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Posted: 13 years ago
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sweetu no clg???

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Posted: 13 years ago
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its lovely plz update soon
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Firslty,am really very sorry for not commenting on ur 2nd thread poppy...
actually m very busy nd came onl9 just now...
maaf kr de naaa darl !!!!😭


Secondly,thanks you sooo damn much for the sweet words for me...🤗
I really appreciate it from the bottom of my heart...❤️

Thirdly, update ko kya bolu...😆
Awesummm...👏
Fab...👏
Fantastic...👏
Mindblowing !!!👏
I really loved the part when swayam overhears rey's talks about kriya...😉
hayeee ...adore the character of swayam...he's not so mad over her sissy's love...not like typical bros !!!!😆
He's really understanding...😳
You are a prolific writer poppy...⭐️
so,keep writing it nd keep sending us PM's...cuz i just reading ur works dear...☺️

U are "Fabtastically Gorgeous" poppy !!!😳(hehehe...i noe u must be thinking wat is it...actually i use this word for whome i totally love the most...nd one is you darl <3 ).❤️

Last but not the least...a very very,very,very

🥳 *Congratulations to you*

🤗mwaaahhh !!!🤗
Keep rocking at *IF *






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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys thnkq thnkq so much for ur likes and comments ya update aaj hi nd abhi de rahi hu so be ready...

haa sorry phir se late kia hai

Edited by ShravniC - 13 years ago
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Hey everyone pehle to thnkq so much meow for the help nd pichle wale kelie bhi actually kal update karne wali thi but I have reasons nd vo bhi bohot sare but really I was surprised us din jane se pehle hi 18 likes mil gaye the I m so happy ye update I want to dedicate to meow, deetha and shubhi nd haa pehle hi update ka review de deti hu I think thoda bohot boring rahega starting nd beech beech me u will get irritated nd ending will make u shout on me ab review khatam start reading'..


Morning 7:20AM

Door bell rings Rey was too much tiered to break their beautiful sleep as he was enjoying the feel of his first love even in his dreams as this was kriya's daily time to wake up she got up went near the door rubbing her eyes still in sleepy mood she was accompanied by Sharon, kriya opened the door.


Prsn : hello Gud mrng mam mai Singhania family ka manager hu.

Hearing this Sharon came front and saw him she recognised him.

Sh : Gud mrng uncle come in.

They went in and sat.

Sh : Uncle aap yaha aur vo bhi itni subah?

Prsn : beta vo aapke papa ne aap sab kelie ye bheja hai aap sab ab ...SAATH... ho na.

He hands her a bag and says accha beta mujhe jana hoga aapke papa ne mujhe bus 20mins ka time dia hai aur aap ko pata hai vo kitne strict hai.

Sh : haa uncle pata hai jis insaan ko business hi sab kuch hota hai vo to strict hote hi hai.

Prsn : beta aise nahi bolte vo bohot busy hote hai beta islie nahi aa pate accha mai chalta hu.

Sh : Ok uncle bye.

Sharon was about to open the bag when Rey came out and asked.

R : Sharon kon aya tha.

Sharon left the bag there : vo uncle aye the dad ke manager.

R : accha chalo chodo vo sab aaj humare dost ane wale hai yaad hai na?

Sh : haa yaad hai Rey nd i wonder tumhe kaise yaad hai ??

R : matlab?

Sh : matlab ki tumhe agar yaad tha to tum itni jaldi nahi uthte right.

R : vo.. actually *looks at Kriya* chodo na ab chalo ghar saaf kar dete hai unke aane se pehle.

K : ab ye swayam kaha reh gaya vo to humesha jaldi uth jata hai na.

a voice comes from behind

Sw : mai yaha hu.

They all start cleaning up the house and setting all the things


Time 9 Am

Door bell again

Sw : lagta hai sab aagaye let me open.

He opens the door but he saw an old lady (ya guys the same one and remember sw nd sh ne kabhi bhi unko dekha nahi hai)

OL : Beta kya mujhe ek glass pani mil sakta hai bohot pyaas lagi hai.

Sw : haa aunty 1 min lata hu.

He went and brought water for her she drank it and while going she looked at him

OL : *looking down* beta bhagwaan aapke... *looking into his eyes*'.SAATH(7)... *again looking down* kuch bura na kare.

Swayam saw her with a confusing look and was thinking what did she mean. His thoughts were brought to a stop by Sharon.

Sh : Arrey kya hua itna time kyu lag raha hai vo log agaye ya nahi.

Sw : nahi vo koi aunty thi. Pata nahi ye log kab aane wale hai.

They wait and wait and wait for them but as they did not turn up they feel that they might not come


Time 1 PM

Door bell again

Sh : chalo iss baar mai dekhti hu. and she opens the door

All : Hiii!!!!!!!

sharon gives an angry look to them everyone makes puppy face so at last she gets convinced

Sh : hi guys andar aao. They come in everyone sat in the hall in sofa

Sw : chalo at last aa gaye.

Simmi : hum... SAATH(7)... log hi aye hai. rinni will be joining us soon *swayam again feels strange*

K : Its ok ek min mai abhi ati hu *she signals swayam to come to the kitchen*

Scene shifts to kitchen :

Sw : Kya hua?

K : sam humne to kuch banaya bhi nahi hai lunch kelie ab kya karenge?

Rinni : khana khaenge...

Both look at her who was carrying so many covers (ya she got the food parcelled for their lunch)

all of them gathered near the dining table ate happily chit-chatting, having fun, cracking jokes on others and they finally complete everyone holding their tummies fall on the sofa *coz they have ate enough*

Door bell again Time 2 PM

Rey : mai dekhta hu.

Prsn : *looking at the covers he brought* ji namaste rinni madam ne ye... *looking at him*... SAATH(7)... covers mangwaya tha.

R : Hey rinni come here once.

Rinni : haa Rey. She went to the door took the covers came back and joined the others

Rinni : Guys ab ye kya kare maine to hum sab kelie ice-creams bhi mangwaya vo bhi itne saare ab koi khaega bhi nahi *pout* kept them on the trolley which was in the middle

Simmi & Vishakha see other and wink they took one of the cover opened the box (guys don't expect that mai flavour bhi bataungi)

Simmi opened it and said : Guys kitni garmi hai na *everyone saw her with confused expression*

She aimed the box of ice-cream to Sharon but when she threw sharon was quick enough to get what was happening so she bent down and it directly went and hit Kriya. (guys yaha pe u can imagine the box sliding down her face which was now covered with ice cream) everyone started laughing.

Soon Vishakha aimed another one to Neha now it was Kriya's turn she grabbed another one and aimed at simmi but it hit Rey he was too happy with it but he too aimed at kriya this time it hit Sharon and the game started and ended at a point where everyone was totally filled with ice-cream (same as in food fight of D3)


All stood there laughing loud and finally got themselves cleaned up and all gathered in hall again and were in deep thinking about what to do now.

Nil : Kyu na hum ab koi movie dekhe

Vicky : not a bad idea.

K : TV mai dekhte hai kya aa raha hai. She switched on the TV and it flashed ...SAATH(7)... khoon maaf. She then checked every channel none of them found anything interesting. *swayam again feels strange*

Amar : Kyu na hum ek hollol(horror) movie dekhe.

Vishakha : Ya dude gud one.

Sh : umm Horror chalo lets watch this one. She took a CD inserted it but before playing it they all went to the kitchen brought some popcorn and soft drinks and took their places.

Movie : Insidious

Movie started everyone was talking to each other watching the movie but the movie got interesting there was pin drop silence everyone was involved in the movie.(bas isse zyaada mat expect karna film khatam ho gaya)

As the film completed no one uttered a single word

Simmi : Breaking the silence. Wow yaar tat's y i love Hollywood movie kabhi happy ending nahi hota hai humesha dusre part nikalne ke chakkar me hi rehte hai.

Neha : me too thinking same no happy endings.

Nil : yaar vo chodo just tell how was the movie for me it was a real horror and the ending was awesome wat say guys??

All : haa vo to hai it was really horror.

After about half an hour they were again left silent and they looked each other with an expression like what next.

Rinni : Guys kyu na hum truth and dare khele it will be fun.

All : yeah chalo khelte hai.


Sharon goes in and brings a bottle : Guys ye cap jis ke taraf rukega unko choose karna hoga nd the other side one will ask question. She turns the bottle nd for the first turn the bottle stopped the cap side was pointed to Rey and the other one to Simmi.

Simmi : Ok truth or dare?

Rey : hmm dare.

All start to hoot .

simmi : Let me think. She thought for some time and finally

si : Ok iss ghar mai aisa koi room jaha tum abhi tak nahi gaye.

Rey thought for a moment and replied : haa this store room *pointing it* (guys yaad hai i told u hall mai jo shelfs hai uske left side hai store room)

si : ok tumhe iss store room mai bina lights ke...SAATH(7)... min rehna hoga. *swayam again notices this time he starts thinking that from the morning he had heard it for many times*

All : ye kaisa dare hai ye to bohot easy hai simmi kuch aur de na.

Si : guys let him do na 1st humesha easy se shuru karna chahie hume.

R : ok to chalo lets start.


Scene store room :

Rey just entered the room his frnds locked the door he was walking looking around and suddenly he felt like he saw Kriya at a corner he moved a bit left thinking he could see her. He saw her who was pointing something he saw her hand which directed him to a clock the clock was showing time ...SAATH(7)'.. when the actual time was 5 PM.

He then thought Kriya iss room mai he looked back at her but this time she was not present he again looked around searching her but he did not find her he thought Oh god kriya kitna disturb karogi mujhe ab hur jagah tum hi dikh rahi ho.

His friends were busy making some weird sounds to scare him he was still left with 3 mins

He was now staring at the clock he felt something passing from his back it was so fast that he could not trace out what it was he moved in that direction still he did not find anything now the team decided to open the door hearing that sound he moved towards the door soon he heard a voice like someone was whispering to him '.Sirf SAATH Din'. rey looked here and there to find out what was it who was speaking to him still then Simmi opened the door.


Si : Hmm good rey chalo ab bahar aa sakte ho.

Rey went out of the room and while closing the door he once lastly saw the room and closed it he joined the gang who again formed a circle to continue the game.

R : Swayam kya ab tak koi store room mai gaya tha?

K : haa rey mai kal gayi thi kyu kya hua?

R : nahi bas aise hi pooch raha tha par tum kyu gayi thi?

K : vo'. bola tha na rehearsal hall ke keys kelie'

All : Rehearsal hall????

K : haa mai to bhool hi gayi thi yaha par rehearsal hall hai'. dekhoge??

All : of course.

They went to rehearsal hall had fun and the team started dancing except KRSS. They ask them to join but they give some or the other excuse. Rey was still thinking about the voice.


Time 7PM everyone in rehearsal hall

Vicky : Arrey swayam time kya ho raha hai??

Sw : 'SAATH(7)' *swayam this time thinks something is wrong this time rey again thinks about what happened in the store room *


Everyone went out for dinner to hotel (ab ye mat expect karna ki me name bhi bataungi so tum logo ki marzi jo hotel le jana hai ur free to)

While entering the hotel all went ahead Sharon walked slowly watching each and everything carefully there she stood at a place seeing the flower vase another girl was standing beside her she felt that it would be one of her friends so she did not mind to see who it was the girl stood straight and keeping her body still she turned her head to let facing Sharon and said

Girl : Enjoying??

Sharon found the voice unusual so she looked at her the girl's eyes were of different colour mostly resembling cat eyes.

Girl : Sirf'SAATH' din hai.

Sharon was confused : excuse me?

Girl did not speak anything but went away Sharon just kept staring at her

Rinni : Kya hua Sharon?

Sh : Kuch nahi vo mai bas' chalo chalet hai.


They went an occupied a table gave their order and were waiting for the food when Sharon again spotted the girl who was continuously staring at her she felt uneasy so she excused herself and was going near her but the girl started walking she lead her to the washroom (guys St.Louis girl locker room mai jo mirror wala hai plz imagine the same one) the girl was a bit ahead of Sharon so when Sharon entered there she did not find the girl so she decided to wash her hands and go back as she went near the pipe she felt the door close with a bang she looked at the door and then went to open it but ya it was locked the Girl was still inside the washroom she came out making some weird sound this was enough for Sharon to get startled she closed her eyes as tight as she could she came near Sharon till the door caught her face turned it to face her

Girl : Sharon Singhania just remember sirf 'SAATH'din baaki hai.

Saying this she opened the door and went away this time Sharon noticed her words and she repeated 'SAATH'.din before she could conclude to what it meant Kriya called out her name.

K : Sharon jaldi karo.

Sharon again went near the mirror took some water ans splashed water on her face and looked into the mirror this time she again found the girls reflection in the mirror who was repeating 'SAATH' din she was totally scared now she ran to the door and stopped there made herself calm and went out now she tried really hard to act normal. She went and joined others who were waiting Swayam and Rey could sense that something went wrong with Sharon. Rey was about to ask when Swayam placed his hand on Rey knee and nodded as if saying no. Rey too kept quiet they completed their dinner and came out of the hotel.


neha : Me have to go now or else mom killing me bye.

Slowly everyone started leaving now KRSS were left. They headed towards the car Kriya sat back Sharon was about to go back but Swayam asked her to sit front with him as he will drive the car.


On the way back home Kriya leaned to the car door as the car was moving she saw some kids playing on the street she smiled at stared them till they passed by then she stuck her head out and again looked back to see them for the last time but they were not there they disappeared Kriya caught the glass and tried peeing that way she looked around she could not find them she again sat back normally and again looked out this time she found all those kids showing 7 figures to her she was surprised to see them again. Now they reached a signal point so kriya closed her eyes she felt someone whispering to her "kriya sirf '.SAATH'. din bache hai" she gasped and opened her eyes rey was staring her for past few mins so he noticed it he placed his hand on hers to comfort her she looked at him and gave a smile.


Ok this update ends here nd mera next update '.SAATH'. dino baad milega really coz I m going out of station nd will be back on 3rd may hua na '.SAATH'. din haha I knw mai aur bhi irritate kar rahi hu but plz tell me in ur comments aap sab ko kya lagta hai '.SAATH' din baad kya hone wala hai???

ok sry aur nahi karungi but update lamba tha na so plz hit the like button and do leave ur comments

Edited by ShravniC - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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res wil read nd comment.
unres

Amazing update poppy.
meri ma ye saath ka kya chakkar hai.
plz tell it.
mera sar phata ja raha hai.
hmmm hope dey share with their friends.
take care.
enjoy ur trip.
come back soon.

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago
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Sath
It Ws Awesome Awesome Awesome 👏
Thanks For Pm
Pm Me Nxt Also PLz 😳


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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update...aap horror acha create kar lete ho...the seven mania will be eagerly awaited...nd bdw congoz for 2nd thread.keep on writing threads one after another...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great update wonder wat the
Mystery is behind 7
Thnx 4 da pm
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tu to father mother he yaar horror i.. u knw literally padte waqt i had goosebumps all ovr mabody .. was really scared wenevr i read saath(7)... nxt update me day me hi padungi jab jyada jan mere bajume honge baba... coz abhi padte waqt me akeli thi vo bhi mera pc window k bajume to soch meri kya halat hui hogi... sacchime boring bilkul nahi tha na irritating ekdam mast tha as alwyz.. loved it poppy ur d best at horror sachhi... ab agle saath dino baad plz ye 7 dino ki mystery khol dena fr ur candy plz..karegi na... thnkz a lot fr d pm swthrt... 😊

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