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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

cliffhanger?!

aww..! i so await to read what happens in the abandoned corridor!

the part was nice, but too quickly bahut kuch hogaya, he got to noe abt Taani's mischief, Sharon saw the paintings, bandaged him, both of them were hurt, crying and in pain, and she decides to talk to him and also regrets behaving with him in that manner..!

i wish you could you taken it easy and smooth.. focusing more on each bit rather than having so many put together..!

anyways a nice read..!

thnx fr d pm

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

last part was nice..!

the passionate kiss! :)

thnx fr d pm

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purvi

@-dark.horse-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: surbhi_d3
cliffhanger?!
aww..! i so await to read what happens in the abandoned corridor!
the part was nice, but too quickly bahut kuch hogaya, he got to noe abt Taani's mischief, Sharon saw the paintings, bandaged him, both of them were hurt, crying and in pain, and she decides to talk to him and also regrets behaving with him in that manner..!
i wish you could you taken it easy and smooth.. focusing more on each bit rather than having so many put together..!
anyways a nice read..!
thnx fr d pm

dis is nt a one shot...dis is a short story..n for writing story v need points...n v wqnt everything f9 between swaron v need to cleqr all MUs...dis thing nt gonna happen in show v knw dat bt dis just a story written by fans wat dey wqnt...btw thanks for ur comment...