Kria and Rey FF (Ch 2 Part 20 Pg 138)

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Shweta

@Shweta-kriyansh

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

speechless...loved to know that rey craves for kria too...even more than her...she was also his teenage crush...m happy to know that...keep writing...its something totally blissful and diferent...a written miracle of serenity...

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Im speechless have no wors to describe it
its fabulous...gosh im in luv with this ff...hw do u write dooo beautifully yaar

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

loved it...
so the feelings have always been mutual...
that was expected
kria acknowledged the fact that she was in love but rey is yet to acknowledge it iin words..
the second last para of the turmoil is amazing...

seriously half of kria's work is done. looks like rey'ss wish of doing her the s**y babe walk wud ultimately turn out to be true and he wud be the one checking her out and she wud definitely turn😉

sahi mein but donon bvakuf hai( no offence) bol dena tha wud have been much easier but then itna accha ff hamein nhi milta😃

plz update the nexxt part asap. looks like the game's duration is these 2-3 weeks ...

plz update soon. waiting eagerly

Edited by kriyansh24 - 13 years ago

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annie mathias

@anniemathiaskr

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

awesome awesome awesome u left me speechless how did u do that so nicely u describe thrie feeling it seems all thing was going real in front of me it was just what kria felt for rey same rey feels for kria it was amazing i just loved it

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Kritika Julka

@kritzzz_ArSha

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Awesome update just waiting 4 the nxt!!

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Puja

@puja_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Freakin awesome man...!!! Luvd it sooo mch...y dnt dey already confess wen dey luv ech othr so mch...rey's POV excellent...!!!waitng fr nxt part...:)

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UnAvailable

@MyDarkPassenger

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

seriously its so beautifully written..why dont they confess it!

i love this!

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Jeeya_Angel

@Jeeya_Angel

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Amazing update once again.

Rey's POV was so much beautifully described. Actually it was totally a surprise package. He also had feelings for her. This one i never expected. Damn they have wasted so many years of their lives hiding their feelings from each other.

This FF is turning out to be more interesting. I see a lot maturity in your writing dear.

I will surely wait for your next update.