha! 😃

I'll be giving another part to it very soon...

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Aww wow . . . . . Ek aur part milega . . . 😛

i'll be waiting . . . . 😍

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: yogini64
Aww wow . . . . . Ek aur part milega . . . 😛

i'll be waiting . . . . 😍

haan ek aur part milega..! 😃

I hope you'll like it..

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: pkriyaansh
update jaldiii

I'll update tomorrow

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Surbhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Arsha-4-Ever
A very emotional OS on ArSha.
U have beautifully described Amar's POV based on the current situation in ArSha's life. I like the gift that Shakti gave to him. She has wrapped up all their memories in those pictures. Nice.
I am missing ArSha like hell :(
Good Work dear.
Thx for the PM

Thanks a lot for your comments! 😃

yeah, it was emotional..I just wanted to portray Kunwar's present state of mind..as in what he really are going through when Shakti is leaving..

I am happy that I could do justice to their emotions..!

Miss ArSha too!