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BarunSobtIsMine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: Sjm15
Wow, you have a story about their past! And interesting too!

I loved the update! 👏

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I just realized that there were no Hotwa cutewa scenes?! 😕 You are trying to see how long I'll wait?! 😆

My answer is, I'll wait, as long as it takes... Samjhi aap? 😆 Lol.

hmm samajna tho chahtha hi ... lekin cute shaitan se expect karna bekar hi ...

he may master* but will never rape ..😆

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•Jessie/Jessica•

@.Enchanted_Soul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

Fantastic update =) 😳

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: magiciasarnav

hmm samajna tho chahtha hi ... lekin cute shaitan se expect karna bekar hi ...
he may master* but will never rape ..😆

That's what makes his cutewa and Hotwa... You are right yaar... He will never, and I am happy that he will never! 😆

There is just something magnetic about him... 😳

And add your writing to that... 😍

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Magicia

@magicia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

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JerryTheMouse

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

Res

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Me first😃 Me first 😃

Ooh. What a connect! She was there, that fateful day! And he Recognized her eyes! The pain he felt during the memories, the confusion... You portrayed so well!

Will update more tmrw morning! 😊

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The entire event was very well penned! Starting from the way the woman was, the child, his dad, his mom, their reactions...

I loved how you describe the reactions from Arnav's POV! No assumptions, no falsities! Just what he saw! 👏

I read this again and again, and I got the impression that it wasn't anything his dad did, it was more of the chacha's nefarious plan... Of course I sometimes analyze too much... And it will all enfold in good time.. I know that too. 😆

Edited by Sjm15 - 13 years ago

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binimoti

@binimoti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Terrible in a good sense, oh my i am feeling it, awesome please update soon will be waitin for pm and i am in a place where facebook is banned so sorry f,or inconvineince, you are a really good writer 👏

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Awesome updates..

awww poor arnav's past is so painful..

glad he saved her..

continue soon

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

wow tat was great 2 updates in a day & that was also a touching one. As all of us know that Arnav's past was always bitter & a nightmare 2 him but u wrote it emotionally. So is Khushi related 2 his past?? Is that a turning point in ur FF?? Can't wait 4 the next update.