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jazzpreet

@jazzpreet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

AHAHAH i was literally crying tears of laughter when reading this chapter!! TOO GOOD!!!!! i loved every word of it! especially her "spy" act haha. please update soon, this is one of my favorite SS's! :) and thank you so much for the pm! :)

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-Spree-

@-Spree-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Hi Sookie.

I don't think I have posted here before but here I am. A certain word 'Doofus' got my attention here. I was pretty happy about this stupid sounding word when I googled the meaning and I was bugged.

So, Coming to this fiction, Pardon me, I am in a Big Bang theory mode and I can relate each and every incident to that now. I am just going to write about the incidents I particularly liked.

"You are using your own boss to make money?" He asked her, his mouth wide.

"Again, what's with cheapening my intention? You just make me sound like a pimp. Come on, it was a little mistake on grandma's part okay?" She said.

If this happens in the real show, Trust me.. The TRP's are going to shoot up like crazy.

"Things change, you know? Earth moves, new plants come and go, oceans ebb and fall, a brand new day starts with rising sun, cells born and die in our body, evolution moves at snail pace and the universe expands just a little, etc." He replied.

That's the only explanation I can give when I behave UNLIKE me.

His subconscious went on a holiday for two whole days when Arnav Singh Raizada hunched over his laptop and explored the website, created an account and argued with random strangers about fictional things and fictional characters.

Interesting take on a website like ours. Sometimes, I really ponder upon how the actors would take it if they read what we write (Good or bad, No matter)

He wondered if she could find him if he grew a beard, change his name, run away from home and live the life of an ascetic. Nah, she probably might find him when he would be running around to get his name changed.

So the Vikram finally realized his Baital is revivified :D Happy realization, ASD.

"You should wear something casual but something really you," she said opening his closet.

"You don't feel odd to be in a man's room like this?" He said gathering all the huskiness he could manufacture.

"I am in your room," she said and took out couple of blazers.

His jaw hung open.

Reaction 1. 😲😕

Reaction 2. 😆 🤣

Sigh. again. if only the serial adopted the storyline, They would be making trillions out of it. (Are they already are? )

"And there must be some God or Goddess that she feels totally connected to and treats them like her best friend right?" Arnav asked swallowing a smile."

I feel pity for the girl who has to actually BE like a typical soap actress, putting her heart out to a picture. (Pun intended)

"Oooh...can't see the girl with another man now, can we?" It goaded him.

"Oh shut up. Like the typical drama male lead, I am going to ignore the most obvious thing that even a five year old can understand and will drag it out for days," he huffed.

You are my crush. You are my world. You are my happiness, Khushi. (Oh wait!) Mine. Mine. Mine. (Finding Nemo Pelican Style). Is it so hard to say, Arnab?

Oh and well, That seduct-able thing. If only he was seduct-able like metals are duct-able and mall-able.

I admire the way you write, Sookie and well.. PM me when you update it which I hope would be soon-ish, no? Considering the way you write, I am amazed how fan girls have NOT sent a petition to start a Sookie celeb chat club right here. 😆

Anyhow, Gotta rush. More on it when you update.

Thanks for the recommendation, Sur. I owe you one. 😊

Spree

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BluntlySpeaking

@BluntlySpeaking

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

oops...sorry, sookie, u lost me in this update...the 2 seem to be all talk and no action-just like in the show, arnav in this too is turning out to be boring and repititive...can you pls give us some chutzpah...somehow the convo b/w the 2 isnt crackling...or maybe its just my bias...let me read it again..

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hindu4lyf

@hindu4lyf

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

I haven't had a chance to read, like or comment on any of these chapters yet but I will..very soon! Just a bit busy with exam prep but as soon as I get a chance, I'll catch up with all the chapters. Just wanted to clear that before I get deleted from your PM list! lol

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Boogle.Schiz

@Boogle.Schiz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

I don't know if I want to slap some sense into the girl or give her a big Boogle hug 😆 Whether she's just plain stupid, or 'innocent' I don't know but what I do know is she's bloody adorable!

'. But she was a wannabe spy. Lying through teeth was now engraved in her that her DNA had probably mutated by now.

"I have no idea what you are talking about," she said. Her ears tinged a bit red. Okay, DNA was not fully mutated. But she was getting there and that was important.'

Ah, the young grasshopper has a lot to learn Sookie San about the ways of a spy. Technically I'm a ninja but it's close enough, no? And this way she can learn some kick-ass Kah-Rah-Tey from the sensei (me obviously) aka The KING of the S.A.O.S.A.N (secret alliance of super awesome ninjas)

Frog mating calls? Mating dance? Do weird little pixies creep into your room at night and whisper you these crazy ideas?! Absolutely hilarious though, and also led me to another funny incident 😆

Oh dear! They actually did it! She attempted to suduce him! That scene easily took the cake 😆 When she asked again and he gave the case study my eyes nearly just popped out (if I end up in the hospital because of this story, it's on your conscience!)

Just love these two in this one, and love the author even more! Absolutely EPIC.

Edited by Boogle.Schiz - 13 years ago

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pweettiechic

@pweettiechic

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

I should be studying, but then I saw your update and I am dying.. 🤣

omg.. love Arnav's inner voice..

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pips27

@pips27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

simply hilarious 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

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Sarah

@Crazy_1001

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Absolutly adorable! Love khushis quirkiness and Arnav actually putting up with it all!

Hilarious as usual!
Excellent job!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Update comment on pg 21 :)

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seoulbeats

@seoulbeats

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#160

Your Khushi and Arnav are vastly different from those of the other FF's and even more so than the ones in the show.Its refreshing to read this lighthearted piece of writing where the characters aren't facing a lot of angst (if you exclude ASR's chat with his sub conscience!😉) and actually take out time to write important case studies.

Your mockery isn't of the subtle variety but I guess that is why I like W&P so much :)

ps-This SS reminds me so much of chicken soup for the cynical soul!

pps- I just wish i could see a page from the website BOMB!😆

Edited by -Zeffa- - 13 years ago