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@PersieV

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Posted: 13 years ago

#861

An amazing update as usual :-)

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#862

i am more than breathless... that is the reaction I have to the pain in this FF.

I shall read through this because I am waiting and hoping for the salvation for these Four people that you must give us at some point...

I feel like whenever I start reading I need to strengthen my self to keep reading... to zoom through this pain that you are writing and to not dwell and think that SOMETHING must happen SOON!

loving the story and the tidbits you are giving us...

why didn't S keep his promise to be with her forever?

what does Akash know about A...?

god I love it yet i hate it!

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#863

loved this akash seem to have more back bone than arnav he stood up for his wife and khushi family and left know which side of truth he was on if i was payal i would react the same way he destroyed my family get him out of our house let him go the family he choose loved the update thanks for the pm s seems to be the guy who would do anything to keep a promise wonder what made him break that promise

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#864

Wow great update Rae
Loved the NiSh part!sharman is ber cute
And the whole part on Arnav aakash n Payal was too good
Glad that aakash n Payal have a spine in your story but I want to know what aakash was going to say which arnav didn't allow him to speak great work
The way u have kept the suspense intact m hooked to the story

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Smita

@..Smita..

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#865

~Reserved~

PS Edited my post on pg 99. Thanks for the pms!Sorry for the late comments Rae! A bit pressed for time these days.

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tata_tata

@tata_tata

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#866

Hi AT

Here is what i like about IF and you amazing writers.. you know how to build the base with the tension and the sadness and the emotions and the challenges.. you know how to make your readers wait and then wait a little more for what made the scene what it is today..and then you know exactly when to give them the well deserved break from all the gloom above.. good call!!

Khushi the cutter.. one would think really really not.. one would think that you really can not associate that with her.. but then.. the CVs show her jumping off the building and AT shows her at the verge of cutting herself.. and oh-so-different is the emotion!! i am glad she didnt cut herself.. i knew she wouldnt.. i am glad he came to stop her from jumping... i knew she would.. but you both did an awesome job of putting across the Khushi behind the intent to kill herself..pls dont do it again.. either of you.. life is amazing.. and one doesnt live just for themselves or the one other person they love.. one lives for all the others who love them, who need them.. and NO ONE deserves to make you want to kill yourself :)

NiSh, is it.. hehe.. i am starting to like them... Amar Akbar Anthony!!! ofcourse i will like her now...Sharman looks like a decent guy.. but then what happened???? i am not pushing you.. i love these brief glimpses into their past..and i love how they are unwrapping the story slowly.. even in movies.. i love those ones where they mix the past and the present and the contrast shows how much has changed!!! so keep going..

So i have an older sister, who is like the my sounding board.. she is my reflection board.. she knows everyyything i do.. and she knows everything that happens to me... so i just dont get a sister-sister or brother-brother relationship, where they dont talk... because boy, do we talk!!! So my winner in the chap8 were Akash and Payal!!! 2 characters, 2 roles which have suchhh immense potential.. but ZERO spine in the serial.. So when i saw them both stand up for their sibling, it won my heart... i love you just a little more for bringing reality to this piece of fiction..

all in all.. this is going to be a good story.. and i am glad i chose to start reading it :)

PS: go go study.. whatever time you get away from studying, write the chapter :) replies can wait.. all the best for your exams...

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#867

I definitely like this Akash better!
Although it isn't really Nisha's fault I just don't like the girl. Oh well!
But the way u described Sharman was really sweet! He seems like the typical boy next door type! Reminded me a little of NK!
Superb update! Continue soon!

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deviarshi

@deviarshi

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#868

So it looks like there is a secret for ASR 2 remain silence when Khushi was thrown out of RM but if he can make a fair decision then why in hell he agrees 2 marry again ???? Oh i really cant get over of this Arnav & Nisha especially now she is in RM.

I love the way Payal defended 4 her little sister & mayb also Akash for giving Nisha a piece of his mind.👏

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Shobhana

@-Shobhu21-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#869

Woman !!!
You seriously read minds dont you ???
I was thinking up of names for Sharman and Nisha when I came up with NiSh and I thought of telling you, but pata laga you have already put it up here !!

The other night dear, as I lay sleeping
I dreamed I held you in my arms
But when I awoke, dear, I was mistaken
So I hung my head and I cried.
In all my dreams, dear, you seem to leave me
When I awake my poor heart pains.
You are my sunshine, my only sunshine
You make me happy when skies are gray
Please don't take my sunshine away.

I just loved these lines at the beginning Rae !! And I loved the song too, it just set up the mood... It so conveys the pain the four of them feel and the faade they're putting up for others... Its just perfect

Thanks for the light chapter btw Rae !! You wont believe me but all the last chapter gave me actually gave me a sleepless night and not to mention when I slept I dreamt of it !! And I was like What The Hell !! Rae is all to be blames for writng it so damn amazingly !! But no complaints ok !!
You're exams are coming up ?? Well I guessed they would !! But you arent gonna firget me for like months naa ??😕

I love Sharman even more !! Especially cause he accepts that had he too been in Nisha's place, he would have done the same thing.. And accepting ones mistake is a great deed indeed.. The whole description of how he fell in love with Nisha was amazing...And their lighter moments were great to read too, gives more background about them !!

And then Aakash ne finally entry maar hi li !! I guess Aakash and Payal always get to play a prominent role in your FFs/SS but I dont mind it cause I guess they deserve it !! And Rae Aaksh has just left the dagger hanging in air,,,, What exactly did he mean by "Ki Bhai ..."As much I love cliiffhangers I hate them cause they make me die out of all the curiosity of the world.!! So Aakash supports Khushi and his in laws and thats so good !! And Payal so fiesty ?? Thats a definitely nice change, though I just wish Arnav wouldnt havve stopped Aaksh for once But I guess you must have felt it was necessary to keep the thrill of the FF on !!

And the ending so Aakash does meet Nisha and he tells her he's totally against the marriage ..Guess what Arnav's gonna say to her later or what she might be thinking of...Btw a doubt, does Nisha know that Arnav loves Khushi as in does she know the real truth or does she know the apparent truth Nani has told her ?? And does Arnav also know about Sharman ?? No right ? I'm curious how they'd react if they get to know...And I hope it happens beore their marriage !!

Amazing update Rae🤗