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Posted: 13 years ago

Nice... Eagerly waiting for Sameera's expression

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey! awesome parts :) sorry for the late comment.

Geet is really innocent. she's fallen in love with maan, and she gets so happy when he comes close to her too. she can't bear his anger though, and she got scared! i hope for her sake, that her fairy tale romance comes true!

maan is not a bad person, but then he gets angry a lot, especially with geet! what is it about her that makes him so angry? i guess getting married to her against his will has something to do with it. i hope he changes, and at least tries to get to know her!

so they're going on a honeymoon, that's awesome! i hope they get closer, but i don't think that's going to happen. i'm curious to know what happens in london! and who's sameera? does maan actually like her? :/


Edited by aish_punk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Geet thinking abt her HM. Her pov was lovely.

Maan always in angry mode.

Geet is trying to be close to him. But Maan is
staying far frm her.

Maan n Geet talks were nice. How sweetly she confessed her love.

Maan saying sorry to hee. N carrying her in his arms...
Hayee Geet is on clouds 9.

Wat promise did Geet ask for???

Thanks for pm.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi All,
To get PM now please
After 3 more PMs I will be sending Update PMs from this new ID.
Thank,
Anu
Part 6
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Next day Geet was feeling much better as her wounds were drying. Maan would leave in just four days now.

He was already pissed off when his dad confirmed about Geet's ticket ready and handed him her tickets and passport. He could not believe they were serious about it. He was not at all ready to spend his life with her all alone in same house now'. he thought he was not prepared for this change in his life but he could not say much'.

So he decided to cool himself before he busted out. So he decided to take Vicky and Annie out as then they would meet almost after a year'.

Geet anyway could not go with them as She had Muhdikhai and some neighboring women would visit.

After all were gone, Maan's mom Kavita came

"Geet puttar, are done with you packing" Geet looked confused' "yes, just after four days you guys are leaving'" After she left Geet was in a lala land' she is going to do her packing for HM.

Then she got a super idea

"Maan always thinks I am a no use person, I will surprise him today' packing to unhone bhi nahi kee hai' I will do our packing for Honeymoon'." But she did not know how she should do the packing, leave alone HM packing' so she called her precious source in this matter' Rajji from her room's landline.

"Rajji' kaisee hai tou" "arre Geet' hayyee' kaisa tha tera first night"

Geet had nothing to say on that' she made her face

"Ohh, I have called to ask how to do HM packing" she giggled with shy "we are going to London' ksis ko batana nahi"

So Rajji, jaise Geet wise friend, gave her the precious knowledge on HM packing and following those instructions'

She took one of Maan's bag and one hers pink bag' In Maan's bag she placed both their outfit to go outing and in other in her pink one that according to her they should use inside the hotel according to her'.giggling to herself' feeling shy. Rest of all Maan's clothes went inside the closet' This was the bag which Maan had already got ready for leaving'

In the evening when almost Geet was done with her packing she was called by Dadima for Muhdekhai as some of Dadima's and Mom's friend has come' so she left the bags on the bed..OPEN,. She got ready with help of Kavita in red ciffon saree.

Maan in the meanwhile returned to all tired from whole day outing' he enters the room all in mood to rest but his bed was occupied by two bags'.

"Why are these bags on bed.. ohhh that one is mine'. What is it doing on my bed, I had already packed this one phir'."

"And this Pink Bag" then some reality hit him

"No wonder'.. Geet' ohh no"

But his shock was still to come up when he went to remove the bags from bed'. He found the chains were open'he lifted the hood to close when he was surprised to see Geet's clothes inside his bag'.

He opened both bags and found both of them have both their cloths'. Geet had messed up with his bag and also placed some of his clothes in her pink bag'..

"Geet ohhh no' not again'. Isse aisee bhi kyun banaya'" he sat on bed frustrated

"Not a single second of rest I have" the more he looked at the bags his anger went up and up'. He was trying to control his anger'.

"better I go to Gym, come back and then talk to Geet' otherwise I am again going to say something or the other'. I can't believe I have to stay with her all alone in London"

He came back from gym after half hour got fresh and called Nikhil

"Nikhil send Geet to my room" "Yes sir"

Listening of Maan calling Geet quickly excused herself from between the woman, otherwise she was enjoying the chat.

"I know you are surprised'. Maine saree packing khud jo kerlii'" she patted herself

Maan was waiting for her in the room but the moment she entered the room in red saree' high heels, slight pink lips and elegant big jhumka'. He could not stop staring at her'. she looked out of world and Maan's eyes unknowingly hooked on her' something beyond his control, he was not able to remove his gaze from her'. somewhere his heart was not neating normally' never ever have Maan let himself get lost in any woman'. Many beautiful students were so flat on him and he was so used to ignore pretty girls'. But what was with this girl.

Geet came in front of him, she was about to say something when he, without knowing what he is doing, started removing her hair strand from her shoulder' his fingers touched the soft white skin of her neck and shoulder'. His touch and Geet's heart started to race.. she closed her eyes to feel him' Maan could not just make him finger to leave her skin'. His hands spreaded on her' his thumb rubbing her cheeks and his other fingers scaressing her neck'. Geets was completely weak on her knew

Tu jo choole pyaar se, araam se mar jaaun

Aaja chanda baaho mein tujhmein hi ghum hoi jaaun mai,

Tere naam mein kho jaaun,

Saiyaan, saiyaaan.

Geet was shaking and Maan was in Trance looking at the beauty in front of him.

While his hands stared moving down her neck to her bare back both lost in different world there was some sound which suddenly there was noise which broke Maan's trance and he turned to other side.

"What was I doing'. Thank God this noise' yeh ladki mujhe pagal kerdegi" He anger rose even higher' he was irritated by his acts.

"I hate this' why this noise have to come now' pehli baar to Maan aise mere pass'. And this Noise"

Maan turned trying to gather why he actually called her

"You called me for something" Geet said lowering her eyes' her lips shaking and cheeks red with shy and hand knotting her pallu'.

Maan wanted her to stop shying and reminding him what he just did'.

"What is all this" he said sternly yet trying to maintain his calm, signaling at the bed "Ji"

He showed her the bags'. "You messed up with my bags?? " he asked

Geet immediately got excited about her great doing

"Got surprised, right?? Hamaree London kee packing"

"Hamaree London kee packing?? My bag was already packed'" "No, This is how we do packing for HM'"

"London?HM?..." Maan started laughing' he actually could not stop laughing

"Ohhh God'. Kis fursat me banaya hai isse"

"Geet what do you think we are going London for" "HM"

"And who told you that' did I speak about it anytime'. Aisa hota to kya main tumhe batata nahi"

"you didn't even tell me that I am coming to London with you" she said little hurt about it'. he ignored

"Geet you say, you love me'. Do you even know what I do and where I live" he asked practically and logically

"but why do I need to know that to love you'.. " he asked innocently'

Maan could not believe she knew nothing about him and married him and said she loved him'

He anyhow told her about him, all he does as he thought it was necessary and they were going to London to stay there'.

"London, just we two together'. Nahi nahi.. we will stay here"

"I stay in London'. You can think about yourself and decide for yourself and get this packing fix'.. have I to tell you clearly' don't touch my things without permission'." He left in anger'

Geet tried to fix everything as much as she could'. "Again I made him angry'. "

Maan was all frustrated with everything'. His acts, how could he do this' never ever had he got so diverted by things'. Even with Sameera, who he had promised to marry, he never felt the way this crazy girl made his loose his senses

"All this because of this girl'. She will make me go crazy'." He was all pissed of while sitting in a family room with all when Geet was trying to fix his bag in their room.

He was irritated when Dadima said "All women who came were praising Geet' her innocence and beauty' aur ek raunak hai usme' Maan you agree or not, she will full your life with colors' Saameera, aapp jo bhi kahiye' aur dull bana deti aapke life ko"

She did not tell him that they did not had positive vibes for her' he will never believe it.

Maan who was already upset with her, his anger rose with comparison "Do not compare sensible and composed Sameera with this sample"

"Maan this is how you speak about your wife" Raj scolded

"Dad you have no idea how she messes up my life" and he left.

Geet was trying to fix his bag thinking

"We are going to stay in London' all alone with him' ohh no' but Geet you have no option,you can't stay away with him"

While putting his stuffs back

"babaji yeh kahan phasa diya' kisse pyar kerwa diya mujhe' to stay alone with him sound so dangerous but also I can't stay here without him"

Maan came to room after dinner. Al while dinner he was giving angry glares to Geet' how could she mess up with his bag and more on how he loosed himself?

Geet was thinking all night

"If he doesn't take me to London along with him then' No I will not make him angry.. per kaise?? Main kuch jaan ker to nahi kerti na babaji'."

Then after thinking a lot "yes, this is right' I won't come near him, I will not stay in this room' haan phir to koi galtee hogee nahi mujhse'"

Next to be continued:

Precap: Geet missing

Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part.
Precap is interesting. Wer geet is gone?
Edited by SONU_29 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
anu,
thanks dear, i enjoyed this one...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Poor and innocent Geet... and angry Maan...

It would be interesting to know.. how they fall in love...

Thanks for the update... continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update! Geet is just too cute =)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update⭐️... Mindblowng.👏 Hope maan ke gusee mei geet ko chot na pahunchee.
-LUV Anyaa😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg!her little innocent mind decided to stay away frm him..
Hw dare he praise sameera ?

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