Return to Sunshine [IPKKND] Note Pg 13

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-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: olive.green

Black my dear. Why do you ask!?

Obviously the weather did do a change around somewhere there...

I agree IPKKND is the worst kind but IF is no different. Just the other day, I had declared to Sooks that I was done here. This black hole just keeps drawing me in though...😆

Welcome back Lady!

Aria.

I was hoping the color would be yellow (sunshine) :P
Sooks is well aware of my IF addiction, and I have given up on beating around the black hole...

Now, where is theee p2?

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: khahani
I will definitely be back here! Promise.

Edit:

Love this A! The little peek into Arnav's get away was described brilliantly ...it made me longed for a countryside walk :D

Hmm so this landslide has a lot installed for us?

Oh and like S I too liked the small inclusion of that boy...

I am so happy all my writer buddies are venturing into the dark side 😆

Till the next chapter ...adios x

Landslides!? May be there is...this after all is based on IPKKND... Are you looking for metaphors and symbolims in my FF too ? 😆 sorry couldn't help it there, that forum is flooded with so many interpretations that it leaves me feeling slightly dumb for not having noticed anything😆 Nah...don't read into it a lot.

That boy has got more footage...may be i should make him a central character.. :p

Thank you N. You know I love reading your comments.

ciao!

Edited by olive.green - 13 years ago

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Hi A!

The other day I was listening this song, "I have a dream...". I think it suits well for this one, right?

Many touched untouched, said unsaid emotions. This guy reflects similar to what he is in the show in some way. Aloofness, weirdness is his trademark I guess. White Pearl and Black car. Though opposite colors they make a great combination.

Thanks for the pm!

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nareshSV

@nareshSV

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Hey...really...that wa quite beautiful update...arnav and his behaviour towards kids...was always fun to watch...

Well...wat i with khushi...in his dreams...did he made the same misatke as in tthe show...welll loved the way the plot is going on...and wanna read more...update soon...

Thanks for the PM...Cheerrzzz...for ur work...

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arshia

@ashvez

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

A beautiful Potrayal of normal people...what I enjoyed is..Arnav observing them.And somehow or the other it is being perceived too.

Alright! Khushi...does stir him...he has lost her in the past...so, I presume, he is gonna hunt and bring back the sunshine in his life.

But,yeah!, the ASR mode has not shrugged off much...Wohi EGO!, Wohi Attitude!! LOL!!!

Great update Aria!!!😊

Ash.

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@khahani

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

"Lavanya never crossed the thin line while she rarely stayed behind."

^^So khushi entered and exited his life? Or is she still there?

So he dropped the pearl?

The three little musketeers were a pleasure to read …showed little bit about how the arrogant jerked has slightly mellowed down

Well look at that I have managed to write two consecutive comments …be proud of me hahaha …I know I know they are not lengthy but size does not matter in this case :P

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christmas

@christmas

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

certainly an interesting start. cannot say too much for only a little is known. but definitely look forward to more of this!...continue soon!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: -Dee-
Edited..

I almost laughed aloud at the scene the children made and something about the girl's eyes - her beautiful brown eyes spoke aloud. How precious that one' pearl - may be it was more precious than the Kohinoor diamond to the previous bearer of it. Arnav to be intimidated by children sounds almost true if we don't take into account the instances on the show!

Needless to say I loved Khushi's fleeting appearance. Why do dreams have such significance?

Wonderful writing.
Thanks for the PM.😊
Dee.

I think being around Khushi has mellowed him down greatly [on the show]...i still think, the arnav at the start of the show would have been highly uncomfortable had he been left alone with kids...😆

You think there is more to the beautiful brown eyes?? hmm...

Dreams have significance because they provide insight into the inner world which may be completely shut off otherwise. Does that sound probable?

Thanks a lot Dee.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
Hi A!

The other day I was listening this song, "I have a dream...". I think it suits well for this one, right?

Many touched untouched, said unsaid emotions. This guy reflects similar to what he is in the show in some way. Aloofness, weirdness is his trademark I guess. White Pearl and Black car. Though opposite colors they make a great combination.

Thanks for the pm!

Yeah, he's supposed to be close to what they introduced him as on the show. I'm not going for anything much different. Writing about someone like him is not something that comes naturally to me so all the help I can get better...so as you can imagine this is going to be interesting. I still prefer the goofyness of Dr. A but oh well, that ship has sailed.

Good point there about the contrast - white pearl and black car, together they will sizzle. 😳

Is this the song Prasanthi ?

I have a dream, a fantasy, to help me through reality

And my destination makes it worth the while...

Pushing through the darkness still another mile

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I'll cross the stream, I have a dream

I;ll corss the stream, I have a dream.

Thanks Prasanthi.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: nareshSV
Hey...really...that wa quite beautiful update...arnav and his behaviour towards kids...was always fun to watch...

Well...wat i with khushi...in his dreams...did he made the same misatke as in tthe show...welll loved the way the plot is going on...and wanna read more...update soon...

Thanks for the PM...Cheerrzzz...for ur work...

Yes, all I will say for now is, this is pretty close to the show in terms of characterization and the plot takes off from a certain point, obviously the treatment will differ somewhat here.

Thank you for reading and commenting Naresh.

cheers,

Aria