Facing the truth (Kriyaansh FF) ch10 pg135 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ch.krati0713

Awesome Concept..

Loved it!
n Karan Wahi as Abhimanyu..Wowww..! 😛
The Cutest Brother-Sister in World..lol 😆
PM me whenever You Update Next 😊


Thx dear... Glad u liked it

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shenz_kriyaansh

Abhimanyu none other than Karan Wahi

thats awesum😊


Thx dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nups96

continue nd pm me wenevr u update
nd do giv me d link of ur odr ff olso...m new on if


Thx for liking this FF dear

Add me in ur buddylist for pms

And sorry im discontinuing that SS
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 3

Kriyas room

Abh - So when are u going to join the college

Kriya - umm i dont know

Abh - why? Kriya kya hua hai... tu badal gayi hai... I knew my twin the best...u were never like this...

Kriya was on the verge of tears... she didnt controlled them now and let them come out of her beautiful eyes...

Abhimanu pushed her into a hug...

Abh - hey K what happen? why r u crying? pls dont common stop it... u know these tears r small beautiful pearls and u dont have any right to waste them got it... now smile pls... and tell me what happen...

Kriya told him everything... how her mother got to know about her dancing, footloose elimns, rey... and how she made her promise to go away from her dil and dance...

Abh - Gosh kriya itna sab kuch khud seh rahi ho!!!! main abhi mom se baat karta hun...

K - nahi abhi nahi pls...

Abh - no im not gonna listen to u... who is she to take decisions of ur life

K - abhi pls...

Abh - no im not gonna listen...

Abhi left from there and went to smriti...

Abhi - aap aisa kyun kar rahi han uske saath?

Smriti turned aroundand spoke - what r u talking about beta?

She spoke normally as she knew he dont feel anything for her...

Abhi - oh please...dont behave like this infront of me ok? aapko apni beti ke aansun, uski khushi wagarah se kuch farak nahi padhta... oh wait a min... aapko apne aalava kisi aur ki toh parva hai hi nahi... u know what? i live all alone here... im taking her with me... i bet dad wont mind to pay for her living too... after all u and dad dont have any difference... you both just care for ur ownself...

He left smritis room and smriti burst out crying...

Abhimanu went to Kriya's room

Abhi - pack ur bags

K - abhi what r u saying?

Abhi - I said pack ur bags right now!!!!

Kriya were having tears in her eyes still... Abhi went to her and hugged her very tightly...

Abhi - I cant bear to see this condition of urs... you r coming with me...

K - but dad???

Abhi - i live all alone... pls wont u do this for me?

K - abhi but maa?

Abhi - hell K its enough... dont u get it right now even... neither she nor dad care for us... if they would have cared for us would they be living seperately? tell me?

K nod her head in disagreement...

Abhi - wouldnt dad be living with me, caring for me?

She again nod her head in disagreement...

Abhi - wouldnt u b with rey and ur friends now

She again nodded her head in disagreement...

Abhi - heres ur answer K... they dont care for us...

Abhi wiped her tears and said - pls...

K - ok... only if u wont disturb me a lot

Abhi - hmm ok but i should not see this beautiful pearls in ut eyes again got it?

K nodded her head in agreement

Precap - Smriti tried to stop Kriya...
Karan Malik returns but not in St. louis
2 new characters
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wen r u gonna update nxt????
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow dear its too awsummm
n brother sister relation amazing...maza ayega...pls update asap
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shenz_kriyaansh

wen r u gonna update nxt????


by nxt week... my exams r going on will try to do it by sunday but in case i wont b able to then i will update by nxt week
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shaffy_arsha

wow dear its too awsummm
n brother sister relation amazing...maza ayega...pls update asap


thanx dear... glad u liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowieee...
itz soo...good...
hey bhagwan...meri dictionery k toh words kam pad jayege ff ki tareef karte karte,...
waiting eagerly 4 the next part...
thnx 4 pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 3 updated that too befor time will do pms later

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