- ArHi OS - Answered Prayers

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi guys! Sanjana here! Had this sudden spark of an idea! And needed to pen it down! This will probably be just a couple of parts, but I needed to write it! I've updated the prologue below! Do tell me if you want me to continue! Thanks a ton!
Sanju
- Prologue -
The rain pounded ferociously onto the dark streets of Mumbai.
Mumbai.
The place where dreams came true. Or so he had heard. Images of his fiance's betrayal swam in his mind, destroying any signs of solace that he may have had. He fought back the tears. He was Arnav Singh Raizada. He didn't cry. He wouldn't cry.
He reached for the bottle of liquor beside him.
His only remaining companion. At least it would remain faithful to its owner. He gulped the beer down in quick swallows trying, in vain, to drown his pain and anguish alongside it.
The windshield wipers were working in full force. He couldn't see a thing.
Kiran had insisted that he stay the night, apologizing profusely for her betrayal.
As if that would do any good.
A new kind of bitterness flooded over him. She had given him a scar that would never be healed.
Love. It was painful. He knew the instant he had fallen for her that it was wrong. Love was not meant for a guy like him. And perhaps, after this incident, he would never be able to love again. She had killed him.
For a brief moment, he wondered if she knew how much she had hurt him. But he concluded that she couldn't possibly know. The pain was too deep. No one would understand. Definately not Kiran.
He winced. Even thinking about her name was painful.
He trained his eyes on the road, groggily. His eyes were closing on what seemed to be their own accord. Too much alcohol.
He felt dizzy...sleepy... But an odd sense of fear admonished him to focus. To stay awake. And it was with this fear that he continued along the road.
But it was late. Past midnight. The rain was pelting down harder each second, blurring his vision more than it was already. He couldn't see. He couldn't concentrate. All he wanted to do was close his eyes. Forget his pain. Forget Kiran. Forget life itself.
The car swerved. Slowly. Mildly at first. But a few more sips of liquor changed that. He could no longer keep his car under control.
He was just too tired... exhausted.
A few seconds. He thought. A few seconds of sleep couldn't possibly hurt.
His thoughts became slurred.
Little did he know, that the decision he made next would change his world forever.
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Do tell if you want me to continue! Only people in my buddy list will be pmed! :) So if you want me to continue, please add me!!!! Thanks a lot!
Looking forward to comments!
Lots of love,
Sanju
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-Garima- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sanjana, this was amazing!

The prologue was extremely intriguing, can't wait to read more! (: Continue soon!

--Garima
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awesome

continue it plz

and if possible plz pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start to the story. Waiting for more. update soon.
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Interesting start
Cant wait to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsome start.
Pls pm me next time.
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Waiting for the next part dear.
Cont. Soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sanju! I can't wait for the next part! The prologue is so intrresting nd intriguing! Plz pm me next part I will budy you :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i like the starting and would love if you send me pm's for the updates and i hope to see a message in my inbox for this story!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing Start :) 😳

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