Burning in your Love (Part 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, & 13)

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Shruti

@...shruti...

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

wow smita u are becoming good day by day i so love this series

the description of their impatientness

the kiss everything was so beautiful

and payal is really very sweet adopting bubbly awww😍

great FF continue soon

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Bibliobibulus

@Bibliobibulus

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Beautiful update.. Just loved it... Thanks for the pm.. :)

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Mami has such heartless, uncouth friends.

Glad that Bubbly would have a family of her own now, Payal has such a big heart.

Loved the way Arnav unwrapped his present. Man, its getting so sensuous here...

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mysticblue14

@mysticblue14

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#174

This was 😊awesome update

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#175

fabulous update

loved it a lot

emotional 1

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..Kritz..

@..Kritz..

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#176

Wow that was so well written, I loved it to the core.😊
Not only is Arnav repentant about what he did to Khushi, but also the whole Gupta parivar and this shows how much he has changed in Khushi's love❤️
The Payal-Aakah-Bubbly scene was a nice touch and enjoyed reading it.

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mimi

@moon_mine

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#177

loved it!!!!

too nice!!!!

really an emotional 2nd part!!!!

made me cry!!!!

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tennismaniac19

@tennismaniac19

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#178

How do you manage to write so beautifully??? I'm just speechless!!! Not just the brilliant romantic scenes but the whole idea of Bubbly being adopted by Payal and Akash was lovely!!! Have to give it to you Smita! Brilliant!! 👏

I sincerely hope that this Burning In Your Love series never ends 😆 I love reading it sooo much!!! Please do PM me when you update and when you write new OSs. Whenever I come across something written by you my heart literally jumps up in excitement!!!! You have this easy flowing style which really soothes the reader. Hope to read tons and tons more of your work! Keep up the good work!

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Harshnee Vora

@harshnee

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#179

👍🏼luved it. continue soon. luv it when akash and payal adpoted bubbly and luved arnav's sweet torture looking forward to see wat happens in the next update. hoping to see sme cute arnav and khushi scenes and thx a lot for the pm 👏