Kria and Rey FF (Ch 2 Part 20 Pg 138)

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Snigdha

@Snigs.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Hawt..indeed very hawt!!

Sensuos updt..

U really rocked it..

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chetna

@crazysky

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Posted: 13 years ago

#102

its an awesome update...
loved it
too hot to handle...
love their clossness...
loved each n every line of it

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Snigdha

@Arsha1994

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

Awesum updt...

Damn hawtt...

Luvd d way dey wer flirting wid each other...

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spicyrays

@spicyrays

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

1 week... Ah too much tym bt m waitin plz update sun...

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#105

awesome update...loved it very much

date was perfect...loved the way rey become jealous and possessive

and there romance...it was hawt, but that phone ahhh kabab me haddi😡

waiting eagerly for next part

continue soon

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maitri

@kriyansh.d3

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

gosh

hot update!!!

who d hell is dat caller yaar

he is becoming KMH

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Absolutely loved it, adored it...

such romantic, hot update...

wwish they remain one no matter kya hoye...

but itna ganda cliffhanger.. whose call was that... koi marr gaya kya???

ya fir contract marriage ke baare mein pata chal gaayya...
what do u have in store... just fingers crossed...

but the way u described their feelings and how they gave up and enjoyed to the fullest and finally how they accepted each other and became one... amazing ...

even i hd imagined that aisa hi hoga...

plz update asap...

Edited by kriyansh24 - 13 years ago

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sujana

@sujana9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#108

gosh man u kiled me dude wat an update no words i zip my mouth nd i love dat scene frm 27 dresses dat movie is one of my fav dis update was worth its wait

one week omg 😔

u r an awesum writer 👍🏼

thnx for d pm

update soon

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

Wat a freaking killer update . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Haaawwwtttnesss personified. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . I Expected only date in this update but u flavoured it with the hawtt after-effects of the date too... 😉
kriya is driving him crazy with every moment & confusing him also . . . . . He's not getting wat she actually wants . . . . . He's not ready to confess but still he does'nt want her to even think of dating someone else... 😆
how sweetly he gifted her the necklace . . . . & took care of her every wish on the date . . . 😍 . . . . . . . . . & the way kriya flirted with him . . . & gave flying kiss to that stranger 🤣 . . . & how rey got so angry . . . That was totally adorable . . . He need not confess his love . . . His actions prove that 😃
I too luv that movie . . . . & that scene totally matched to kriyaansh . . . .
now their nautanki part of dropping her home . . . So cute 😛
& her seductive moves could'nt help rey this time & made her plan successful . . . . . The desire was out now . . . How they both wished this date would never end . . . . This time they were serious . . . . Confessing their love ☺️
& that tring tring spoiled the scene 😡 😆
Is time kaun phone karta hai . . . & rey was irritated- "hell with dat" 😉
seriously,,, hum bhi yahi kahenge rey 😛