ARHI FF: Dive to the Dark [LAST Chapter-p.98]

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#531

Tip number 1, never ever ever underestimate your opponent.

I can totally imagine how this line would be delivered. Background music included.

Cool update.

Must say that after reading your little teasing beginning, I have such a charming picture of you in my mind. You must be a delight to all your friends and family---and now readers!

Maya

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Roshni

@rashika

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#532

OMG! Arnav is superb in this chapter please update soon.

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desisweetheart9

@desisweetheart9

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#533

Thanks for the PM. Awesome the way Arnav took care of Shyam. He is brave. Kissing Khushi at such a tense time.

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

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Posted: 13 years ago

#534

Nice lip lock :-) and Arnav made sure there would be only one bullet in Shyam's gun? Wow! And that bullet went into Lavanya... who is fighting for her life... Arnav is so clever :-)

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Aashifa

@curledup

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#535

ahahha! the beginning simply cracked me up! I was like did I miss something? but I didn't 🤣 and coming to the update, we have ASR? wooott wooot! this update was all Arnav really! I loved it, the effectiveness of bringing back Arnav was really good, glad to see him back to the man he is, lion-hearted, huge ego, ASR! <3 <3 love it! :D Do continue when you can :D Can't wait to see Shyam suffering! stupid asshole!

-Aashifa

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@PersieV

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#536

The beginning bit caught me out I was like huh eh whats going on then I saw that you were teasing us!!

To the update go on Arnav show Shyam that Khushi is yours!!

Boy he is almight ASR!! Shyam is trapped now!!!

Can't wait for the next updatee

Love youuu

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rashgirl000

@rashgirl000

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#537

oi not fair. crying like a 2 yr old. i'm ranting and raving after reading the foot note

back to reality. damn your are too good. and mean a cliff hanger. that's typical. thank god ASR uses his brain most of the time i so love it.. what happened to la. will she survive. and what will happen to shyam. will ASR kill him. and i really loved the kiss scene. but seriously they are making out at such a situation. who cares any way. loved the update. thanks for the pm.