FF: The games we play Thread 2 (updated: page 147)

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Applebee

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: nikita_88
Congrats on the new thread 🥳

Loved the update! Arnav's confession, I guess that is what you can call it was great... And Khushi's laughter - it suited the situation, the smiles...

hi there! thank you so much! I am glad you liked it but, I wouldn't call it a confession yet... 😆 A sort of one, but not a full blown confession! LOL! But again, I am glad you liked it. This chapter gave me a lot of trouble! 😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Wow... this update blew me away...

They're both back... . Khushi is so hilarious...in the most intense of situations... 😆 😆, and Arnav...love how he trusted her with his car...speaks volumes...

Cant wait to read more... 😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

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that was all sorts of right...ad beautiful...

indeed...what is he going to do...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

That was beautiful... The man did say what K's status is in his life..what respect he is bestowing her.. I am glad things sorted out :)

Fab update

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Abi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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CONGRATS OON THREAD 2!

and an amazing post with this new thread! loved it! the words arnav spoke stayed true to his character, tey weren't ,ushy romantic words but they still held depth and intensity. just superb... and awww i feel so bad... what WILL he do without her?... FANTASTIC UPDATE!!! :)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Res ..

I have to catch up im at chapter 42 .. LOL .. But SO FAR I LOVE IT !!! :D

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

looks like upcomming separation has hit arnav hard , loved the update absolutly amazing

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StripePurple

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hi. Great writing. I just came across this FF and must say you have a beautiful, unique style. And the songs, they are perfect for the mood of each piece. Love the subtle way in which you have portrayed the love and the anguish and the uncertainty in their relationship.😊
This said, however, I must point out a teeny-tiny blooper I just noticed, regarding the time frame in which your last two chapters have taken place. I thought this party was happening last night? & Arnav was thinking about it the next day, Khushi still being cold with him? Other than that, the last part was perfect, though! 👍🏼

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Loved it! Yay their back!
Hope arnav doesnt have another mood swing towards khushi when he sees shyam again!

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Posted: 13 years ago

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loved this update!!! i love how they've solved the "mistress" problem and even more, i love that arnav realizes he cant live without her! fantastic! great writing and portrayal of emotions! :) thanks for the pm! :)