ARHI OS: A dreamless sleep

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kritika

@Kritianya

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Superb os
u realy made me cry

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Zania

@zaniax

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

omg! tht was heart wrenching..u made me cry😭

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noreen

@noreen

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

gosh that was painfully sad!!!!

the tears were flowing after reading this plz make her survive this !!!thnks

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SANDY

@.Sandy.

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

beautiful os zara.
simply beautiful i dnt have words to explain how much i liked it.
i wish he could stirr in his sleep and safe his love.
its quiet hard when the love of ur life turn his back on u. leave u alone to regret the moment u loved him. to regret giving ur heart to such a cruel person who in return dnt trust u and only shower pain hurts upon you

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Neema

@N33MA

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Hope this doesn't happen in the show too sad , reading his and already bursting into tears dunno wat will happen if ... Cant complete it ! Anyway loved how you managed to bring out the emotion and written so perfectly and onto the point! Well done :) ps I always love your writing

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AnnieARS

@AnnieARS

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

You made me cry!! It was amazing!!

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SanzBarbie

@SanzBarbie

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

no Khushi cant die like that.. i was crying so hard 😭
pls make another part where Khushi will be back, she is a fighter, she cant die 😭
and Pls add me to ur PM list.. u write so emotional..