About Last Night THREAD 4**Part 38-48**

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: napstermonster

If I am a homeless hobo on the streets, panhandling for Internet cafe money this time next week, Its going to be on your head. And yeah. the pan handling money will probably also be so I can get my ALS update. ON time. This is your review-not of the piece you have been working on, which is so addictive I think you should honestly have warned us before starting on it.--But on how distracting, how integral it has become. Damn you, fantastic writer...my fists are shaking in the air in a vaguely threatening manner...take from that what you will.

Is it any consolation to you, my fist-shaking-hair-tossing friend, that I am as addicted to writing these updates as you are to reading them? 😃

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sur91

@sur91

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#732

As usual I loved the update. Especially arnav's plan A.
Oh how I wish he could execute his plan A.
Continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#733

Aww this was cute
anjali and arnav scene
they enjoyed and laughed after ages
the arnav and khushi scene was great!

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#734

Ahem...ahem...And I am not referring to a character from any other serial!😆

You have portrayed the pain of the family so well. All suffering with Anjali.

Love Little Khushi. Normally kids in stories make me want to run, but your Khushi is one sweet fairy. Yash blushing. Wah!😉

Waiting to know about Yash's past, my dear M!

Edited by smitar - 13 years ago

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angellovergirl

@angellovergirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#735

i loved the scene between arnav and anjali where he asks her if she would prefer it if her killed shyam. for me it was quite a poignant scene

as usual, loved the update and thanks fr the pm :)

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rockinggirl5

@rockinggirl5

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#736

I loved it. It was very well written. I love how you are showing Anjali's despair but still she is fighting. I really like little Khushi. I really hope yash and Anjali get their happiness. I can't wait for the next part.

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.x-bumblebee-x.

@.x-bumblebee-x.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#737

Haha love it... especially the last bit:P

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oops-whoops

@oops-whoops

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#738

first if all extremely sorry fr not appreciating fr ur efforts fr part 42 and 43 my net was disconected and i didnt get the opurtunity to read them finally i read them all and i m loving the bonding between little khushi and anjali.

part 43 i loved it wen anjali said was killing shayam arnav's plan b ?????????// and arnav replied no it was plan A ? it was funny but emotional too.

and ohh for past 3 updates we missed the romance but its back and totaly in ur style😳

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#739

Wow seriously this was beyond amazing...how do you do this everytime? each and every update is just fantastic...loved the way you are developing the story...eagerly waiting to read the next part..thanks for the PM

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#740

Sorry if my comment might be a bit rushed today, I have so many assignments left to do, that I literally came on here to read some FFs to procrastinate, and yours is the first I am commenting on, since the amazing parts you write just compel me to write to tell you how much I enjoy your story!

Once again, you have blown me away with how you incorporate so many of your characters in a story, and give them distinct personalities that makes it so enjoyable to read!

This was a beautiful part, and i can see the blossoming attraction or spark between Yash and Anjali :)

Amazing, amazing, amazing!!! Thank you for such a beautiful story, and such amazing, regular updates! Not sure what I would do without reading something of yours every day! :)

PS: Ever thought about writing a book? :)