AFTERMATH - RTMC SS - Part VI pg 15 *Completed* - Page 15

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice end...

poor him was sulking in her absence...n worked overtime...

well now..no more distance.. not more than 3 days at least...😆

enjoyed reading this ss...

thnx for PM...

n sorry for the late comment...

hopefully first nahi toh last to aa hi gayi...😛😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

nice end...


poor him was sulking in her absence...n worked overtime...

well now..no more distance.. not more than 3 days at least...😆

enjoyed reading this ss...

thnx for PM...

n sorry for the late comment...

hopefully first nahi toh last to aa hi gayi...😛😆

Hi di!
Main itne dinon se soch rahi thi ki meri topper di kahan gayi??? Finally u r here...😆
Glad dat u enjoyed the SS
Thx for reading and commenting
Lov u...😃
Edited by glossyglassy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
looks like i just made a record in commenting last,huh?😆...

yeah...me too think prologue thingy is always cool and i love to use it to confuse people😆...
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part-1

veer is such a mess...just like any other man...
spending his sunday idly proving himself worthless😕...
and he thought anu is his hallucination...😆
and just like every man he's so untidy...a week's laundry...😆

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part-2

thank god!!! at least he spared the kitchen from his little calamity...
he's a sweet baby😆...even neighbours love to baby him😆...
and he can be so cheesy sometimes...decietful love😆...

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res


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Posted: 13 years ago
prologue really generates a nice scenario
loved the she goes into past to remember
like a movie...cool



part1
poor veer missing his wifey
epl gave some relief
but then to in ad breaks missing annaya.aww
thats shows his love
sports sideline karke wifey ko yaad karna. acche pati ki nishani hai
but hallunination haila
so he kicked the thought as match got interesting
but again the sound

there she was his wifey after 7 days ...furious
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part 2

mayday mayday mayday

u r ship gonna sank
wifey here 4 real n she is
angry
irate n
livid
buckle up dude to face her fury unless u woo her first

but even after romantic session
u gotta clean the room
so get 2 work veer
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i must say the martial nok jhok of VeeNya is growing on me
i adore them
keep it up


Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pranita1202

prologue really generates a nice scenario
loved the she goes into past to remember
like a movie...cool
i too think so...it seems really cool..😊


part1
poor veer missing his wifey
epl gave some relief
but then to in ad breaks missing annaya.aww
thats shows his love
sports sideline karke wifey ko yaad karna. acche pati ki nishani hai
but hallunination haila
so he kicked the thought as match got interesting
but again the sound

there she was his wifey after 7 days ...furious
================================================

part 2

mayday mayday mayday

u r ship gonna sank
wifey here 4 real n she is
angry
irate n
livid
buckle up dude to face her fury unless u woo her first
haha...i loved the words u used to desc Ananya😆

but even after romantic session
u gotta clean the room
so get 2 work veer
================================================

i must they the martial nok jhok of VeeNya is growing on me
i adore them
keep it up
thanx for such a lovely comment...bohot dinon baad itna pyaara comment padha
Waiting for ur comments on the rest of the parts
Thx for the encouragement
Lov u...😃


Edited by glossyglassy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

part 3
do it veer ,just do it quitely now

be prepare to face u r wife's wrath

u urself unleashed it

who on earth messes that house , calls on 'others' in his wife's absent
ok if u did
atleast wud have cleaned after having the jammy(pajama) party with ur jamawda of friends
hope thats the case the "others" r just simply others
else i will defo hit u wid the can's eventhough ur wife will choose the third option


wow kalyug aa gaya in a nice way shaadi ke baad mommy ka ghar bete ke liye paraya hua. hehe he

veer seriously u shud have learned some household skills from mommy
buy NO whenever she entrusted some work on u; just dump it on dharam's head

now see ur wifey will say ''''"kuch nahi sikhaya mommy n bro ne; bas bhej diya"'''''

damn it veer "sasural" aane se pehle "maike"kuch to sikna tha
but no . total useless.
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after annaya's dhamki only u came 2 ur senses
now just clean up fast
certainly not expecting spic n span cleaning from u given u r past record
just do u r best
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enough of my scolding veer
annaya i know he all the things i mentioned

but jaisa bhi hai; hai tumhara

u give him que
then spoilt the moment. naa not done gal
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loved the covo
veer is certainly not gonna change
but why to change him
we love him with all his flaws n qualities

Edited by pranita1202 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pranita1202


part 3
do it veer ,just do it quitely now

be prepare to face u r wife's wrath

u urself unleashed it

who on earth messes that house , calls on 'others' in his wife's absent
ok if u did
atleast wud have cleaned after having the jammy(pajama) party with ur jamawda of friends
hope thats the case the "others" r just simply others
else i will defo hit u wid the can's eventhough ur wife will choose the third option don't worry...veer is a very patnivrata pati😉😆


wow kalyug aa gaya in a nice way shaadi ke baad mommy ka ghar bete ke liye paraya hua. hehe he i just love the idea that something like this could happen 😃

veer seriously u shud have learned some household skills from mommy
buy NO whenever she entrusted some work on u; just dump it on dharam's head

now see ur wifey will say ''''"kuch nahi sikhaya mommy n bro ne; bas bhej diya"'''''

damn it veer "sasural" aane se pehle "maike"kuch to sikna tha
but no . total useless.
haha...really funny comment 🤣
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after annaya's dhamki only u came 2 ur senses
now just clean up fast
certainly not expecting spic n span cleaning from u given u r past record
just do u r best Veer thanks you for ur kind wishes 😛😃
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enough of my scolding veer
annaya i know he all the things i mentioned

but jaisa bhi hai; hai tumhara

u give him que
then spoilt the moment. naa not done gal
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loved the covo
veer is certainly not gonna change
but why to change him
we love him with all his flaws n qualities absolutely!😃
Thanx for the luvly comment
Luv u...

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Posted: 13 years ago

saachhi, aise tho sirf prani di ka hi dimaag kaam kr sakta h...

kya revolution layengi prani di...

sacchi..
pati aapne sasuraal jaya karenge 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanx 4 d pm dear...Ive read dis long before...bt was not registered at dat time...ur wrting skill is amazing n superb...hav enjoyed it whole heartedly...always love 2 imagine our dream couple(RTMC) as husband wife...hope u will write more ss...thank u vry much once again.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: rtmclover

thanx 4 d pm dear...Ive read dis long before...bt was not registered at dat time...ur wrting skill is amazing n superb...hav enjoyed it whole heartedly...always love 2 imagine our dream couple(RTMC) as husband wife...hope u will write more ss...thank u vry much once again.

Hi dear!
Oh so u wer a silent reader...I too was at one time
Thanks for all the appreciation😳
Glad u enjoyed the story😃
Hope you'll like Payback and Proposal also😊
Lov u...😃
Edited by glossyglassy - 13 years ago

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