Facing the truth (Kriyaansh FF) ch10 pg135 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyakreya

Chapter 3

Kriyas room

Abh - So when are u going to join the college

Kriya - umm i dont know

Abh - why? Kriya kya hua hai... tu badal gayi hai... I knew my twin the best...u were never like this...

Kriya was on the verge of tears... she didnt controlled them now and let them come out of her beautiful eyes...

Abhimanu pushed her into a hug...

Abh - hey K what happen? why r u crying? pls dont common stop it... u know these tears r small beautiful pearls and u dont have any right to waste them got it... now smile pls... and tell me what happen...

Kriya told him everything... how her mother got to know about her dancing, footloose elimns, rey... and how she made her promise to go away from her dil and dance...

Abh - Gosh kriya itna sab kuch khud seh rahi ho!!!! main abhi mom se baat karta hun...

K - nahi abhi nahi pls...

Abh - no im not gonna listen to u... who is she to take decisions of ur life

K - abhi pls...

Abh - no im not gonna listen...

Abhi left from there and went to smriti...

Abhi - aap aisa kyun kar rahi han uske saath?

Smriti turned aroundand spoke - what r u talking about beta?

She spoke normally as she knew he dont feel anything for her...

Abhi - oh please...dont behave like this infront of me ok? aapko apni beti ke aansun, uski khushi wagarah se kuch farak nahi padhta... oh wait a min... aapko apne aalava kisi aur ki toh parva hai hi nahi... u know what? i live all alone here... im taking her with me... i bet dad wont mind to pay for her living too... after all u and dad dont have any difference... you both just care for ur ownself...

He left smritis room and smriti burst out crying...

Abhimanu went to Kriya's room

Abhi - pack ur bags

K - abhi what r u saying?

Abhi - I said pack ur bags right now!!!!

Kriya were having tears in her eyes still... Abhi went to her and hugged her very tightly...

Abhi - I cant bear to see this condition of urs... you r coming with me...

K - but dad???

Abhi - i live all alone... pls wont u do this for me?

K - abhi but maa?

Abhi - hell K its enough... dont u get it right now even... neither she nor dad care for us... if they would have cared for us would they be living seperately? tell me?

K nod her head in disagreement...

Abhi - wouldnt dad be living with me, caring for me?

She again nod her head in disagreement...

Abhi - wouldnt u b with rey and ur friends now

She again nodded her head in disagreement...

Abhi - heres ur answer K... they dont care for us...

Abhi wiped her tears and said - pls...

K - ok... only if u wont disturb me a lot

Abhi - hmm ok but i should not see this beautiful pearls in ut eyes again got it?

K nodded her head in agreement



i loved ur update.
i was not getting a perfect word to express my feeling
u have done amazing job loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update abhy.
It was lovely one.
Thanks for pm.
update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
well dear dont call me di as it looks so shareef and i m nt that...
so call me nimmi... i will love if u did it :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear!!
loved it !!
well that was really gud..
update soon
and thx for the PM :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...par mereko iss baar pm nhi mila :( :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
woww i cant wait please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey dat was awsumm...loved it
n nw kriya is gng to stay wid her bro bt wht will hpn wid smriti den...pls update asap
n my lyk button is nt woking i dn't knw whts da pblm wid that
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update:):):)
Thanx for d pm:):)
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Posted: 13 years ago
i cant find the like button on the chapter as the page is not right but thanks for the pm the update was wonderful i loved it thanks for teh pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Note - Guys my FA's r gonna end on this friday so will update after that... sorry cant update till then

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