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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
full part was masti
maneets romance college is witnessing
their tom n jerry f8 at house
n maan asking geet 4 sazaa b4 all
he is so naughty..
loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

loved it
full part was masti
maneets romance college is witnessing
their tom n jerry f8 at house
n maan asking geet 4 sazaa b4 all
he is so naughty..
loved it..



di u ask me to be naughty


now bear me



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Desigirls12




ME TOO BECAME CRAZY FOR UR CRAZY IN LOVE... LOVELY FF




nalini thanks alot dear for ur like and comment



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Posted: 13 years ago
aww..that was so cute..
Loved their cute nhok jhok...
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FINALLY GEET AND MAAN ARE BACK TALKING AND TAUNTING EACH OTHER
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 16

Hi friends this part is based on family and maaneet gang so no jhotas and no chappals...

Somewhere in Delhi


A girl is sitting in her bed with a photo frame in her hand crying bitterly , today her tears are nowhere to stop


girl - i know u love her like crazy ever since we become friends but what can i do if my heart still love's u , janti hu tumhe uske alawa koi aur najar hi nahi aata par tum ye kyu nahi samjhte ki mein bhi tumhe utna hi pyar karti hu jitna tum usko karte ho... why don't u understand my feelings MAAN aisa kya hain geet mein jo tum use 16 saal dur reh kar bhi deewano ki tarah pyar karte ho bin kahe tum ek dusre k ehsaas ko jaan lete ho , aaj tak mein khud ko sabhal payi thi lekin aaj geet ko tumhari baho mein dekh kar mujhse bardasht nahi hua janti hu tum sirf geet k ho par fir bhi mein aapne aapko tumhe chahne se rok nahi sakti...


her cell start ringing , she wipe her tears and receive call


caller - hi sam!!!!!!!!!! Kaisi ho??????????? Kya kar rahi thi????? Waise what happen to u look dull when u leave from college is everything ok??????


Sam - hi dev!!!!! Nothing bas thoda headache tha aur kuch nahi. Tum batao kaise call kiya????????????


Dev - its ok nothing impotant u take rest i call u later.


Sam - no its ok dev tell me whats the matter?????????


Dev - wo aaj maan aur geet k liye sab bahut khush hain tu sab ne disc jaane ka plan banaya hain to bas tumse puchna tha that are u coming????????


Sam - maan aur geet bhi aarahe hain????????


Dev - sam what type of question is that ab unki treat hain to wo to aayege hi na...


Sam - nahi wo maan kabhi disc jaata nahi na bas isliye pucha


Dev - hann wo actually abhi maan ko batana baki hain.. but i m sure geet k sath time spend karne k liye to pakka maan jayega..


Sam - ok i m coming..


Dev - don't worry sam i will pick u...


Sam - ok dev see u at 9... bye


Dev - bye sam...


Sam cut the call and here dev look his cell and say I LOVE U SAM par pata nahi tum ye baat kyu nahi samjhti... par koina mein tumhe aapne dil ki baat bahut jald bata dunga i m sure tum mujhe accept kar logi...

Maan is in the office busy as usual in his files and laptop.. and his cell start ringing he receive call..


Maan - hi adi !!!!!!!!!!! tell me adi what happen...


Adi -hi maan !!!!!!! wo... ya talk to dev..


Adi dev and karan are sitting together in karans room ( typical boy room full of girls pic and totally messy ) dev give adi an angry glare when he give cell to dev mumered us hittler se koun puchega disc k liye wo bhi uske office hours mein i m sure he will kill me for this


Dev - hi maan !!!!!!!!!!!


Maan - hi dev !!!!!!! what happen to adi and u??????


Dev - nothing maan , hann karan want to ask u something... and give phone to karan who gave both of them a glare and both show baby faces and even karan make baby face..


Maan get confuse with their behaviour and look his cell and again put it on his ear..


Maan - hello...


Karan - hi maan !!!!!!!!!!!! maan get frustrated with this , whenever he is in the office he become Mr.MSK (serial wala total sadu , arrogant , Hitler etc etc) but only for office employees but he didnt like disturbance when he is working and his friends knows that that's the reason all three afraid from him to ask


Maan shouted - what the hell , just tell me what the matter or cut the call i don't have free time to waste listening ur hi's and hello's in the office... u all know that...


Trio get afraid and jump with maan's high volum...


Karan - maan aaj hum sab bahut khush hain tumhare aur geet k liye isliye humsab ne disc jaane ka plan banaya hain aur tumse puchne k liye call kiya tha kit um aur geet aarahe ho ya nahi bas don't worry u continue ur work bye... he say in one go without breathing and disconnect the call...


Maan looks disconnected cell and smile on his stupid friend ... and call him back..


Karan dev and adi looking each other like fools jump when dev's cell start ringing karan looks display and throw cell to dev ...


Karan - hittler ka call hain mein nahi bata karonga


Dev - mein bhi nahi adi tum baat karo.. and throw cell to adi


Adi - (stammering) me..in ... ky..a bo..lo..ga.. ka.r...an tum..bo..lo


And again throw cell to karan , between this karan touch receive botton and call goes on speaker mode... maan other side listen all their talk how trio fighting for not receving call and start laughing , trio stop fighting when they hear maan's laugh... adi take cell and


Adi - maan uuu tum hum teeno ko dara k has rahe ho..


Maan - (controlling his laugh) to mein aur kya karo adi tum sab mujhe bachpan se jaante ho par abhi aisa behave kar rahe ho jaise mein koi school teacher hu aur tum sab student jinhone homework nahi kiya...


Karan - maan hum koi tujhse darte nahi hain samjha...


Maan - (scarcity) o really...


Karan - haan bilkul...


Dev - are wo sab chodo maan tum batao tum aur geet disc aarahe hona..


Maan - dev wo mujhe dad aur papaji se permission leni hogi geet k liye mein tumhe call back karke batata hu is that ok????????


Adi - ya sure buddy... waise we are dam sure tum uncle ko maana loge...


Maan - ok first let me ask them... ok bye now i will call u back.. and disconnect the call.


Dad and papaji discussing some files , when they

heard knock on door


Papaji - come in..


Maan come inside the cabin


Dad - maan tum yaha kuch kaam tha????????


Maan - wo dad mujhe papaji se kuch baat karni thi i mean mujhe papaji se permission leni thi..


Dad and papaji both rise their eyebrows on maan


Papaji - maan bte kis baat ki permission ???????????


Maan - wo papaji aaj mere friends ne disc jaane ka programme banaya hain aur wo sab chahte hain ki geet bhi mere sath aaye bas isliye aapki permission chahiye thi...


Dad - maan aap raj se uski beti ko date par lejane ki permission magne aaye hain..


Maan shocked to listen his dad's word DATE...


Maan(immediately) - no dad ye date nahi hain... mere saare friends sath mein honge..


Both dad and papaji brust into laughter seeing maan's condition...


Papaji - maan bte aap itna dar kyu gaye ye sanjay to bas aapki leg pulling kar raha hain


Dad - kya yaar raj kyu bola maan ko kuch der ruk nahi sakta tha maan ka face dekhne layak tha..


Papaji - sanjay i m worning u dare u tease my maan..


Dad- hann waise bhi maan mera kam tera beta jayada lagta hain


Papaji - to usmein kya hain geet bhi to mujhse jayada teri beti hain


Dad - hann ye baat to hain waise maan geet to meri beti hain to tumhe mujhse permission leni chahiye...


Maan murmured with baby face kya babaji kaise dad hain mere jab dekho tab tease karte hain... abhi to mom bhi nahi hain bachne k liye, babaji help me na..


Papaji and dad looking maan's baby face and again laugh on him..


Papaji - bas kar sanjay , maan beta its ok aap geet ko leja sakte hain tik hain hum aap dono pe pura barosa hain...


Maan get excited and hug papaji...


Maan - thank u papaji , i love alot...


Dad- dekha raj ye kitna excited hain , par dekho isne tumhe hug kiya par aapne dad ko nahi i know he love u more than me..


Maan - no dad nothing like that i love u both equally... and hugs dad as well...


Dad hugs maan too...


NEXT - TWIST IS AWAITED..😭

Ok no confusion in first part i say dev love's sam but i didnt said that sam too love him 😆😆

here is my fb accout Ruby Katariya ...

Thanks for ur likes and comments..😊

Edited by ruby3 - 13 years ago
meettu thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting
jaldi kl mera paper hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice one
sam love maan
main wohi socho sam pehrleaan ke peeche hi hoti
twist
opsss

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice sam luv maan n dev luv sam good n wat abt twist

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