ARHI OS: A dreamless sleep

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deepterence

@deepterence

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

really needed tissues..to wipe out my tears...gd one...

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Divya

@MeraCheekuVirat

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Awww. i really cried in the end. i cn't see both of them suffer. :(

thnx a ton for the pm. =D

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@Chocoangel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

aww..she died 😭..super sad..

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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Damn... Todays episode made me cry ... n now reading this, i cried for the second time today. Beautiful OS.. :)

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Preeti

@Preeti.xo

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Oh my this is great!

Simply loved it but how cud she die? She just can't she s a fighter and I'm sure she will resurface.

Please continue it If possible x

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Sharmila

@ongongong

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

So sad and heart touching!

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kushiasr26

@kushiasr26

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

no kushi cant die like tht she is a fighter

pls make another part and bring kushi back plzzz

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

U made my heart bleed...emotions were portrayed beautifully.

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

No way! This cant happen! 😭

I was so hoping might be Kushi would go away from him and led a happily ever after with someone else! Nothing like this!! No!!!

The last para where she snuggled into Arnav's embrace, OMG😭

Thanks for the PM dear!

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

i have so many times imagined Arnav walking inside the room and finding evrything gone .. the pink bedsheet, the chimes, the poster .. and also her going back to the poolside herself!

it was really heart-wrenching dear .. though i know she would never do it .. she is a fighter and she will survive

really well-written :)

PS: I came back to read it again and feel all lumy! .. its really good :)

Edited by Omoraboti - 13 years ago