SS - Waves and Particles: new link on pg 42 - Page 13

Originally posted by: olive.green

R!

:D

You must really hate ipink :D

Read it...will edit w/ proper comment later!!

Loved it btw.

Back!

It was just perfectly soo Sookie. Seriously, the last two parts had so much w/ regards to desi soaps, the done to death cliches...packed into them...that it had me snickering at work! For someone who claims to hate these things you sure have paid a lot of attention😛, anyone who wants to know what desi-soaps are all about, given them this SS as an intro..😆 People turned and looked at me quizzincally, I just pretended to not to see anyone, and went back to work, which was quickly cutting out the tab. Damn you IF why does it have to be so colorful, and sparkly :D verrryy eye-catching!

For starters, why didn't Khushi set out his clothes on top of his bed with a white hanky❤️ on top!...

I have been watching cable TV for a really long time now and the cliches are so bloody obvious. I am so missing Door Darshan now! (I will start harassing you to watch Kacchi Dhoop, Tamas, Mahanagar, Chunauti, Katha Sagar etc)

Excuse Moi! All my knowledge of this show comes from YOU! Videos, posts, debates, discussion are all passed on and thanks to my stupid curious nature, I end up watching/reading that stuff. 😆

The second part has to be quoted -

Defining character of a lead male: [read desi-alpha-male] he can always push and shove, but good old fashioned chivalry is still truly alive ...😆 and he is one patient [cave]man...

The part where the girl's family invades the 'date' was a true ROFL moment. I've heard of something similar happen..well narrated to me by an unfortunate guy who had to sit through one such 'guddu' sessions...so Arnav gets some empathy from me there. 😆 back to your write up, seriously, cultured is a such an abused word! And this situation too- the coy demure girl is a picture perfect and the one who talks back must smoke, do weeds and be the she-devil incarnate...how convenient!

At least he doesn't know, they sleep in the same dress as well. 😆 He has a lot to learn

You haven't missed a thing

Desi-alpha-male: couldn't have said it better A! The stereotypical male who has a personality primarily good but either gets masked by "ruthlessness" that gets undefined so I will have to deal with "very arrogant but nice heart" excuse. Never made sense to me.

Anyway, I LOVE this Arnav 😆. Don't you??

Off to Part 5.

A.

Originally posted by: tia.o

You, my dear, are a brilliant writer... I read all parts in one go and it flows like lies on Shyamu the creepwa's mouth, MU in Arnav's brain, prank ideas in Khushi's mind... Wonderful characterization and hilarious dialogues... I'm a tiddly bit partial to comedy... Please continue and pm me when you update...

Originally posted by: -Sookie-