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Posted: 13 years ago
ruby me so sorry dear for not commenting on last 2 updates...
busy with my cousins...
coming to the updates... all 3 r awesome...
loved a lot...
finally finally geet ne maan ke saath baat kiya,,,, hayeee...
oh their romance and maan's teasing is too good dear...
loved the song...
oh no sam loves maan and dev loves sam... oh ab kya hoga...
ohhh karan, adi, dev part was funny... omg... yeh log kitna darta hain yaar..
papaji and dad teasing maan is superb... really such a awesome family yaar...
twisttt ?? omg... kya hoga...
continue soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago


now one new villi... all girls dont hav any other work im saying tis stupid girls,pari,sameera,nanintara..stupid always behind my maan,... but wat to do my maan s so sexy hot any girls wil com to him... i shd kidnap my maan and keep for myself
Edited by Desigirls12 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 16
nice part...
oh ho Sam loves Maan...
and Dev Sam...
their parents tease them a lot...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME

TWIST KI KYA ZAROORAT I LOVE THIS CUTE SCENES
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

ruby me so sorry dear for not commenting on last 2 updates...
busy with my cousins...
coming to the updates... all 3 r awesome...
loved a lot...
finally finally geet ne maan ke saath baat kiya,,,, hayeee...
oh their romance and maan's teasing is too good dear...
loved the song...
oh no sam loves maan and dev loves sam... oh ab kya hoga...
ohhh karan, adi, dev part was funny... omg... yeh log kitna darta hain yaar..
papaji and dad teasing maan is superb... really such a awesome family yaar...
twisttt ?? omg... kya hoga...
continue soon dear...



its ok dear ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
d update was awesum...!!!
luv'd it...!!
waiting...fr nxt one..Happy Happy Smiley
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome part...
sam love maan...
now pls vo koi mu na create lare un dono ki bich mai...
continue soon...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 17

Hi friend i know u all are very desperate to know the twist so hera it is... no jhota no chappal and specially VALLI DI plz no eggs u know i m vegetarian , hmm rotten vegetable chalega



In mansion


Dadu dadi darji and beeji sitting in living room and talking...


Darji - yash mujhe tujhse kuch baat karni thi...


Dadu - hann bolna tu itna hesitate kyu kar raha hain????????????


Darji - wo mein soch raha hu ab humein HANDA HAVELI mein shift kar lena chahiye...


Dadu - kyu tujhe yaha kyu problem hain ye bhi to tere hi ghar hain..


Darji - hann yash ye mera hi ghar hain par ab hum maan aur geet ki sagai k bare mein soch rahe hain au raise mein beti k sasural mein rehna aacha nahi lagta aur fir geet ki shaadi hum HANDA HAVELI se karna chate hain use aapne ghar se bida karna chate hain..


Dadu - parjiy ji aap hi ise samjho na ye jaise chata hain hum geet ki shadi waise hi karenge bas yaha se na jaye...


Beeji - praji hum jante hain ki geet humse jayada aapki poti hain par rivaj aur rasamein to nibhani hoti hain na. Aur HANDA HAVELI isi shehar mein to hain ... fir aap itna dukhi kyu ho rahe hain


Dadi -par simi aapko yaha rehne mein kya problem hain aur waise bhi sanjay aur raj kabhi nahi manege


Beeji - savi plz try to understand na log kya kahenge , maan jao na...


Dadu - aacha tik hain jaisa tujhe tik lage par khana hum hamesha sath hi khayege...


Darji - tik hain manjoor ek din yaha aur ek din waha ...

In evening all present in the living room as dadu call them..


Dad - bauji aapne is tarah hum sabko kyu bulaya kuch baat hain kya???????????


Darji - sanjay puttar hum ne ek faisala liya hain , bas wahi tum sabko batana tha...


Papaji - kya hua darji


Dadu - mein batata hu raj puttar , harjeet chata hain wo HANDA HAVELI mein shift karle...


Dad - kyaaa par kyu darji...


All get shock , geet and maan who also present their look each other blank and again to their family.. they both feel that someone snatch earth from their feet , just some time before they both got each other back after 16 years separation and now again.. geet eyes get teary... so other


Mom and mummyji also look their elders shockingly the two who doesn't even take breath without each other talking about living separately...


Darji - sanjay puttar yahi sahi hain aur mein kaha dur jar aha hu bas yahi hu next house mein ...


Dad -par darji iski jarurat kya hain , (with baby tone) mein aapko nahi jaane dunga


Dadu - sanjay use jaane de..


Dad - buaji ye aap keh rahe hain


Dadu - hann puttar ye mein keh raha hu...


Dad - beeji aap hi samjhaiye na bauji aur darji ko


Beeji - puttar tum samjhne ki koshish karo


Mom - maa aap boliye na beeji ko kuch achanak kya ho gaya inhe jo ye ja rahe hain humse koi Galati ho gayi kya


Darji - nahi soniya puttar aisi koi baat nahi hain bas kuch majaboori hain


Dad - aisi kya majboori hain ki aap aapne bte aur dost k sath nahi reh sakte


Dadi - sanjay puttar maan aur geet ka rishta tay hain aur simi aur veerji iski shadi aur bidai aapne ghar se karna chate hain bas aur koi baat nahi hain


Dad - to kya hua geet humari bhi beti hain aur iski shadi is ghar se bhi ho sakti hain..


Beeji - sanjay beta geet jitni raj aur rano ki beti hain use kahi jayada tumhari beti hain ye sach hain par humare bhi to kuch armaan hain na plz maan jao aur dekho tumhare darji aur bauji ne ye soch hain ki khana hum humesha sath hi khayege , to ab aapni zid chodo aur humari baat maan jao...


Dad - tik hain beeji par meri bhi ek baat aapko maani hogi jab bhi mein chahuga aapke pass rehne aaoga aur jab bhi mera maan hoga aapko bhi yaha rehne aana hoga major hain


Darji - bilkul puttar ji jaisa tu kahe chal ab aapni face tik kar itna bade bade bacho ka baap hain lekin bachpana nahi gaya tera


After discussion all back to their rooms... this is a big strom for maaneet , they didnt know what to say , both knows their elders are correct but again separation something hurt their hearts ...


Maan pacing in his room , yaa he is hurt with the decision of elders and he also knows that right now hows geet is feeling . today only geet start talking with him after 16 years and again this separation


Maan - why our fate always separate us jab bhi hum kareeb aate hain humesha hume alag kar deti hain humari kismet par ab mein aisa nahi hone dunga geet ishi ghar mein rahegi wo bhi mere sath... mein use kahi jaane nahi dunga.. and went to dadu's room to talk with him


Maan knock the door and come inside where dadu and dadi sitting in couch maan come and sit on knees in front of both of them..


Dadu - maan kya hua puttar utho humare pass aakar betho..


Maan nod for no and blow his head down and say


Maan - dadu ur my best friend na??????????


Dadu - yes maan but why u ask me this??????????


Maan - dadi u love me and geet most in the world na????????


Dadi - yes bte i love u two most in the world infact u two are my world..


Maan - dadi if i ask something to u and dadu u will give me na...


Dadu - hann bte bilkul aur aapko magane ki kya jarurat hain sabhi kuch aapki hi to hain...


Maan - dadu plz geet ko rok lo mat jaane do use


Dadu and dadi look him mix emotions shock , concern , love , awe


Maan - geet mein meri saase basti hain maan sarir hain to geet uski atma hain agar maan ka dil mandir hain to geet uska mandir ka bhagwan hain dadu plz geet ko rok lo ab mein use aur alag nahi rah sakta (with tear in his eyes)


Dadu and dadi eyes also get teary looks maans condition


Yaa its a fact that , jab aap kisi ko aapki jaan se jayada pyar karte ho to uske thode bhi dur jaane k khayal se aapka dil tadap uthta hain aur saalo ki duri ke baad jab wo pyar aapko itni muskil se wapis mila ho to dil ka dar jaana lazmi hain... yahi hal hain maan aur geet ka


Dadi - maan bte hum samjh sakte hain aapke dil ka hal par aapko kya lagta hain humne praji aur simi ko rokne ki koshish nahi ki kit hi beta par wo nahi mane...


Maan (stubbornly ) - mein kuch nahi janta ya to geet yahi rahegi


Dadi - maan bte samjhne ki koshish kijiye geet yaha shadi k pehle kaise reh sakti hain???????????????????(me shadi k pehle o dadi u forget they two are married already )


Dadu dadi and maan talking suddenly their is knock on door trio turn and look darji and beeji their they both come and sith on opposite couch...


Darji - kya baat hain yash maan itna pareshan kyu hain?????????


Dadu - wo maan nahi chata tum log handa haveli jao


Darji - maan bte hum samjhte hain aap hum sab se bahut oyar karte hain isliye nahi jaane dena chate par beta bina shadi k aapka aur geet ka ek ghar mein rehna , acha nahi lagta log kya kahenge..


Maan - aap sab ki yahi problem hain na ki bina shadi k mein aur geet ek sath nahi reh sakte ...


Beeji - hann puttar...


Maan - beeji mere aur geet k liye humari shadi 16 saal pehle ho chuki hain par duniya k liye nahi na to tik hain ... and leave from their without complete his sentence...


All four elders think maan convince from them and engrossed in their talk..



NEXT - maaneet


here is my fb accout Ruby Katariya ...

thanks for all ur love and support...

guys i have 1 request plz when u comments na plz give some words what u feel hows u like my ff like that plzzz





Edited by ruby3 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
love it...
kahi maan geet se dubara shadhi karne ki toh nahi soch raha hai...
😊
update soon...

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