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Suchi

@ChitraF

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Posted: 13 years ago

#231

It was nice update and beautiful ending.. loved it..

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#232

AArghh!Shyam😡..I hate him more when he goes 'khushiji'..God..I dont know when that day wil come wen Arnav wil beat him black blue.

I luvd dis SS..beautifully written.👍🏼

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Saadia

@saad2604

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Posted: 13 years ago

#233

nice ss
pls come up with more ss amd ff

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-JollyJabeen-

@-JollyJabeen-

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#234

This was absolutely amazing.

A total pleasure to read! Seriously i loved it.

The curiosity of what was going to happen next, The beauty of Arshi's relationship, Your SS captured everything the show is currently not showing😳

Totally loved it, Its brilliant. Sad to see it end though! I guess all good things come to an end😭

Please.. I was just gonna say "Please do update soon"😆 <-- If hopefully there are more parts *FingersCrossed*

Totally loved it, Your a brilliant writer! Thanks for the PM

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Stapleton

@Stapleton

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#235

nice ending...

thanks 4 d pm

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Downhill

@Downhill

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#236

simply brilliant.sorry my like button isnt working

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arshilover68

@arshilover68

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#237

Thank you Batool! It's awesome.

I think Arnav will shout at shyam and Anjali overhears. She misunderstands and shouts at Arnav.

Arnav dumbstruck goes to his room and Khushi consoles him and makes a plan to make Anjali aware of the truth. She tells Arnav to somehow get Anjali up to the terrace. There she asks shyam to meet her and when Anjali arives. She makes sure shyam is standing in such a way that he doesn't see anjali and she asks him "Shyamji I realised I loved you when I saw Arnavji talking so rudely to you, I love you very much Shyamji. Do you also love me?"

Shyam asks "Yes, Khushiji. I love you more than my life. "

Anjali faints after uttering a soft, teary "Kya?" and faints into Arnav's arms.

Then they all arrest Shyam and put him in jail and make sure he goes to a mental asylum afterwards. Some good old guy falls for Anjali and marries and then when she has a child everybody lives happily ever after.

How's that?

Just a thought...

Anyway It's a wonderful ss! I can't wait for the Updates of Teenage love and We are together!!!!

Thank you Batool! Love ur Os!

All the best for your future os!

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Glimmer

@Glimmer

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#238

Amazing ending !!!!! Loved it!!!!!
Glad that the misunderstanding was solved !!!!!!
Shyam really got the shock of a lifetime !!!!!!
Loved the last part !!!!!! It was simply awesome !!!!!!
Thnx sooo much for the pm !!!