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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: glossyglassy

interestng concept...plz pm me wen u upd8 nxt...continue soon..



Originally posted by: pratsy

omg

i loved it yar

so interesting



Originally posted by: Radhikerani

Awesome Concept !!!! Would Love To Read It !!!!!!!!!




thnkuu guyz 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: sparksfly

woww...rtmc ff !!🥳

congoz di !! 🥳
reincarnation ...i luv dis concept !!! ⭐️
vo mile the rox !! n dis will 2 !!
luv ur wrthng di...ur fabulus !!
unki story mein bohut tragedy hai !!! bechare...😭
but kya pyaar hai...👏
desert mein nange paon...parchd lips...but sagar kehena nahin choda...even sagar uske paagalon ki tarah dhund raha hai...ganga pukarte ...😍
dis is wat i luv abt dat era...kitna pure ,beautiful ,soulful pyaar tha... u r ffs recreate dis feelng...😍
do continue soon...n do pm me...




Originally posted by: Freethinker

very nice...i read one of these tales sassi punnu...well the concept is good...waiting for the next part... pls continue soon...




thnku

@dhawni
yes its sassi punnu's story 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: anu93

Wow! New RT-MC ff😃...Congo !

Nice plot👍🏼...Waiting for ur update



Originally posted by: chand1234

wowww ji...😃 Congo Shongo on ur new ff...👏👏 mast chrctrs nd plot...👍🏼

waiting fr updts..:)



Originally posted by: polly_03

@ khushi :

congratulations on starting your new FF, teri creativity ki toh daat deni padhegi, pata nahi kaise itne saare FFs likhti hai tu⭐️ !! anywayz, loved reading the research work on reincarnation and the prologue, update soon and keep pming !!😊



Originally posted by: SonaliDhone

Thanx dear for starting New FF on MURAT

loved it
loved their characters
plzz continue soon




thnku guyz 😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: jyoti_l

Congrats on the new ff...


loved the intro n the plot...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...



Originally posted by: ridzzi

di this is for u n for our ganga n sagar...🤗


parvat se alhad albeli,
nikali amrit ki ek dhara...
dur kahi pyasi lehron ne,
us nadiyan ka naam pukara...
sun kar bawari aisi bhagi,
preet ki jaise barkha lagi...
GANGA se SAGAR ka sangam,
rok na payega jag sara...
sangam pyara,sangam pyara,sangam pyara...sangam pyara...😍



Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia

Wow Khushi...


Another FF...

The character intro was good and the description beautiful...!!!
Interesting story... cont soon... and thanks for the pm..



Originally posted by: shruja

thanks for starting new RTMC ff
nice start!!



thnkuuu guyz

@riddziii
i love the lines 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@rashu
@sparky

thnkuuu sweeties

@gul
awww tu meri inni tareef na kiya kar
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
Part 1



Years Back In Sindh...

Raja udayraaj... he was very happy... after years his wife is expecting...
As time passes she deliever a princess, so beautiful , it seems angel came down on earth...


On the other side ...

Queen of makran also delievers a boy...
Thr was shine on his face... fire in his eyes since birth...

Celebrations started on both sides...

A puja was organised for both kids at thr respective palaces...

Sindh

Astrologers predicted that she was a curse for the royal family's prestige.
She was born to love some one n her life belongs to that person.

Udayraj got very angry...& ordered that the child be put in a wooden box and thrown in the Sindhu.
Her quen begged a lot to not do it but he was in anger n for him thr prestige is everything.

Makran

Astrologers predicted the same for the boy, that he was born for love, but as he's a boy everyone was happy,
at the same time it was predicted for him that none in the world can beat him in face to face fight.
The boy was named Sagar...

Other side...

The girl was thrown in river with lots of jwels n money in the box...
A washerman at the same time washing clothes, he found the wooden box and the child in the box.
The washerman believed the child was a blessing from God and took her home.
As he had no child of his own, he decided to adopt her.

He was a workshipper of lord shiv n take her to the temple...
The preist blessed the girl n ask the washerman, Kahna that the girl is very lucky for him n ask to gave her a life of princess.

Kahna accepted the girl n the priest named her Ganga.

Years Passed...

Ganga became a young girl, she was as beautiful as the fairies of heaven.
Kahna has given her lot of love, she's his darling daughter.

Other side sagar turn out to be a natkhat but brave prince.


Bambhor...

A girl, wearing multicolour lehnga odhni, playing with some kids in a garden, the ppl passing from thr couldn't take of thr eyes from her,
her eyes, her smile, her attitude, the princess has turn out to be a beautiful girl but she's still a child from inside, she was enjoying with kids...

Laughing like kids, enjoying like kids... n mesmerizing others...

Kahna was searching his darling daughter in whole village...
Other side ganga was njoying it...

A boy was passing from there... he couldn't resist himself n was continusly gazing at her...

He was walking other side but his eyes were on her, he was the best frnd of the prince of makran, sagar...

Soon he reached makran... he was mesmerized with her beauty...

Sagar with his friends practising sword...

But His frnd was not paying attention, he was mesmerized with the beauty...


On asking by sagar he describe the beauty ...

"Hey Mitti Pe Kheenchi Lakeerein Rab Ne
To Ye Tasveer Bani
Aag Hava Pani Ko Milaya
To Phir Ye Tasveer Saji
Hey Hasti Teri Dishaal
Kudrat Ka Tu Kamaal
Hey Man Mohini Teri Ada
Tujhe Jab Dekhle To Phir Ghata
Barse Jhar Jhar Jhar Jhar Sarar Sarar Sarar
Naache Chamak Chamak Vo
Bijli Deewani
Hai Bemisaal Tu
Kori Kori Anchhui
Tujh Mein Hai Kudrat Saari Khoyi
Tujh Mein Hai Kudrat Saari Khoyi Khoyi
Tujh Mein Hai Kudrat Saari Khoyi Khoyi
Tat ta..
Mitti Ki Hai Moorat Teri
Masoomiyat Fitrat Teri
Ye Saadapan
Ye Bholapan
Tu Mehki Mehki
Tu Lehki Lehki
Tu Chali Chali
Har Gali Gali
Tu Hava Ke Ghan Sang Sanana San
Tera Ang Ang
Jaise Jaltarang
Koi Leher Leher
Chali Teir Teir
Paani Ka Mel
Tere Tan Badan Jhar Jharar Jharar
Angaarey Jaisa
Tera Rom Rom Hai Dehka Dehka
Agni Ka Khel
Tu Agan Agan
Takir takir...
Zara Dhirak Dhirak Zara Lachak Lachak
Kabhi Matak Matak Kabhi Thumak Thumak
Khali Jhoom Jhoom Kabhi Ghoom Ghoom
Dharti Ko Choom Mach Dhoom Dhoom
Chanchal Badi Tu Natkhat Badi
Dehki Bahaar Ras Ki Fuhaar
Tere Teekhe Nain Tere Keshe Rain
Ye Balkhana Ye Itrana .
Tat tat ..."


Sagar got so impressed with the description,
he want to see n meet that girl ,
so he decided n travelled to bambhor...to meet ganga.

Bambhor...

Sagar reached the village n was roaming n searching that spl girl, his frnd has described...
He saw many girls but no one matching the description...

He saw a temple...
He thought to take a rest thr...
He was climbing the stairs n otherside a girl was washing n cleaning the floor with water...
it was afternoon time so temple door are closed, ppl are less...


Sagar slowly climping the stairs n ganga was pouring water, without noticing that some is coming...
She brought a pot of water n throw it on stairs...

Sagar was all wet with that water...he look at the girl but she dnt notice him...
Before he can say any word he was lost in her beautiful smile...

A small boy ... noticed it n told ganga wat has she done...
She first time look at sagar... he was all wet, his eyes were open wide n he was starring ganga,
She ran towards him to help him, but he was standing like a statue gazing at her...

Ganga: aap theek to ho na ...

She asked twice but he dnt reply...

Ganga look at her small frnd n both look at him again n then burst out laughing...
It breaks sagar's mood n he felt embarrassed...but after seeing her laughing, he lost himself again...

Ganga : are aap to phir se kho gye ...

She laughs again...

Small boy : didi inhe le chalo yahan se, panditji ne dekh liye to humari daant padegi ... kahin ke raja lagte hai ye sena bula li to

Ganga: are tu dar mat main hu na ... aise kaise sena bula lenge ye...

Ganga (to sagar): kyu ji bulayenge kya sena ko...

Sagar (smiled): nahi tumhe hi utha ke le jaunga...

He look deep into her eyes while saying this, she felt the first presence of luv in those firing eyes... those words touched her.

Boy : chale ...

It breaks thr first eye contact...

Ganga hold his hand n take him to her cottage nearby temple...

She gave him some clothes... her baba brought for washing n ask to change till his clothes got fry...

Later kahna return to the cottage n ganga told him all wat happen n introduce both... she dnt even know his name at yet...

Kahna dnt pay much attention on him that time as his clothes were dry n he was abt to leave ...

Next day...

Same time, sagar again reached the temple but this time ganga saw him before throwing water, n gave a sweet smile...

After that day ...

Sagar use to visit temple regularly, same time as its the only way or him to see her, she dnt go out much n kahna also dnt allow her to talk to strangers...

It continues for abt a month, thy started sharing a gud equation, ganga started sharing her small secrets with him, thy are becuming frnds, sagar dnt talk much but he luv to listen her...

One day, sagar show sum guts n ask her to meet tonite, she dnt reply that time neither yes nor No ... sagar leave ...

Sagar was desperately waiting for Ganga in the temple... his mind says that she dnt but his hearts says she will...

Ganga leave her house, for the first time he was doing sumthing that kahna never allow her to do so...

Her heart beat so loudly she could hardly breath.

Ganga slowly made her way upstairs. Sagar saw her coming...

Sagar felt everything around him stop. As Ganga came closer, Sagar couldn't believe his luck.
Ganga was so beautiful, especially under the glow of the moonlight.
She was almost ethereal. The fact that it was he she was meant to spend the rest of her life with scared and excited him.
He could stare into her eyes forever and still it wouldn't be enough time to loose himself in her being.

"I thought you wouldn't come," he confessed as she stood next to him.

"baba was awake," Ganga explained. "I couldn't leave."

She stood close; her eyes not bold enough to meet his.
At times, it was difficult to read Ganga's expressions.
She only allowed so much to show.
As Sagar heard her explain how she was able to get away that night he asked her if she had gone through so much trouble just to meet him.
Her answer, so simple yet bold, startled him.

"I wanted to," was all she said as her eyes dared to meet his.
Sagar's reaction was immediate as Ganga's gaze faltered and looked quickly away.
He turned her around to face him, his hand daring to really touch her for the first time as he allowed his hand to caress her arm until he grasped her hand in his.

Ganga's breath left her at Sagar's intimate gesture as she allowed herself a moment of daring and grasped his hand in return.
It was the boldest thing she'd ever done, the most daring, as though this new woman emerging from the young girl demanded to get out.

Sagar realized, as he held Ganga's hand that he had the right all along to approach her, to be with her, to ask her to share in his company.
With great joy and trepidation, Sagar realized that it would be only he and no one else that would have the right to gaze into Ganga's eyes.
That only he had the right to stand so close, to breath her fragrant scent, to touch and feel the warmth texture of her hand and allow himself the satisfaction of kissing her smooth tapered fingers with his lips.
He could feel her shudder as he kissed her hand in reverence, a part of himself holding back from expressing himself anymore.

For now it was enough that he was here with her, that he had the small freedom of holding her close, of allowing her into his heart, to allow herself to become imprinted into his very soul.

For her part, Ganga felt as though she had come here allowing Sagar to hold her close, feeling her heart beat faster as she experienced the first sensations of falling in love.
She took refuge in the comfort of Sagar's arms, feeling his own love for her vibrate through the sound of his voice, the look in his eyes and the way he caressed her.
They stayed awake through the first glimpse of the rays of the sun, quiet in their one perfect moment.

Precap: The love blossom ...

Edited by BhartiKhushi909 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
reso jiii

hum phirr a gye
~EDITED~
wow,
such a lovely stry
i mloving it

so amazing

ganga ws a princess,
o...
gande mom dad, pheek diya, baby ko
inni cute babay ko

sagar was a gr88 n brave prince too

yeh gana kahan se late ho aap di?
so apt.

mandir main jane se pehle nanhana chaiye, suan h
but, mandir main bhi nanhene ki facility h, yeh tho latest khabar h

well agar latest h tho main issi anciant stry main kyun padh rhi hoon

sooperbo di

that nite scene
kya kahun
s much overpowering
kho jane ko mann karta h

lovely, juzt lovely

ud soon
lov u
Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Wow! Amazing start 👏...I tell u apki ye FF ko bahut response milega😃...U'll have many updates😃
Poor girl use uske family ne chod diya...but she's damn lucky use Sagar milega
Beautiful song in middle...kahan se leti hai ayse mast songs?
So 1st meet was mazedar😉
Overall Loved 1st part...Waiting for next
Thanks 4 PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congo for starting a new ff di...
very nice start...
plz update soon...

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