UNTOLD SCANDAL(RT-MC FF)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hello friends,
I am posting the character-sketch of an ff written by me. Please have pity on me if its too bad as this is my first attempt at writing... It has been a while since i wrote it... i may change little things in this one... lets see if u like it😊

UNTOLD SCANDAL

The story is based in a small town, Udaynagar. Though system of kingship has ended long ago, the power of the royal family in this town hasn't diminished.


CHARACTER-SKETCH of the members of the royal family

Aryan Shekhawat- (played by Rajat Tokas)an extremely handsome young prince of Udaynagar. Not only looks, he has an outstanding personality, full of life. He is a graduate from oxford university, London. He loves his family and especially his brother Dhiren. But he is too mischievous to be handled by his brother. He is quite impulsive and is well known for his little storage of patience. He is extremely brave and excellent at sword fighting. He and Dhiren had topped in his course. He is an expert at many sports too like basball,football etc. but he loves sword fighting that he and his brothers were taught at their palace in India.



Dhiren Shekhawat(Vikrant)- a handsome prince and Aryan's cousin. He has an unusual blend of kindness, dignity, and maturity in his imposing personality. He too loves his brother Aryan more than anyone. He is also a graduate from oxford university, London. He is more inclined towards academics but enjoys playing the various games loved by his brother.



Saket Shekhawat( agni of dv)- cousin of Aryan and Dhiren. He is always jealous of them but tries to cover his inner feelings. He is a puppet of his father's commands.


Uday Shekhawat- father of Dhiren and a nominal king of Udaynagar. He is essentially kind hearted person but is too proud of the legacy of bravery and power from his ancestors.

Jaimal Shekhawat- father of Saket. He is step brother of Uday. He hates Uday and his whole family but never shows his contempt through his behavior. He often plots against Uday and the two princes but has succeeded in maintaining a trustworthy impression on his brother.

Nivriti- Aryan's mother. Her whole world revolves around her son. Her top most and only priority is her much loved son.

Rukmani- Dhiren's mother. A kind hearted and a broad minded queen of Udaynagar.

other characters introduced later:

Tarun, Dhiren and Aryan's old friend:


she is Charvi:



she is Sia:


Disha, Sia's friend:


I will post other characters of the story as they appear in further chapters.
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CHAPTER 1

CHAPTER 1
A black brand new BMW was storming on the highway under the scorching sun. It was followed by a mild storm of dust due to the sand along the road. The afternoons are always hot in Rajasthan but the heat that day was almost unbearable. The surroundings were deserted. The land around was barren and had thorny bushes at large distances as the only instance of life. There was extreme heat outside but it was cool and pleasant in the car due to the air conditioner.
A skinny guy spoke relaxing in the back seat, " oh! this is it. I love my birth place. Its traditions, the atmosphere and everything! At the airport I had almost decided of traveling by a jeep to enjoy the natural beauty of my land." He sighed longingly.
" You shouldn't have come with us then, Saket", a handsome guy beside the driver's seat said with raised eyebrows.
A jeep came into view, far in front of the road. The guy on the driver's seat pressed the accelerator and zoomed off the car only to stop after overtaking the jeep.
"What are you doing, Aryan", Saket shrieked almost colliding with the front seat due to the sudden jerk.
"Fulfilling your wish", Aryan said coolly.
Dhiren smiled meaningfully at the mischief in his brother's eyes.
The front glass of the car slid down. "Could you please accommodate our brother", Arayan said pointing back to Saket with his thumb. The jeep driver looked puzzled. It wasn't hard for him to recognize the young men in the splendid car. "Actually my brother has a deep rooted wish of traveling by your jeep today, right Saket?"
Saket looked bewildered. He was simply flaunting the love for his land. He surely didn't mean it. Only a fool could wish to travel in an open jeep with hitting harsh wind under the scorching sun at mid noon! He started timidly, "Yes, but - "
"Fine. So just get going now", Dhiren snapped in between.
"Yes, why not kuwar? I'll be honoured", the man offered bowing his head.
Saket was helpless. Cursing himself and his 'rascal brothers', he muttered something inaudible and reluctantly stepped out of the air conditioned car. Which damn spirit had possessed him when he was uttering those ominous words of his love of natural beauty in front of these two demons?
"Enjoy the pleasant weather, bro", Dhiren said ironically. Shaking off his own thoughts, Saket looked at them with pure hatred in his eyes and a forced smile on his lips.
"And just let us know about any of your similar wishes. You see, we can't bear your disappointment", saying this, Aryan zoomed off the car leaving behind a boiling guy in the midst of storm of dust.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks dear 4 starting new rtmc ff

its amazing dear
loved it thoroughly
like the character sketch

so aryan n chavi is new couple
loved the part

our aryan is so cool
yeh aryan,dhiren or saket ko dekhkar dv ki yaad aa gyi

now i guess it that ki yeh ff bhot interesting hone wala h

bt pls pls cont soon
im eagerly waiting 4 next part
n pls update perfect couple
missed it badly yr

update soon
thanx 4 pm
love u n ur story
muahhh
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowie dowie...
dv ki yaad aa gayi by god,

amazing charaters...
and ur desco. is already damn fantastic.

loved readiong prt 1-
aryan n dhiren wer damn good,
poor saket.

charvi- cool name
but wats the meaning can u tell??

thnx for starting a new ff.

plz do ud prefect couple too.

ud soon.

tc.
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey samiksha ...hw r u?

thanx for starting a new rtmc ff...
luved it...awesome charater sketch...
luv d duos entry...
eagerly waiting for d nxt...
n plzz ud perfect couple...
ud soon
luv u ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi sami

good to see your pm after such a long time...nice part...do cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice character sketch!!!!
loved mischievous brothers prank😉😉😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Samiksha u r back!!!!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊

So many new RTMC FF's nd SS's are coming nd no1 is adding me intheir PM list 😭 😭 😭

But I have read this story of urs on RTW & mentioned the same in our fav. story The Perfect Couple 😃 😃 😃

isse yaad aaya tum The Perfect Couple ko kab update kar rahi ho?????????? 😕 😕 😕 plzzz jaldi se update karo na use i m dying to know abt their GOA trip...


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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow one more...🥳...nice...👏
well the character sketch is really very nice...n characters are really just too perfect...
n first chapter...poor saket...next time think befor saying anything...😆
these brother were never going to leave you...😉
thanx for the pm...
continue soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new ff..

n really interesting start..

liked it alot..

great one..

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

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