SwaRon SS - Finally Its time! :D - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
Update soon plzzz I want 2 no way will happen wid tat tannI...plzzz try 2 update 2day
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
aww..!!! amazing man...truely awesum...kash aisa hi scene ho d3 me yaar..loved it 2 d core..thnkz a lot fr d pm...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
wow it was an amazing update and hope this happens minus the kiss as i know that wont be allowed in real d3 but plz plz plz pray to god this happens
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Wow this was well written...Swaron Kissed? wow...waiting for the next part...jaldi update karna...
Love you Poorvi Di and Jalebi for this SS...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Fab...i really wish aisa hi ho epi me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
The kiss was beautifully described ! I cant wait to read what happens with Taani and Sharon's reaction after she will know that Swayam bought those shoes ! 😊 Awesome update !
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome update Nisha👏
Thanks for the PM, do update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Glad u made them kiss. Otherwise baki sare OS (based on promo ) nothing happened. Loved this part too. Nil's comment was awesome - 'Sharon has lost her nuts'.😆 And please do PM me next time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3:

re:haan wo maine hi swayam ko bola tha sharon k liye gift laane coz wo sharon ko sbse ache se jaanta hai..
Si:bt sharon is thinking ki u gifted her...
Re:i knw coz i didnt tell her..i m gonna tell her today bt usse phele ye sb...

Swayam n sharon entered d canteen..swayam sweating n in anger...sharon had tears in eyes...

Re: Sharon.. Tum Roh kyun rahi ho!
Sh: Woh..

Before She could say anything Swayam Went to Taani right next to him...

Sw: Taani Kya tumne tumhara Vid Edit kiya?
Ta: Huh?! Bhaiya Yeh aap..
Re: Swayam Pagal Ho kya?
Sw: Rey! Ek minute! *To Taani* Kya tumne kiya?
Ta: Haan.. I mean Nahi..
Sh: Jhoot mat bolo! Maine sab kuch sun liya!
Ta: Haan Kiya tha..
Sw: Kyun?
Ta: Pata nahi..

Saying this She runs away from there! Swayam feels Too guilty on what happned.. And he simply Walks away.. Sharon wanted to stop him but..

Re: Sharon mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai..
Sh: Bolo..
Re: Woh shoes Maine nahi Swayam ne liya tha..
Sh: What?!?! Kyun?
re:coz wo tume sbse ache se jaanta hai..maine hi usse lane bola tha..
Sh:*wipes her tears* n smile..bt den she realised wat she said to swayam...she always thought he was wrong..

She ran away frm d canteen n follow swayam..
She call his name bt he didnt stop...
Swayam reached d parking n widout listening to sharon take his car n drive dat fastly..
Sharon follows her...
Swayam reach his home...open d door n direct in his room...he didnt close dat coz sharon is behind him...

Sw: Kya tum mera peecha karna Chod doge?!

Sh: Swayam I just wanna talk!
Sw: You wanna make me feel worse as usual?!
Sh: You Got me these shoes?!
Sw: Yes! What Now Im a Desperate Staler again...
Sh: Tumne khud yeh kyun nahi diya?
Sw: Bhool gayi kya jo Canteen main hua tha?! Jo bhi tumne Kaha!
Sh: But you are... n
Sw: If you really think Im a Cheapo Who doesnt know what Love is then See this!

Swayam Takes Sharon to a Room and Turns on the Light.. Sharon Just stood there too Shocked to even open her mouth!! The Room was filled with Paintings... Paintings of hers! Then a Bulb clicked in her head.. When she was in his room the other day she had spilled paint on her dress.. Paint!!

Sh: Swayam...


sh once again speechless she has nuthing to say...she is sooo guilty watever she said after watching d painting she cnt even face him...she forgey dat she is der to talk to him...she is soo shocked dat she had tears in her eyes n ran out of d room downstairs n drove her car back direct to her home...
She checked d cell n has 20 miss calls of rey bt nt even in mood to talk to him...she simply switched of d cell...
In der respective rooms..

Swayam realised dat wat he had done...he is nt regretting bt he himself is shocked dat d sceret of him is nt d secret nymore...n room which is hidden frm every1 he himself showed dat to sharon...he himself is confused y he did sooo...he is sooo hurt by her word dat he left soo weak dat he cnt take dat nymore n by doing all dis he himself told sharon dat d book is never shut n will never in future...he is angry wid himself how cn he goes soo weak...n he bang his hand on d wall..blood is cuming out n he didnt even care to bandage dat...


Sharon had then realised that she had left her Walet at Swayam's place and Needed it immediately.. So she went to his house and knocked.. Taani had opened the door and Sharon just walked in with all right as if it was her own house and went to Swayam;s room..

She saw Swayam there Bleeding and rushes and holds his hand...

Sh: Swayam!! Yeh kya kiya tumne?!
Sw: Tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho?!
Sh: Forgot my Wallet.. Doesnt matter now.. Atleast Bandage toh Lagvao...
Sw: Take your wallet and Leave.. I wanna be alone..
Sh: Shut up..

She gets up and Opens the cupboard to find any Firstaid kit or bandage.. Near the Kit she found an Already Blood filled bandage and then remembered that It was the thing he had tied for her when she was hurt..


sharon back into her sense n take d bandage n ran wer swayam is sitting on d bed..

.

Swayam trying to hold swayam's hand bt he is nt letting her told...


Sh:swayam ye kya bacho jaisi harkat kr rahe ho bandage karwa lo usk baad i m going...


Swayam gave his hand on hers...he is looking downwards n sharon looking at swayam...
She is done wid d bandage bt still on d bed..
Sw:sharon ab jao yahan se i want to b alone...
Sharon is nuthing to say...coz herself is d reasn on his rudeness..she ho goes out of d room n closes d door...


Sharon went home and tore her room apart!! She wanted to Kill herself for Hurting Swayam so much.. But she was no less hurt too.. She felt betrayed that he didnt choose her to be his partner in dance.. It was Odd...

Sh: Swayam! Im Sorry but jo tumne kiya woh sahi nahi tha.. I thought I was the only one.. ignoring Kria who coud dance as ur partner and Now!! It hurts me to hurt you! I want you but I dunno if I can handle it.. ARRGHHH!!!!

Meanwhile in Swayam's room...

Sw: Baar baar.. BAAR BAAR Why do I Lose control when she is around!! I cant be near you Sharon nor Can I be away!! Main Aisa kyun Hoon! ARRGGHHH!!!!


sharon's room...
Whole day flashback going on in her mind continuously...canteen den her n swayam convo in d room..swayam's place dose paintings swayam's hurt hand his eyes...
She decided dat she has to talk swayam tomorrow..bt she is clueless wat she gonna talk..lying on d bed n had a sleepless nite...
Swayam's room...
Sitting beside d window n crying...he is badly hurt..one more tym his love has been questioned...he is baar baar watching his hand n d bandage...
He dont wanna talk to ny1 n decided nt to go to d clg tomorrow...he texted rey about d same...

Nxt morning..sharon reachedd clg...n fing swayam nower...
Se asked rey n he told her dat he is nt cuming to d clg today...she all shattered...n go to d old staicase to spend sum tym alone...
Bt she is shocked wen she opens d door...

Edited by nish22 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
Loved the POV's of both in the end. Waiting for the next update. But really very painful chapter .Feeling for both of them . I really hope life takes a positive turn for both of them now.
Edited by marauder - 13 years ago

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