~~D3 FF-EK MAIN AUR EKK TU~~CHAP 12 PG 47*NEW

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys I akshara and tehmina aka d3_rox are back with a new FF
the idea of the story credit goes to tehmina
P.S -NOTE THIS FF IS WRITTEN BY BOTH OF US SO PLZZZ DNT ONLY APPRECIAT ME AS I WILL BE WRITTING IT BUT EVEN TEHMINA IS GNG TO PLZZ APPRECIATE HER WORK TOO
the story starts from where kria makes her team
P.S -dnt get confuse between our earleir ongoing ff dil dsoti maasti n this ff this f n tht ff are different which u will cum to know after u read this ff wen it reaches in the middle this has many twist in this ff
this ff mainly focuses on kriyaansh,swaron n viha but all other characters are IMP
THE CHARACTER SKETCH
KRIA GHAI:A SMALL TOWN GIRL WHO CAME FROM DEHRADUN (NOTE:EVERYTHING IS SAME ABT KRIA WHICH WAS IN D3 )_BUT HERE HER MOM DOSENT STAY WITH HER IN MUMBAI N KRIA HATES HER MOM
REYAANSH SIGHANIA:SAME AS D3 HAS A CRUSH ON KRIA
SHARON RAIPRAKASH:SAME AS D3 HATES KRIA AND HER DAD
SWAYAM SHIKAWAT:SAME AS D3 LOVES SHARON
VICKY:REY'S BEST FRIEND KNWS ABT THE CRUSH HE HAS ON KRIA SAME AS D3
NEHA:SAME AS D3 KRIA'S BFF BUT NOT AS FILMY AS SHE IS IN THE SHOW
AMAR:SAME AS D3
RINNI:SAME AS D3
BHARAT:SAME AS D3
VISHAKA:SAME AS D3
SIMMI:SAME AS D3
NIL:SAME AS D3
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kria:guys i knw ki tum logo ke liye difficult hoga na ki tum log dazzlers ke samne but we have to do it
neha:ha kria yeh sab tumre wajhses se
swayam:ha kria agar tum nahi hoti toh yeh nahi hota
sharon walks into the common room n says
sha:ya ya rite kria ke wakjses hi tum losers actually humhe challenge kar paye ho i acually mean it good job kria
swa:thank u humhe pata hai ki kria ne yeh kiya hai ab hum tumhe takar de denge kria ke wajhses main tuamre samne dance karunga
sha:swayam hope u dnt remember the auditons jab tumne mere sath dance kiya tha
swayam puts his left hand on his left cheek n does to flashback
everyone is staring at him
rey cumes from behind:sharon tum yaha n looks at swayam
neha:flashback
everyone:wht?????
neha:arey woh flashback main chala gaya jab sharon ne use thapad maar tha jab woh auditon de araha tha
rey first looks at swayam from up tio down n then looks at swayam
rey in his mind:ohh shit yaar i pity swayam kitne jor se laga hoga na woh bhi sahron ke hath se bechara kitna pyaar klarta hai use par sharon
rey suddnely looks at kria wo was glairng at sharon
rey gets lost in her eyes,lips,expression
vciky was seeing all this from behind s he texts nil to cum to the common room but suddenly he sees rey staring at kria
vicky to himself:rey not again😡
he goes to rey n gives a tapli on his head(means he hits him on his head)
vicky:kay kar raha hai tu in a low vocice
control ur self dude tu hamre side hai ki uske??????
rey still lost :uske
sharon hears dis n says:wht rey tum uske side ho
kria is stairng at rey
vicky:no sharon woh kya hai na ki tum hamesha middle main kadhi rehthi hoon rey tumre right side pe rinni n simmi left pe aur main aur nil right pe toh main rey ko bol raah tha ki tu konse side pe kadha hai wrong side pe tujhe left main kadhe hona hai
neha:losers!!!!tum log humhe bolthe hona khud ko dekho seating arrangent main kadhe rehthe hoon
nil cumes from behind:ohh miss reverse english jyada smart mat samjho apne appko
vishaka:kyu jelously feel horahi hai hai
simmi n rinni cum
simmi:vishaka tum toh ek dazzler thi na ek sofesticated dazzler n now look at u ek bloody weakling ban gayi hoon
bharat:saa saa kya?????gaali di
amar:nahi yaal gaali nahi di
kria:guys lets just forget it humhe joh proff karna hai hum auditions main kar lenege
vicky:ohh miss behenji dnt act smart
kria:main smart hoon toh wohi act karungi na
rey:ha vicky is rite not act samrt kria(he said cuz he wanted to support kria as well as his team)
kria:FOR THE LAST TYM MAIN SMART HOON HOON HOON GET THIS FIXED IN UR MIND
sha:guys lets not waste out tym lets go
kria goes from between sharon n rey so she gives rey a glare but rey gets lost in her
sha:rey whts wrong wid u tumne in weaklimgs ko kuch bhi nahi kaah tum hamre sath ho ya uski
rey still los:uski
sha:wht????
vicky pinches rey on his stomach so rey cume sback ho his senses
rey:tumri sharon ur my best friend afterall
tum chalo main ata hoon
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later again the weaklings were in the common room
kria:guys tum chalo main ati hoon
rey was stanidng outside the common room o one except kria was there in
swaym sees rey putside n smiles
kria's back was turning towards him so rey quietly puts his phone neeche so tht he can make a bahana
wen rkia turns she sees rey there taking his phone
rey says:finally mil gaya
kria:wht????
rey:kuch nahi
kria:whtever waise app yaha????
rey:kyu yeh tumari private property hai????main ayah nahi asaktha
kria:nahi asakthe hain app par kyu aye????
rey:reason batana main jaroori nahi samajtha
kria:appki marzi
rey:aur yeh kya app app bol rahi hoon say tum yah app bolegi toh koi reply nahi karega appni dehraduni baatein wohi chod ke aoo
kria:appki prob kya hai muheh app ko jho bulana main bulaungi
she gives rey a glare n leaves
rey:ohh god baatcuteer AJ KE LIYE BAS ITNA HI DANYAVAD !!!!!!!!!!
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should we cont???????
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INDEX
CHAP 1:PG 1
NOTE:PG 5
CHAP 2:PG 7
CHAP 3:PG 10
CHAP 5:PG 21
CHAP 6:PG 28
INDEX TO BE UPDATED ...
Edited by --Akshu-- - 12 years ago

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anniemathiaskr thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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yeyy !!!!! i am the first one to comment

and now the time for comment

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later again the weaklings were in the common room
kria:guys tum chalo main ati hoon
rey was stanidng outside the common room o one except kria was there in
swaym sees rey putside n smiles
kria's back was turning towards him so rey quietly puts his phone neeche so tht he can make a bahana
wen rkia turns she sees rey there taking his phone
rey says:finally mil gaya
kria:wht????
rey:kuch nahi
kria:whtever waise app yaha????
rey:kyu yeh tumari private property hai????main ayah nahi asaktha
kria:nahi asakthe hain app par kyu aye????
rey:reason batana main jaroori nahi samajtha
kria:appki marzi
rey:aur yeh kya app app bol rahi hoon say tum yah app bolegi toh koi reply nahi karega appni dehraduni baatein wohi chod ke aoo
kria:appki prob kya hai muheh app ko jho bulana main bulaungi
she gives rey a glare n leaves
rey:ohh god baatcuteer AJ KE LIYE BAS ITNA HI DANYAVAD !!!!!!!!!!
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this part was awesome how kria starts glaring rey and their cute fight i just loved it

oyye madam u have not send pm to





Edited by anniemathias - 13 years ago
kritzzz_ArSha thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Do continue n thanks 4 the pm!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey pls continue dis and mt 2 ur pm list pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow another ff...amazing...aww rey lost in kriya n swayam haha flash back mai chala gaya...update the next part soon n mereko pm karna mat bhulna
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oi aakshu n tehmu jaanies wah wah gud goin !!!!!!!!!!!
muah me luvd it rey !!!!!!
update soon jaanies !!
lov ya both lods !!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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god kriyaansh r so adorable🤗 so sweet love them and the new ff is too good 👏👍🏼amazing and mindblowing plz plz update soon and thnx for pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dude course mann we need kriyaansh ff as we dnt get dem in d3 do give me mre and pm u both rocked dis part cntinue fast
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Posted: 13 years ago
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dat was awsummm
n hmara romeo to har baar khoya rhta h...hehehe
n yaar flashback mai le gye tum dono to
love it
n plss cntinue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hahahahahahaha...rolling and toppling wid laughter...rey tum kiski side ho...rey lost"uski"...,den that dehraduni baatein,and of course the dhanyavad...how can v expext rey to speak such flawless hindi...lol...u must surely continue it. yar.as always m wid u to read ...lol...newAYS jaldi updt krna...

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