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@-Aria-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: nareshSV
selling tea and studying engineering..arnav is taking long drives as like in the show...interesting...continue...

Thanks Naresh, will continue soon.

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Nazibah

@nazibah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

WOW I love how much detail you put in! Please add me to your PM list I would love to read more!!!!! And if you do THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: -Dee-
Intriguing. He 'still' had trouble with the damned apology. If that 'still' means anything. Beautiful backdrop and the process of thoughts going on in his mind interesting. And to top it all wonderful writing.

Dee 😊

P.S.- Do I get to request PMs for this one?😉

I PMed about ten odd people who I thought would give this a shot, I knew I was missing someone there!! No need for requests Dee, you will get a PM next time I update. 😳

Trust you to pick up on those little details too, yes, obviously that does hold some significance as much as it was about letting in on him as person at this point, there is more...to come ;)

Thanks a lot for dropping by. Always a pleasure to read your comments. Just out of curiosity, do you watch this show at all?

Aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sisgeo
Refreshing..

Good to see you here too :)

Thanks a lot!

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Boogle.Schiz
I've always prefered a chilly morning to a warm noon, I know I'll like this one already.

I envy the tea engineer boy - smart , hard working and kind. Darn him 😆 That's mean, right? 😆

Brilliant start, can't wait to see what you have in store for us.

Welcome on-board then!

Ouch! yes but its terribly easy to fictional[ise] a character like that... on second thoughts, may be the engineer lad needs to meet up with BoogleSz. I'm starting to think that will do his kindness a world of good. 😉😆

Thanks for dropping by...let's see where this one takes me..

Aria

ps. you know it just occurred to me that there have been more mentions of him than Arnav in all these comments...😆

Edited by olive.green - 13 years ago

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: pikudika
hey
Thank you for the pm. Lovely start- eager to see where it will take us!!
😊

You are welcome for the PM. Thanks a lot for your comment, will update soon.

Aria

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

@Aria - I await eagerly for PMs from you'll.😃 And I do watch this show!

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: ashvez
Aria, I am so excited to see you here with an FF or SS.It will be a pleasure reading your story.Thanks for the PM.
Bang on! On Porsche Cayenne Turbo, now that's what I would want ASR to have...not some cheap block which he rides that too in White.Eeeww!!
With ASr characteristics I expect- Black!!!
The intro...was quite impressive.Waiting for the story to unfold...and our Khushi to jump in...in her Bindaas style..LOL!!
Would love to get PM's this one.Thank you.

Ash.

With all meatier parts stolen in the last episode - his car really literally fits the description of the cheap box! 😆

The black here sort of makes sense story wise, and I figured, since there are no 'production hassles' or financial constraints here why not give him something befitting!

Thanks a lot for commenting Ash...I will update soon.

Aria

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: rubinahansa
good one

Thanks a lot :)

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@khahani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

I will definitely be back here! Promise.

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Love this A! The little peek into Arnav's get away was described brilliantly ...it made me longed for a countryside walk :D

Hmm so this landslide has a lot installed for us?

Oh and like S I too liked the small inclusion of that boy...

I am so happy all my writer buddies are venturing into the dark side 😆

Till the next chapter ...adios x

Edited by khahani - 13 years ago