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Now my comment goes hhere.
First a small complain ITna chota update uske 3/4 size ka note.
Wah khushi.
Fine I read both woith sincerity and u know i'll.
Now to the update.
loved it a lot.
S i got cute moments btwn the couple.
Swaron fight on nothing was fun.
Kriyaansh controlling them and den Kria feeling hungry and Rey wanting to eat up just for Kria was aww moment for me.
The gals told they wil be serving and the boys wanted it to be simple and serve themselves was nice.
i wanted to see Rey compliment there but none less i got another wonderful scene here.
the way Rey spitted out upon hearing his name adta we all missed this food from Sharon was perfect.
A reaction much expected.
what suprised me was Kria reacting at that instance.
Giving him water and patting his back.
Rey must have felt happy from his heart den.
And the way their hands touched and she avoided the gaze in order to control herself yup a gal does that often to control emotions.
Gr8 over der.
This chap was short but the flow of emotions made me smile heartily.
Now to ur note.
Sab ko pm id yaad dila diya --Silvermist--.
And with ur demand I agee wen ppl ask for pms den u can expect a comment.
my dear IFians plz comment jaldi kar dho cause I want to read the next part soon.
ha I knew dat was half of ur vent.
Seen a bit more before though and dats completely justified act.
And plz update next part soon.
Do take care of urself first.
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