ARHI OS: A dreamless sleep - Page 9

Originally posted by: 18shabbo

i feel like a cold hearted "female dog" not to have cried reading it coz its tough for me to shed tears but fish!! you did chock up my throat. aww thanks for telling me how you reacted.😳

We know Khushi wudnt do anything like that but for all Greek gods i wish she does a little something...
its like that episode where after the whole Lucknow ramp rage they show Khushi closing the room taking out oil n then lighting a match stick...later going on to make jalebies...
but this time i just want this to really go down to the nasty lane of sadism n gloominess. yep everyone wants some angst now and again. i totally dig you.😆

Though i wudnt support suicide...murder being easier and more adventurous(n well its better in argumentation with God) but fiction allows it!!! *yep agree*😊

I want Arnav to wail like that...
when Khushi will knw the real reason of their marriage one cant imagine the level of her grief...
n for that i want Arnav to feel the pain of what his misjudgement and mistrust did to Khushi. angst with arnav suffering is what is getting everyone through these days.

it was just brilliant Zara. cheers😳

Hi Zara!😊

i'm reviewing after so long, that you probably don't even remember me!

I'm VERY sorry for that! i have exams at the end of may so i've been going through a hell of exams and revision tests and all that crap. so, i'm really sorry for not getting a chance to read Price of Freedom!

really, you're amazing for still keeping me in the PM list, i really don't think i deserve to still be in there!😒

but i took a break and read this OS and hell, i sure am glad that i did! 😊

the scene is awesome! the whole concept of khushi doing this has been forming in the back of my mind every time arnav starts acting like a blood , and i couldn't have pictured it better!👍🏼

honestly, this isn't the first time you've taken what i wanna see happening and converted it into an awesome piece of writing that makes you feel every emotion-- really!😃

every time arnav does something cruel, i feel like i've been slapped in the face, every time khushi's sad i can feel tears brimming i my eyes and i always give a sad smile when your khushi does sweet things when she's broken..😭

and it's amazing, really! the power you have.. you way you use your words, it incredible and makes you an awesome writer!

and BTW, i don't think this can never happen.. i mean, i know khushi is an incredibly strong person and all, but honestly, the way arnav lashes out at her sometimes... it's going to be all too much one day, it has to be.😕

i can't help praying that one day the CV's will come across your writing garden😍 and finally realise that maybe they can have better twists in IPKKND than showing arnav a piece of shyaam everytime he starts getting comfy with khushi! 😡

keep writing and never stop providing us readers with a nice cool, refreshing pice of typing that can totally make our day!!😊😳

Originally posted by: misslaugheasily

Hi Zara!😊 *arms crossed * who are you?😆

i'm reviewing after so long, that you probably don't even remember me! no i dont😆

I'm VERY sorry for that! i have exams at the end of may so i've been going through a hell of exams and revision tests and all that crap. so, i'm really sorry for not getting a chance to read Price of Freedom!ohhh ok. forgiven!😊 i missed you. i thought you ditched me😭

really, you're amazing for still keeping me in the PM list, i really don't think i deserve to still be in there!😒 no worries. as long as you do read them when you get the time.😊

but i took a break and read this OS and hell, i sure am glad that i did! 😊 woohoo!

the scene is awesome! the whole concept of khushi doing this has been forming in the back of my mind every time arnav starts acting like a blood , and i couldn't have pictured it better!👍🏼 yay!

honestly, this isn't the first time you've taken what i wanna see happening and converted it into an awesome piece of writing that makes you feel every emotion-- really!😃 *blush* thank you very much!

every time arnav does something cruel, i feel like i've been slapped in the face, every time khushi's sad i can feel tears brimming i my eyes and i always give a sad smile when your khushi does sweet things when she's broken..😭 everyone feels the same😭

and it's amazing, really! the power you have.. you way you use your words, it incredible and makes you an awesome writer! its nothing really, bt glad you enjoyed it.

and BTW, i don't think this can never happen.. i mean, i know khushi is an incredibly strong person and all, but honestly, the way arnav lashes out at her sometimes... it's going to be all too much one day, it has to be.😕 i dont think the cvs wud do this cuz of khushis character,but she may accidently put her life on the line or purposely for someone elses benefit,like saving someones life.

i can't help praying that one day the CV's will come across your writing garden😍 and finally realise that maybe they can have better twists in IPKKND than showing arnav a piece of shyaam everytime he starts getting comfy with khushi! 😡 LOL

keep writing and never stop providing us readers with a nice cool, refreshing pice of typing that can totally make our day!!😊😳awww cheers!