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Posted: 13 years ago
part 34-
awsome..
waiting 4 the suprise
n ,mayu's reaction
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
guys just reach home... their no update for today will update tomorrow and will PM all

good night 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update...
loved both the parts...
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey all i am back with my update 😊
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Chapter-36

Mayank gives his hand to Nupur; she takes it with confidence and love. They started walking on the road...
[Guys here is the song from Tum Bin]

Come around
Is time to baby come around
Come on na
Come around
Is time to baby come around
Come around
Come around

They reaches the main road, where some teenage girls and boys comes on bikes and open jeeps. They see them and circulate teasing them thinking that they are run-away lovers. Mayank hugs Nupur from bag and both shares a laugh looking at them. They offer them a ride...
Mayank sits in the back of a jeep and gives his hand to Nupur pulling her in...

Khawabon bina nigahein meri jee rahi thi
Koi nahi tha yeh akeli meri thi zindagi
Oh oh yeah!

The teenagers offer them the hard drinks. Nupur gives a 'what' look to Mayank, he smiles at her expression shakes his head and takes the drinks from them and makes Nupur to sip a little after which Nupur keeps a weird expressions, Mayank laughs on the expression adores her taking her face in his hands gives a sloppy kiss her cheek.

Khamosh tha
hothon pe baaat nahi thi
Koi nahi tha yeh akeli meri thi zindagi

They both stands at the back of the jeep enjoying the fresh air...Mayank hugs Nupur from her back enjoying along with her...

Tum mile to mil gaya yeh jahan
Tum mile to har pal hai naya
Tum mile to sab se hai fasla

Tum mile to jadoo chaa gaya
Tum mile to jeena aa gaya
Tum mile to mene paya hai khuda

They get down at some place, taking pics along with the teenagers. They both make different postures like hugging each other, standing on opposite directions, Mayank picks her in his hands where Nupur puts her hands on her face giving shy smile, and Nupur hugs Mayank from back and at last Mayank kissing Nupur on her cheek...

Come around
Is time to baby come around

Come on na
Come around
Is time to baby come around
Come around
Come around

by the time they say good bye to teenagers it is early morning... they went to near motel and freshen up they went to the boutique just opened and as Mayank payed much to the person they didnot interfered and let them enjoy as they want they started playing with the dresses and trying differently... and taking their own time in experimenting like teenagers... at the end they came out with jeans and same type of T-shirts and goggles

Palkein mundein chahat meri so rahi thi
Khushboo hawaon mein thi mene nahi mehsoos ki
umm umm

They started walking on the road, for some time Mayank picks Nupur in his hands and walks, they see a bullock cart going with hay, they ran and catch the bullock cart they slept happily in the heap of hay, like Mayank spread his hand for Nupur, and she slept on his hand. He kissed her on her forehead pulling her close. They got down at some daba...

Jane kahan bahrein meri khil rahi thi
Khushboo hawaon mein thi mene nahi mehsoos ki

they enjoyed their food then went into fields, Nupur bend to drink water from a big pump when Mayank pushed her into water fall making completely wet, Nupur glared at Mayank and run behind laughing Mayank, holds his shirt and pulls him to the water pump but Mayank starts tickling her and at the end take her in his hand and drops her in the tank of water and jumps playing with her...

Tum mile to mehki barishe
Tum mile jagi khwaishe
Tum mile to rango ka hai silsila

Tum mile to jadoo chaa gaya
Tum mile to jeena aa gaya
Tum mile to maine paya hai khuda

Both are hell wet, They lend some clothes from the villagers. It is a hut with no walls, Nupur made a four wall with the sarees and changed her wet and heavy jeans with a saree wrapping around her baring her shoulders. Mayank came wearing a shot… the atmosphere is very romantic, thought light is their outside it is looking little dark and romantic inside.[hey guys i hope you got the picture]

Mayank slowly approaches Nupur, who is feeling very shy suddenly seeing Mayank and turns to otherside and bends her head. He comes near her, puts his hands on her shoulder turning her towards him, pushes her wet hair from her face, she closes her eyes feeling his hot fingers on her face... he slowly cares her face with his lips...

Tune duyain suni
Dil ki sadyein suni
Tujhse mein maungu aur kya

He picks her without breaking eye lock places her on the floor, he starts caring and kissing her on her jawline, trailing the kisses on her collar bone while Nupur closes her eyes holds his shoulder...

Tujh bin adhura hoon mein
Tere sang pura hoon mein
Karta hoon tera shukriya

Nupur looks into his eyes with love and trust which is returned with lot of love and affection from Mayank's eyes, puts her hands around his neck pulling him close… They forget the boundaries in their passion, caring each other. Nupur allowed Mayank to touch her and do the things she never
allowed anyone to do with her. Mayank took each detail of Nupur making her moan with pleasure...

Kaise kahon
Kaise kahoon
o Oo yeah yeah yaaah

After their foreplay Mayank leaned to a poll where Nupur slept on his chest hugging him tight... he said sweet nothing in her ears and he meant every love promise which he made to her... that she is the only one for him and his life depends on her completely.

Kaise kahon lamhein mujhe choo rahein hain
Aisa laga hai inmein tera hi to ehsaas hai
Ouhh hooo
Kaise kahon dil mein nayi aahtein hai
Aisa laga hai inmein tera hi to ehsaas hai

Mayank and Nupur said bye to all the villagers who helped them and started returning back to Chandigarh. They take bike ride, bullock cart ride and at the end take the cab to reach their house... this the best day of their lifes, they are sure their future will be filled with happiness and love...

Tum mile to mera dil gaya
Tum mile to sab kuch mil gaya
Tum mile to logon se kya vasta

O oo h
Tum mile to jadoo chaa gaya
Tum mile to jeena aa gaya
Tum mile to maine paya hai khuda

Come around
Is time to baby come around
Come on na
Come around
Is time to baby come around
Come around
Come around

Mayank drops Nupur at her house, kisses on her forehead and starts walking waving at her. Nupur stays at the door till she can see Mayank. Nupur knocks at the door, Seema opens it, Nupur hugs seema "bhabi, I am so happy"
Seema keeps a panic face and looks at Nupur worriedly.
Nupur "kya huva bhabi",
"where are you?" Nupur hears a warning tone of her Uday bhaisa and looks over Seema's shoulder then she notices her whole family is sitting in the living room. Kutumb and Inder in worried face.
Ishaan with helpless look, he is angry on Nupur but still worried for her.
Vidith and Uday in a very serious expressions.
Sunania is taking rest inside as ordered by doctor.

Kutumb-Inder, sunania-Uday came back to chandigarh unexpectedly from delhi, as doctor discharged sunania and asked her to take rest Kutumb thought I would be good if she comes to chandigarh and stays with them. When they returned they thought Nupur went to office but in the evening when Samrat came from office to take his car and ask about Nupur's whereabouts everyone are shocked to know that Nupur is not at office. Seema tried her best to cover up for Nupur but no use, the final blow happened when neighbors came and said they saw Nupur going with some guy nearly @ 2 AM they thought the guy is Ishaan so came enquiring about sunania. At the end Seema has to tell them the truth that Nupur went with her friend on a birthday party. They enquired Samrat but he is clueless about her friend's birthday party. It is around 1 AM when Nupur returned, everyone is worried and angry on her recklessness. Nupur is standing between everyone, donot know what to tell and what not to tell. She is never in such situation. She has no regrets that she went with Mayank but how can she explain this to her parents. Then Nupur understood what might Gunjan went through when her parents pointed out, here situation still in control as no one saw her with Mayank. If she reveals she went with Mayank, what if her parents misunderstood Mayank, everyone knows that Mayank is engaged to Natasha. At the worst case if her father points a finger at Mayank she cannot bare that. Mayank is right, in such moments you have to be patient.

Nupur says "I will tell when time comes"
Before Uday can rise his voice, Inder comes and stand infront of Nupur "beti, I have faith in you. But please never make me regret that" and left from there. Kutumb followed inder giving a helpless look to Nupur. Nupur run to her room, followed by Seema. Samrat and Ishaan stayed back as Seema asked them not to disturb her.

Seema cares Nupur's hair "I am sorry Nupur, I tried my best but everything went out of control"
Nupur hugs Seema "please bhabi, donot be sorry. It is not your fault. I just donot want papa to misunderstand Mayank"
Seema "donot worry everything will be fine, just it needs some time to adjust".

Next day everyone are behaving normally with Nupur on Kutumbs insist but Nupur is still guilty for not telling her family that she is in love with Mayank. Nupur go to office with a sad face. Samrat comes to office but he is very angry on Nupur for not telling him anything and where she went this time.
Samrat "where you went Nupur? Everyone is so worried. I really donot understand you now, I felt like you are hiding something from me"
Nupur "I am sorry Samrat, oh" she want to tell him about Mayank but not sure how to start and how to end.
Samrat gives a smile and says "fine tell when you feel you are ok" N
upur gives a small smile and says "thanks for understanding"
Samrat "friends for what" Nupur smiles widen.
Samrat "aree hain, Mayank sir left to Delhi, he gave the message to me and asked me to inform you. Some work came out in his Delhi office"
Nupur gets more disappointed 'oh know Mayank is not their' she think to call him but decided against it may be he is busy. The whole day goes like dragging for Nupur.

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Posted: 13 years ago

awosm part..

haww everybody comes to knw about nupur being out
the whole ni8
omg..hope everything will be gud at the end
Edited by parul_bansal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was really very very romantic part...


they finally became one soul..

i just hope that nupur's family didn't misunderstood mayank...


and i am afraid that natasha didn't create any mess...


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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update dear...❤️❤️❤️

thanks 4 d pm...

plzzz contd sooon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing part...
But im afraid of nupur's family...hope she tell them soon...
Cont...
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update preeti!
just a bit concernd abt MN!

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