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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
do continue soon sanjana
cant wait to read more
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Sanju!! 🤗 OMG, dear this is brilliant. I fell in love with your writing all over again. 😃 I read something written by you after a while and this reminded me why I used to truly enjoy reading what you write. This was so beautifully and articulately written. You always have this very uncanny way of keeping the readers hanging on and wanting and waiting for more. I already cannot wait for the next update. 😆 Thanks dear for the PM, otherwise I might have missed this.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#23
Sanjana! that was an amazing start!!! will u continue it to the next part soon? i'm really hooked to this..i have a fleeting idea in my head as to what will happen so i'm all the more anxious to know if my guess of correct!!
update soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys! You will only get short updates for this, as I am pretty busy nowadays! plus, short updates will keep me writing and keep you guessing!😉 Do leave comments and click like if you liked it or found it intriguing or whatever else! Looking forward to some responses! Happy reading!
- Chapter 1 -
Thunder lashed in the sky, followed soon after with flashes of lightning. A storm would soon be approaching.
He wanted to forget his pain. To forget the deceiving woman he had once loved. But the more he tried to forget, the more his heart ached.
Arnav's head was pounding. Every inch of his body pleaded for him to stop drinking.
But he would listen to no one tonight. Not even himself.
He placed the bottle to his lips, swallowing the liquor in mouthfulls.
17 long years.
It had been 17 long years since he had felt any pain remotely close to the heartache he felt now.
Frightening memories of his parents' abandonment filled his mind. And although he knew it wasn't possible, he felt his heart break a little bit more.
Maa... Papa... I miss you... Why did you leave me...? I want to be with you...
For the first time in a long time, Arnav felt weak...helpless... 17 years had been time enough for him to build up a barrier around himself. He had buried his feelings so deep within himself that it was difficult even for himself to dig them out.
That was before he had met Kiran.

He sighed.
He couldn't deny that Kiran had brought a change in him. He felt free around her. He was able to let himself loose. Express himself. And as he slowly became involved with Kiran, that hard, cold barrier had broken.
And now, he felt like the weak, innocent child that he had been years ago.
The swirl of liquor burned as it washed down his throat.
The more he drank, the more it hurt. He felt dizzy. Sick.
But he knew he couldn't stop the car. He could barely tell apart the accelorator from the brake.
So tired... So unbelievably tired...
He closed his eyes.
It was only for an instant.
But an instant was plenty time to destroy his life.
An ear-piercing scream and the splatter of blood on the windshield.
They were the last things he had time to register before collapsing into a much needed sleep.
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So hope you like that! Do click like if you liked it and leave comments!
Edited by ---Pari--- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
woah. that was intense. U HAVE TO CONTINUE. I REPEAT U HAVE TO CONTINUE!!!!!! that was amaaazzinnng. i love the way the story is starting upp :)))) 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26

Nice start!! Very dramatic. Please continue. can't wait to read whah happens next.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was insanely intriguing, so please do continue soon, and PM me when you do! Loved it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
Hi sanjana!
I love all this mystery and suspense so far!
Do continue soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
This is great.. Fantastic writing.. Please could you PM me when you update? Would love to read more.. Thanks! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
This is amazing👍🏼 do continue and plz pm me.

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