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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 4

Ok friends here is next update...enjoy and do hit like button and comments...

Maan rolling on his bed thinking...

Maan (st)- geetu kya kar rahi hogi... pakka aaram se so rahi hogi yaha meri need uda ke... aaj pura din na ek call kiya na msg😔 ... o i miss her like hell... kya karo call karo ... nahi agar so gayi hogi to uski need kharab ho jayegi... but i miss her na ok msg karke dekhta hu...

He take out his mobile ... with thinking in his heart

Maan (thinking) - so gayi kya?????????????

Here geet is in same condition even she cant sleep and she is busy in cursing maan for not calling and massaging her whole day ...

Geet - dekha Mr.love maan kitne dust danav hain aaj pura din mujhe ek bhi baar call nahi kiya aisa koi karta hain kya aura b aaram se so rahe honge meri need uda ke... kya bolta hain Mr.love call karke dekhe unhe... but nahi so gaye honge to unki need kharab ho jayegi na...

Poor Mr.Love even he is not allow to sleep...

Mr.Love (st) - plz maan call ya msg karo warna ye na to khud soyegi nah mujhe sone degi...😆

Geet lost in her world suddenly her mobile beep... her face start glowing like she knows who is it... indeed she knows she shout - yepiii😃

Mr.Love(st) - thank god no no thank maan ... ab mein aaram se so sakta hu...😛

Geet open msg... and smile as she know as maan asking her cutely "so gayi kya''

Geet reply a blank msg as thinking in her heart..." aapse baat kiye bina kabhi mujhe need aati hain kya"

Maan's mobile beep he open msg and think '' to pehle msg kyu nahi kiya mein kabse wait kar raha tha'' and send blank msg to geet...

Geet's mobile beep she open msg and think '' wo mujhe laga aap so gaye honge sorry...'' and send a blank msg...

Maan receive a msg , open it and think '' koi baat nahi tum msg karo ya mein ek hi baat hain na '' send a blank msg...

Geet receive msg , she open it and think '' aap abhi tak so kyu nahi??????''she reply blank msg

Maan receive a msg , he open it and think '' tumhare kal aane ki excitement mein mujhe need nahi aarahi ye waqt hi nahi gujar raha tham gaya ho jaise'' and send a blank msg...

Geet mobile beep , she open msg and think '' even i m very excited , i miss u alot'' and send a send a blank msg...

Maan receive a msg after open msg maan knows that by now geet is edge to cry and try to change her mood he think'' miss me i cant believe u in last 16 years u not even once talk to me pout like baby'' and send a blank msg...

Seeing this msg geet is become sherni and think'' wo to mein aapse naraj hu isliye baat nahi karti aur aap keh rahe hain mein aapko miss nahi karti sadu dust danav khadus'' and send blank msg...

Maan receive msg and giggle as he know geet' sherni mode is on by now and thinks '' geet stop cursing me and sleep it's too late now... and send blank msg...

Geet open msg and smile and think'' aap bhi so jaiye ok good night" and send a blank msg...

After sending msg geet say - I LOVE YOU MAAN...

As maan heard it and say - I LOVE YOU TOO GEET...

Both sleep with a cute smile on their faces...

Next morning... in Handa Mansion

Darji is waiting for all in living room to leaving for Dehli all ready and excited...

Darji - simran ji , raj puttar , rano puttar geet sab kaha hain jaana nahi hain kya????????????

Rano(coming from kitchen) - darji aap breakfast to kar lijiye abhi flight mein waqt hain... aur aap fikar mat kijiye baki sab bhi bas aate hi honge... lijiye Beeji bhi aagayi..

Darji - are simran ji aapko pata hain humein aaj dehli jaana hain aur humari flight ka time bhi ho raha hain to aap itna late kyu hain????????????

Beeji(rolling her eyes) - ji aapko pata hain humari flight kitne baje ki hain??????

Darji - ji simranji 12 baje ki to?????????

Beeji - aur abhi kitna baja hain??????????

Darji - abhi 7 baje hain... beeji rolled her eyes suddenly geet say who is coming down from stairs with her papaji..

Geet - darji hum sab jante hain aap dehli jaane k liye bahut excited hain par aap itna hyper mat hoiye aapka BP bad jayega...

Papaji - hann darji geet sahi keh rahi hain aap relax kijiye...

Darji try to say something but...

Geet - ab aur kuch nahi chaliye pehle breakfast karte hain mujhe bahut bhook lagi hain with baby face... How can someone resist such a cute face...

Darji - geet aapke aage kabhi humari chali hain jo aaj chalegi chaliye breakfast karte hain... they all proceed to the dining table...


In Khurana Mansion

As usual morning all present at dining table and have their breakfast but someone is so excited and many times make fool of himself like...

Mom - maan bte jara hume fruit bowl pass karna...

Maan is in own world and in that lost condition he pass water jag ...

Dadu -(lightly shaking him ) maan bte kaha kho gaye aap ??????

Maan - (back to his sense) ji dadu aapne kuch kaha ??????

Dadu - maan bte hum ye keh rahe the ki kaha khoye hain aap aapki mom ne aapse fruit bowl manga aur aap paani de rahe hain...

Maan (st) - agar dadu ko pata chal ki mein geet k bare mein soch raha tha to paaka meri khair nahi...he is thought disturb by dadi

Dadi - are bas bhi kijiye kal se maan ko pareshan kar rahe hain raat ko dinner tik se nahi karne diya ab use koi kuch nahi kahega maan aap geet ke bare mein sochna continue kijiye and winked to all...

Maan - dadi you too... ok mein college ke liye late horaha ho so mein chalta hu...

Dad - maan tum college ja rahe ho fir airport nahi aaoge kya...

Maan (st) - 16 saal baad mein aapni geetu se mil raha hu i know jab mein use dekhoga to duniya bhool jaoga aur agar meine airport pe kuch stupidity kar di to dadu aur dad will tease me to hell... no no air port...

Maan - nahi dad meri ek bahut important class hain isliye mein nahi aa sakta... all shocked to hear this maan saying that he is not coming is all they dreaming?????? mom understand his plight and say..

Mom - koi baat nahi maan aap apni class attend kar lijiye sabse sham mein mil lena tik hain???????????? And blink her eyes to rest of the family members as she assured them to leave the topic...maan leave for his college...

Next - family meeting😊 and geet cursing maan😉 but why???????????

Thanks for ur likes and comment...😊

Edited by rubykatariya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
res

wow awesome update dear..
loved their silent talk..
both are not able to sleep... excited and feeling restless..
now one question is in my mind..
kya maaneet ne ek dusre ko dekha hai? i mean by face...
teasing session was nice
ohh god all are very desperate to go to delhi...
very sweet update dear..
update it soon...
Edited by neha5058 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
Awsome update


soo cute conversation btween maaneet hayeee

geet family cumg back
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
awsem love there bond they understandi blank message language and geet family exited to go to khuranas and maan teasing se bachne ke liye no airport do next soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
truly crazy!! blank msgs!!
loved it!!
Shraddha.sinari thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Oh kehte hai na ke premeyo ko labzo ki zarrurat nahi hoti. Luv it.
rubykatariya thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha5058

res

wow awesome update dear..
loved their silent talk..
both are not able to sleep... excited and feeling restless..
now one question is in my mind..
kya maaneet ne ek dusre ko dekha hai? i mean by face...
teasing session was nice
ohh god all are very desperate to go to delhi...
very sweet update dear..
update it soon...



thank u dear for ur comment...
ok answer of ur question is a big NO and details let the story proceed u get all ur answers...😊
Ash1991 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
gr8 update...waiting fr maneet to meet...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Loved their cute heart-to-heart talks..
Daarji s so excited that he dont want his bkfast too..
Maan s not going to airport..
So we will get to c a diff meeting..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsm update. Their silennt convo ws 2 cute😆. Loving Mr. love. Aww poor puppy, geet ne jaga k rakha h. Waitin 4 dem 2 meet. Update nxt son pls😃. Thnx 4 PM.
-LUV Anyaa😳

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