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Neha

@melovemayur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#871

I'm sorry about not commentin!! I was busy n I need a lot tym to read your updates..So I was waitin!!

As usual! Superb updates!!

Your story is so layerd n complicated.In every update u reveal something n I'm lyk - Oh mn..he dint!!

Btw.I lovd Aakash here.Bt I dunt understand y Arnav kept mum after knowin everything. Y he agreed to this marriage. Its nt just coz of nani.This is ASR we are talkin about!!

But your Khushi ia almost lyk KKG!!

Thanks for d PM!!

PS : I dnt want u to answer these.I'm just tellin wht I felt after readin ur updates.A lot more too.Bt I forgot those while writin this :P

Neha

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Aashifa

@curledup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#872

Okay I know we are not allowed to swear but I cant help myself F***!really? how flippin amazing was that? the whole chapter was delivered so poetically its ridiculous! the way yoi described it was loke a sea getting stormier as the tension increaded it became the tempest! so flippin poetic! and the reason for my swearinf is because I could not actually fathom a word so it had to be the F word! ?jesus christ woman! The description of sharman, you made him sound like the best chocolate baar! So sweet but doesnt give you a toothache! Come to think of it this whole chapter was sweer and then we got the tooth decay woah one of the raizada boys have balls! sorry Im heading to biology now! He was such a strong character in this chapter! actually both him and paysl finally stepped upto the game! The last paragraph meant something the fact that ge still uses the car arnav gave him shows some sort of emotion? Grrr! I have to say it again F*** okay Im done!

ps. sorry for not commentong earlier!

-Aashifa

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#873

I loved the whole update. So, Something's up with NiSh's past too. And Arnav's hiding something. I like this Akaash - he has the courage to stand up. Maybe with time the real Akaash will mature too. LOoking forward to reading more😊

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#874

Sorry for the late comment, I never got around to reading this last night, and I finally read it tonight.

Anyway coming to the part, I really like how it's slowly starting to unfold. So there was definitely a reason as to why Arnav did not go behind Khushi or stand up for her. And the tear that slipped down his cheeks was indicatory of the fact that he was helpless to do so. And it's not often that you have Arnav Singh Raizada helpless. So i am quite curious as to what circumstance it was that had him so helpless that he could not stand up for Khushi's innocence.

Payal - I won't say she is annoying. She is a protective elder sister, and she hates the man who ruined her family. However I do feel sorry for Akash as he is literally having to choose between his family and his wife. And that's unfair on Akash.

Anyway, that was a great update! Looking forward to reading more! :)

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aakriti

@aakriti120

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#875

heya

such a suspenseful update...

sharman and nishi story was really cute...why was she afraid to love him??

omg we get to see payal and akash...and they left shantivan??

why did the family throw out khushi when they knew the full truth?
i kinda loved payal's reaction...she loves her sister so expected to react that way...shows shes a strong character with her own point of view and opinions,..

tum nahi janti bhai ko??now what happened to him?

wow his dialogue at the end..because i dont agree with your marriage..that was awesome..

many many thanks for the pm..:)
continue soon..

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#876

Sorry for the late comment,have my exams in a week!
Enjoyed reading this update...things are beginning to come out in the open. So payash have moved out?? Wow a brave move and wouldn't have expected it from them! Aakash here seems to be more gutsy and I liked his curt replies.
What is Arnav hiding and why oh why is he not spilling beans on his helplessness to stand for/ with Khushi? Wow it sure is getting interesting and NiSh are also cute,the flashback was sweet😊 there seems to be a mystery behind their separation too...
Great update and looking forward to the next one.
All the very best for your exams🤗

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#877

Gr8 update..
loved it, continue soon,
thanxx for d pm.

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...Doctor...

@...Doctor...

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#878

Hey Rae 🤗

Okay let me clear out somethings before commenting on chapter 8.

I don't like Nisha's attitude..neither towards arnav nor towards sharman. She's a bit annoying (don't kill me for this :P) & I know she is not interested in the marriage..don't worry. I just wanted her to say no (which would have ruined your story though so no issues:D)

Chapter 8:

I liked the way you described Sharman..he seems to be competition for our raizada :p

Finally!! NiSh flashback..I loved it. Their first meeting was so cute. I kinda liked Nisha in this chapter.

Awww..so sharmu had to do a lot of hardwork to pataofy Nisha..that sounds great. I'm actually very excited about NiSh lovestory since these are new characters & we don't know anything about them. As for Arhi we know the background story of what had happened & why they are apart...so I want to read more & more of NiSh but I want arhi too. 😆

She is also scared of love 😲 Why? She seems to be the female ASR of your story 😆

Good..Payal is intelligent, at least in your FF.Arnav deserves her hatred so no complains. Aakash is really a sweet guy. I love him.

I liked the small convo b/w aakash & nisha. Also I loved the fact that aakash told her the reason straightaway without beating around the bush.

Continue soon. :D