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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it!!!!
nice one!!!!
so happy to know that khushi will also try from her side!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_shine_girl

This is one lovely update.

I really really admire your Arnav.
It is not at all easy for someone to admit they were wrong and for someone with an ego like Arnav it is such a huge step. I am glad to see him admitting the truth to the Guptas.


yea.. i thought in order to make him respectful towards his wife... he needs to start respecting the ppl who r most important to her.. that way he would have a chance to earn an ounce of her forgiveness... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww a lovely update, she will surly forgive him coz she loves him but he should work his backside off to earn her love and respect.thanx for the pm. hope the next update comes sooner, lol.
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Posted: 13 years ago
No words to describe!!!

I think this says it all!!

Thanks 4 da long update, was a pleasure readdin ur work
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amaazing SS<3
Loved the update:)
Cont soon:)
Thanks for the PM<3
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Posted: 13 years ago
I don't want Khuhsi to forgive him so easily (does that make me sound evil?😃) Loved it!!!! Could you please add me to your PM list it would mean the world to me I would love to read more!!!!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi guys.. 😃 again.. firstly sorry for the late update.. exams coming up so cant update that frequently but will try to update as soon as I can...😊 secondly... thank you so much for your lovely comments... really appreciated it.. 😉 but here I am back with another update I hope I wont disappoint u... thank you for reading my previous updates... and I hope that you will like this one too.. [*NOTE: writing in this colour are the translations of some hindi dialogues].. so here we go:


Recap: Khushi tells arnav that she will now not be partial and biased and truly see if arnav can prove himself in the remaining month.. if he succeeds to do so.. she will remain to be his wife and if not.. arnav cant force her and will divorce her without any further arguments.. arnav agrees and is confident that he would do whatever it takes to bring khushi back into his life.


Chapter 5:

It was the next day when all the Guptas had gone out to a family friends house as they were invited but they chose not to tell the couple so that they could have some alone time as buaji had promised arnav that she would do anything for Khushi's happiness.. and if arnav was her happiness then so be it... she deserved everything in the world... thinking so all of them left them and the love birds were in the house all by themselves... arnav hadnt woken up as yet whereas khushi was up and ready and was doing all the housework alongside with cooking as well.. Suddenly Arnav realised that he slept for quite long that day and missed his jogging and all.. and then ran to the kitchen to find khushi..


Arnav: Khushi! Itni der hogayi aur tumne mujhe uthaya nahi? [Khushi, its quite late.. y didnt u wake me up?]

Khushi: It isnt my job to wake u up.. if u needed to be up early.. u shudve put an alarm on..

Arnav: Why are u being like this?

Khushi: that happens to be none of your business... did u want something as of now?

Arnav: yes.. a cup of tea would be great.. but im guessing you wouldnt make it for me?

Khushi: I sure would.. as my parent have taught me to be hospitable to the guests over at our house..

Arnav: (shocked) Oh.. some Im just some guest to u?

Khushi: why so shocked mr. raizada? What else could you possibly be to this house except for guest?

Arnav: umm.. let me see... MAYBE THE FREAKING SON IN LAW! (angry)

Khushi: well u shudve thought about it before u forced me into marrying you for six months and then literally make my life a living hell..

Arnav: I have apologised a million times and I will keep on apologising for the rest of my life for apologising for this entire lifetime wont be enough to what I did to u khushi... but then I am also repenting.. I just want a chance.. thats all

Khushi: did u give me a chance to explain? U didnt... so please excuse me if im being "harsh to u"! besides... I did give u a chance.. this month... its your job to pacify me the way I am... and it definitely isnt my job to be nice to u... I have mentioned before and I will again.. I wont be partial... u just have to be smart enough to not waste this entire month...

Arnav: (smirks and pins her to the kitchen slab and moving so close that now there lips r centimetres apart) is that so mrs. raizada? Im guessing u think Im not smart enough to pacify u?

Khushi: (shocked( What r u doing? Get off me!

Arnav: (smirks) why so shocked? im trying to pacify you!

Khushi: (tries to look down as her heartbeats going faster) well it isnt working... I asked u to pacify me not seduce me!

Arnav: (smirks) oh so ur getting seduced huh?

Khushi: (was thinking what she should say now... she started having goosebumps when she felt his touch) Good God! Could u be any cheesier! This isnt helping ok? So u might as well move away as it isnt doing anything except burning the food thats on the stove!

Arnav: (let her go as he realised that the food would actually get burnt) fine... have it you way... but remember one thing.. u promised not be partial.. but from what it looks like you are!

Khushi: What is that supposed to mean?

Arnav: see khushi.. I aint stupid... I was close to u and my breath and touch on your skin gave u goosbumps... but yet you denied... you said it wasnt effecting u whereas it clearly was... how is that being "not partial"?

Khushi: (looking down) I did not feel anything!

Arnav: Oh for God's sake khushi... give up lying to yourself!

Khushi: I AM NOT LYING! (still looking down)

Arnav: fine.. if thats so true.. thn prove it!

Khushi: (looks at him confused) how?

Arnav: (with a challenging look) look me in the eye while I kiss you... and resist the kiss if you can! If u succeed... Ill believe you... remember... look me in the eye! Cuz when u close it.. I would know the pleasure youre feeling!

Khushi: What rubbish! I am not letting you kiss me!

Arnav: (smirking) why love? Scared that your true feeling will just be revealed so soon?

Khushi: you wish! I am not scared of you arnav!

Arnav: Then cut the crap and let me kiss u!

Khushi: (unsure of what she is gonna say but she had no choice) FINE!!!

Arnav: (smirks) good choice... now lets ee who succeeds in proving their first point right!

Khushi: (nervous) why dont u just get on with it?!

Arnav: ohh! Someones getting impatient to taste me! (still smirking)

Khushi: done with you rubbish? Now if you will please get this over with... I have things I have to get done!

Arnav: (starts moving close to khushi and pins her to the kitchen slab again... looks her in the eye and crashes his lips on hers and smooches her like never before... he could see the difficulty in khushis eyes.. it was so hard for her to resist... de deepened the kiss pushes his tongue to part her lips and enter her mouth fully... he started exploring her mouth with his tongue and occasionally biting her lower lips... khushi still didnt respond... he then wrapped his hand on her waist and started caressing it.. khushu could not take it anymore... she closed her eyes and a slight moan escaped... arnav then was the happiest person alive.. he too closed his eyes when he suddenly felt her finger running through his hair... he could feel the equal amount of passion from both sides.. but then they had to let go as they were both out of breath)

Khushi: (just looked down... she didnt know why she gave up... she was ahting herself at that point of time)

Arnav: (he didnt want her to feel bad... pulled her chin so she could face him) Khushi... do you now believe that you still have feelings for me?

Khushi: Fine Mr. Raizada.. you proved your point! I do have feelings for you! I do feel attracted to u! But that certainly does not mean I forgive you! The physical attraction that I have to u isnt gonna help me live a happy married life... what we needed was trust which you clearly lacked! So proving that I still have feeling for you is not what you were supposed to do anyway... you were supposed to build up the trust which you shattered into a million pieces... do that arnav and I will be yours... do that and I too will proudly call myself "Mrs. Raizada"... but till then... I am sorry... but I cannot risk my heart being broken by you again.. (she had tears in her eyes.. and with that.. she turned the stove off and ran away from the kitchen)


Arnav had tears in his eyes and he looked down.. he was speechless... he knew what she said was right... he knew that it wasnt easy to build the wall of trust that he broke into million tiny pieces and that too within the remaining time of their marriage... but he had no other choice... he would have to do whatever it takes.. for if he failed... and if he had to divorce her and let her go... that would be the last day he would be breathing...


Precap: Khushi smiles seeing what arnav was doing.. what do u thing he would be doing that made her smile?? (keep guessing)


Thats it for now... pretty long update (though shorter then last time)... but I hope you liked it! I hope you didnt get disappointed... feel free to post you opinions.. and please please pleaaassseee comment as it makes me happy when people appreciate my work... 😳 and do hit the like button as well if you think it was worth a read...😊


Cheers😃

xoxo

Edited by zanonymous - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
YES! im the first one, tht was amazing update! i loved how khushi just gave up, buh please update soon want to kow wah arnav does! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
she is right its not their feelings that matter but the trust in their relationship
once he establishes that he shouldnt have any probs
wonder what he is doing that made her smile
not trying to make jalebi or something like that is he
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

she is right its not their feelings that matter but the trust in their relationship

once he establishes that he shouldnt have any probs
wonder what he is doing that made her smile
not trying to make jalebi or something like that is he


yes... but in this situation i still havent made them confess their feeling as i wanted that to be more special... and about what makes her smile.. i can only say.. keep guessing... :P😆

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