IPKKND: It's Not Right - Thread 3: Ch 34-41 - Page 11

Congrats on new thread!

I'm glad arnav put his ego to one side and answered the call. That convo was what they defo needed! Great update.

heya

that was a really sweet update...

the conversation was needed and very well written...

abhinav is truly a good friend...

many thanks for the pm..: ]

continue soon..

yippee .. they r back together !!

Wow I just your FF in one go back to back. What a great story. Looking forward to the next part.

aww, the kiss ! :)
hes always there for her when she needs!
great update dEar! lovdDit!
and coNgrats on the new thread :)

congrats on thread 3
awesome part
pm me next time

Congrats for the new thread... Finally things are going to settle...
Fab update...
Thanx for the pm

WOW!! I have just finished reading all 34 chapters and it was fantastic 👏 I came across this ff by accident and knew from previous posts that whatever it was I would enjoy it. You definitely did not disappoint me.

The essence of each was character was beautifully portrayed. Arnav's anger at Khushi's interference in his life and Khushi's regret of the breakup between Lavanya and Arnav was the catalyst of them realizing just how much of a role they played in each other's life. Though given the determined mind of KKG, she would have done everything possible to try and patch things up between them. Glad you made Lavanya realise she didn't want to be someone's 2^nd best. Even during the initial stages they still couldn't stop thinking about each other. Especially when Arnav realised he might not see Khushi again. The longing for each other was intricately woven into their supposed anger. Loved how worried Khushi got thinking she would need to find him a bride...poor lass hasn't realised she's the only one for this Laad Governor 😊 and one my favourite scenes in this ff was when put his forehead against hers after the realisation that no matter how much hate he showered on her she still smiled. Had to wonder how long it would last before he went off on her again though but then in the next instant I had to smile. Poor guy sounded offended that she wouldn't want to get married to him. Ha-ha serves him right, thinking he's God's gift to women (although I can say without a doubt he is 😍)

Abhinav seems to have become a very good friend to Khushi. They totally gelled from the first moment although I did wonder if his intentions towards her were totally different to Khushi's thinking. Although he admits he could totally fall for her (as anyone one could) I'm happy you didn't turn him into a total arse, which now brings me to Shyam 😡 He so needed that beating and more for what he said and did. Will we find out what has happened to him since he got taken away and charged? Hope he doesn't come back and wreck havoc again.

Back to the lovebirds...finally with all the misunderstanding about Shyam cleared they finally started dating. The kiss was eagerly anticipated and you set the scene for it beautifully. You write amazingly that I feel like I'm in the moment with them (but not in a creepy way mind you) Loved how the relationship developed. I got the feeling that Arnav figured that a couple of these and he'd probably have his fill of KKG and be done with, guess he didn't realise his heart had different intentions 😉 2 weeks away definitely helped. The jealous rants by him were typical Arnav. Act first think later but guess it was needed for the confrontation that followed but the hug scene at the hospital put all their hurt and anger on the back burner. Loved how Abhi was nice enough to call him and let him be there for her when she needed him the most especially when her family are being so awful to her. What the hell's their problem like she doesn't do enough for them? It was heart warming how they apologised to each other before settling down with the realisation that no matter what life throws at them they'll get through it TOGETHER.

Thank you for a wonderful read, you're an amazing writer and it's been a pleasure to read your work. Can't wait to catch the next chapter.XX

P.S Sorry for the above essay, sometimes I can get a bit carried away. Hopefully it hasn't put you to sleep and if it has you must be tired 😉

I'm always so happy when i see an update for this FF, woop!, especially when it's a chapter with a happy ending 😛 Arnav's apology was so sweet! Glad he realised he was being stupid lol
Already can't wait for the next one😊
Thanks for the pm, keep up the great work!
x

Awesome part nayika! Yay Arnav finally apologized properly, so glad they sorted things out. Can't wait to read more!!!