OS: Confessions Part 1, Part 2 & Part 3 (complete) - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it...specially how you recapped the entire show from both perspectives...the stage is now set...waiting for khushis response... :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
wow that was brilliantly written ⭐️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
wow this was just amazingly written!!! you could literally feel arnav's pain during his narration!

awesome job!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
Very beautifully written
and each character totally in place.
He narrated all facts and logic and actions in ASR style ⭐️
gave her the two options in ASR style ⭐️
thought through her comforts / dilemmas post divorce for option 1 in ASR style ⭐️
and looked eye to eye and pleaded for forgiveness (stay with me) in Arnie style 😳
too good 👏👏👏👏
PM me for the next part
cant wait to read Khushi's reaction
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
Wow. What Will Khushi Do Now?? Please Update Soon. Your Story Is Amazing. Make It A SS If You Can.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
awesome! Beautifully written.
If only someone like Shashi is able to help, we will hear the longest speech from Arnav and the longest silence from Khushi AND all will be well. I wish this comes true!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
One of the best OS, I have read so far. ⭐️⭐️⭐️ You deserve it. That was excellent.
Please continue, Do not stop/
PM me too.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Superb!!!!!!!!!!
PM me if you write more..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
brilliant !!!! ha ha kjushi bilkul chup and arnav is doing all talking :) nice story..plz continue...can u plz pm me:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
Omg that was sooo Cute! loved it Amazing! "stay with me" ⭐️
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