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Posted: 13 years ago

Yaaar , plzzz updaaatee plzzz atleast once a month... since last may , u havnt turned up,...!!!!!!!!!

Waiting ma dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Update kaha hai ????????????????

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apne to promise kiya thana ,...
plzzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
we know you are not well now, but just wanted to know when you are going to update this ff..bus apke hain...its beena long time
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey piya, y hv u stopped updatin dis FF?
its been amazin so far!
u updt othr bt jst not dis,y so?
yaar v luv dis ff so dnt do unjustice n updt soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago


I PROMISE TO GIVE REGULAR UPDATES FROM TODAY. EVERY WEEK I WILL UPDATE THIS FF

UPDATING 😃
Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-



I PROMISE TO GIVE REGULAR UPDATES FROM TODAY. EVERY WEEK I WILL UPDATE THIS FF

UPDATING 😃



mee waiting piya...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for your love and support dear friends.

I know I deserve rotten tomatoes and eggs for not updating this FF for almost 3 months but to be frank enough I had a feeling that may be my readers are not interested in this FF but after getting ur pms and seeing the comments on this thread I have realized that I was a fool to underestimate the potential of this FF. Pls forgive ur stupid writer one last time from now onwards I will update this FF every week like the remaining stories. I dedicate this update to shruti_ms, minnuraj, dona86, abisamratgunjan, Alamelu, anky_s and maneetlover (Mona)

Love-Piya

PART 13

Dev and Meera take their letters and assure them to pass on the message to the respective person

Maan and Geet were getting restless. They knew they were in love but it was important for them to know the biggest truth of each other's life before taking their relationship to the next level

Lost in each other's thoughts Maaneet were returning back to their house

On his back back Maan saw a group of boys struggling on the road

The jeep of the boys had got stuck in the mud and it was entangled so badly that none of the boys were able to remove the jeep from there

These boys were not from the village it looked as if they were here for some kind of a project

Maan: Excuse me kya main aapki koi madat kar saktha hoon? [Excuse me do u require my help?]

The boys turned around

Raj: Hello Sir wo darasal humari gaadi yaha phas gayi hai kya aap isse nikale ne mein humari madat karenge? [Hello Sir. Our jeep is stuck over here can u pls help us to take it out from this mess?]

Maan: Zarur. Aap logh zara peeche ho jaaiye [Sure. U guys just move a little behind]

The boys moved behind and Maan analyzed the position of the jeep with an eagle eye and with a smile on his face went ahead and showcased his lion like strength by pushing the jeep out with ease

The reflexing action of his well toned muscles made the boys to die in embarrasement

None of the boys could match the charm and strength of this hot village doc

Maan successfully pulled the jeep out of the mess and gave the boys a reassuring look

Maan: Lijiye aapki jeep sahi salamat musibat se bahar aa gayi [Your jeep is out of trouble now]

Raj: Sir aapne toh kamal kar diya [Sir u made this look so easy]

Vinod: Jee Sir hum sab ne milkar koshish ki iss jeep ko bahar nikalne k liye par hum mein se koi bhi kamiyaab nahi hua [Yes Sir each one of us tried to pull this jeep out but none of us succeeded]

The boys were so impressed with Maan's personality that they were singing his praises continuously and were not allowing Maan to give any reply

Raj: Aap zarur pehelwan honge haina Sir? [U might be a wrester am I right Sir?]

Maan: Ji nahi main toh'[No u r mistaken I am a']

A voice: Ye toh ek Doctor hai [He is a Doctor]

Maan's expression changed as soon as he heard the voice.

He turned around to see if his speculation was right or not

Raj: Are Adi tu aa gaya? [Adi u r back?]

Maan gulped his saliva as soon as he heard his name.

He kept his calm and looked straight into Adi's eyes without any feelings

Adi: Ye ek bade hi kaabil Doctor hai [He is a brilliant Doctor]

Vinod: Tujhe kaise pata? [How do u know this?]

Adi: Bewakoofho inka safed coat aur stereoscope dhikayi nahi deta kya? [Can't you'll see his white coat and the stereoscope?]

Maan was relieved

Maan: Ye sahi keh rahe hai main peshe se ek Doctor hoon [Yes he is right I am a Doctor by profession]

Raj: Wow Adi tune toh ek hi nazar mein inhe khoob pehchana [Wow Adi u recognized him so easily]

Adi: Inhe mujhse behtar aur kaun pehchaan saktha hai [If not me then who is supposed to recognize him?]

Maan felt a pain with this statement of Adi

He immediately decided to change the topic

Maan: Aap logh kisi project ke liye yaha aaye hai? [R you'll here for some project?]

Raj: Ji Sir hum yaha villagers ke taur tareeko par research karne ke liye aaye hai. Ab kuch mahine hum yahi rahenge [ Yes Sir we r here do do a research on the way of living of the villagers. We will be staying here for few months till our project is over]

Maan: All the best for your project boys

Raj and Vinod: Thanks Sir

Maan: Abhi main chaltha hoon mujhe ek patient ko dekhne jaana hai [I'll take your leave I need to check a patient right now]

Raj: It was great meeting you Sir

Maan: Same here

Adi gave a mysterious look to Maan and some unknown conversation took place betweentheir eyes before Maan left the place

Meanwhile,

Dev was carrying Geet's letter with him that she had written for Maan and was returning back to his house when all of a sudden a group of small children started approaching his direction in a very speed

It seemed the kids were running for their life

Dev stopped one kid and asked him why were they running at such a high speed

The kid informed him that a bull was out of control and it was attacking all the individuals who were crossing its path

Dev was scared of bullocks. He panicked at that very moment and changed his direction in order to save himself

This decision of Dev to change his direction landed him in more trouble as the bull welcomed him with an angry glare

Dev panicked and lost his wits there and then

The bull was all set to attack him with its pointed antlers when Dev gathered strength and started running for his life

Some shopkeepers had ignited fire as they were burning some of their unwanted materials

As Dev was running he lost his balance and the letter of Geet that was addressed to Maan got into this fire but Dev was quick and was successful in preventing the letter to get destroyed completely

The first half of the letter was destroyed in the flames of the fire

Dev was successful in saving his life with the remaining part of the letter

He changed the route and was successful in reaching his house

He closed the door immediately and looked at the letter

Dev: Geet ne Maan bhai ke liye ye khat likha tha aur meri bevakoofi ki wajah se ye khat aadha jal gaya. Ab main kya karu? [Geet had written this letter for Maan Bro and due to my foolishness half of the letter has been destroyed now what should I do?]

After thinking a lot Dev decided to open the letter and the last words that he saw in the letter brought a beautiful smile on his face

Dev: Shukriyaan babaji jo chahiye tha wo iss khat mein abhi bhi hai ab toh Geet bhabhi ka ye nazrana Maan bhai tak zarur pauchega [Thank you Lord the important thing is still there in this letter the message of Geet bhabhi will surely reach Maan]

He took a scale and carefully tore the letter in a proper way so that the burnt area was not visible

He folded the letter and placed it in a new envelope and was now desperate to give the letter to Maan

Meanwhile,

Meera too ruined the first half of Maan's letter as accidently she dropped water on the letter

Maan had used ink pen to pen his feelings and the water successfully removed the traces of the initial part of the letter

Meera also used the same trick that Dev had used since she was sure that whater Maan wanted to tell Geet is still there in the letter

After rectifying her mistake Meera too folded the letter and placed it in a new envelope and started to wait for Geet

Meanwhile,

A man was walking silently to his destination

Adi: Arya Veerji yun muh modhkar kaha jaa rahe hai? [Arya Veerji (Brother) how can u ignore me and go away from me?]

He gulped his saliva and turned around to face him

Adi rushed in his direction and hugged him with all his heart

Adi: Arya Veerji aap yaha ho humne aapko kaha kaha nahi dhunda [Arya u r here we searched u almost everywhere]

A tear drop rolled down his cheek as he embraced Adi in a bone crushing hug

PRECAP: Maaneet read the letters😳

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Love-Piya




I PROMISE TO GIVE REGULAR UPDATES FROM TODAY. EVERY WEEK I WILL UPDATE THIS FF
Edited by piya- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res...
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Wow!maan alone lifted the jeep!!!
haye...me drooling...
Adi s maan's bro ya phir cousin???
But y they r away from each other...
ye dev aur meer ne kya ki...
they have destroyed the main part of the letter but unintentionally..
ab kya hoga babaji!!!
Superb one..Missed maaneet moments..
Edited by Remya_Pillai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update

dev as well as meera destroyed half of the letter hoping that the main part of it have'nt burn

suspicious about adi as he commented that Inhe toh hum ache se jaante haan

eagerly waiting for maaneet to read the letters

thanks for pm

bye

take care
Edited by angelic_cute - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update.
Loved it
thanks for updating this FF

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