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Ovi_Tanni

@Ovi_Tanni

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Its superb update...plz continue bt one question ll kushi ll die like maya i mean maya died in force movie...ll it b like tat...plz dnt do dis...i want their happy ending...cnt wait fr the next part...continue.

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#162

Very nice and different!

Continue and PM me too, please?

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Sukirti Singh Raizada

@sukirtiraizada

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#163

lovely update...

thanx for the pm...

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MARYAM

@barun_lover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#164

sorry 4 late comment

awesome story

thanx 4 sharing it with us

do continue it

update soon

thanx 4 the pm

Edited by maryam_raza3409 - 13 years ago

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aashshhs

@aashshhs

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Brilliant update, seems like a very nice start...thanks a lot for the pm :) :) :)

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ArshiRaiguptha

@ArshiRaiguptha

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

lovd asr's frnd!!!

hihi..:P

waitng 4 nxt update..

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#167

This is great! The prologue was quite gripping.
I like Arnav as an ACP.
Continue soon.

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Ritu

@.khanak.

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Removed!

Edited by Ri_luvs_ArShi - 13 years ago

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#169

res

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Interesting start! The way you started with the Flashback scene definitely hooked me to the story now.. He loved Priya and something happened? Something happened to her or something else that stopped the marriage?

How he ended up with Kushi? And where is she prohibited to go?

Waiting for the answers! Update soon!

Thanks for the PM!

P.S: Yay! First! **That smiley is doing s dhinga chikka dance **

Edited by --Siva-- - 13 years ago