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bridgeofdreams

@bridgeofdreams

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Nice OS. LOVED IT😊 Especially the title and itne dino se mere piche padhi ho amma kahiye na..aj keh diya"

Though I'm not Indian, I could understand most of the words( Thank God Arnav spoke some english otherwise I wouldn't be able to understand most of this OS)

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Hey!

That was a really nice plot and the dialogues were very good too but maybe you could concentrate on their formation and structure and also the way you present them in the sense of upper case and lower case letters...?

But good plot. :)

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fly_dog

@fly_dog

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

will get back on this and others ASAP ..:)

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Awww...lovely and sweet one...i love u Arnav...lol...hope i see this in the future epi and yup lagee raho...hehe😉

Edited by tenxin - 13 years ago

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MarkZingerBurgr

@MarkZingerBurgr

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

love the OS coz my username was there.lols... love the buaji and asr character. good job. thnx for the pm.

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Arshi_Virman

@Arshi_Virman

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Aaawwhh Lovely OS ..! 🤗 ❤️ Please make more on Arshi..! x

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Sabina

@Guguminti

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

thanks for pm . . very very nice

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farah

@Endless-LOvE

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Aww that was good
I'm happy that he.fight for her family.!!!
N he finally called her mom amma!!
I hate that reena!!
She is a witch man!!
Lovely update

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#88

wowfinally he clld dem Amma babuji,,'

he insultd Reena..n dint care 4 d deal..jo ASR k liye sbse badi cheez h.bt Arnav k liye..Khushi.:)

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Aparna

@-aparna-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Oyee this is emoshunal yaar
i thought i wud read smthing lite as my mood is so down:(

chal koi baat nahi keh hi diya betwa ne amma lol
but de r not beggers but yes but for asr status very poor.