~~KRIYAANSH FF~~ PHIR MOHABBAT CHAP 10 PAGE 73-NEW* - Page 42

Originally posted by: --Akshu--

hey guys i have not got such a nice respones as i expected but still i will cont for those who liked it hope many ppl will like it secondly:i want comments ha comments n likes if u dnt i will discouraged in writing

thirdly:i m changing the ff name from tumse pyaar hua to PHIR MOHABBAT

so here is chap 1

she was crying suddenly a car cumes n stops in front of her 2 ppl get out of the car they run towards her

they were swayam n neha

neha:di app theek hona plzz mat ro

swayam:ha kria plzzz hum maise koi nahi janta tha ki woh aisa karega

tht girl was kria:swayam,neha kya kiya tha maine pyaar aur usne mujhe dhoka diya

swa:kria relax n chalo ghar chalte hain tumare dad pareshan ho rahe hai

neha:ha di dad bahout pareshan ho rahe hain

kria:nahi woh pareshan hai par iseliye ki main ghar jao aur woh mujhe tanne mare ki maine unki baat n mankar yeh sab kiya

swa:kria just shut up n cum wid us

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they reach home kria was very sad neha was her younger sister kria loved her sister very badly even neha loves kria

swayam is kria's best friend n neha's firend

next day kria was in her room crying her dad enters

dad:kria how are u now

kria:m f9 dad

dad:maine kaha tha woh ladka acha nahi hai woh sirf ek flirt aur casinova hai woh tumse pyaar nahi karta but tumne tumari par fir bhi maine tumri shadhi hone di acha hua woh tumhe chodkar chala gaya atlest tumari life abhi kharab toh nahi hui

kria:matlab?????

dad:woh main tumhe kal batunga u rest now

kria was alone thinking abt the memories she spent with him whom she loved how she met him how he confessed tht he loved how he came at night to meet her from the window

kria:wht did u do this to me RS

p.S =kria use to call him MR RS

but i need to move on i hate u i hate u

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thts it for now sorry guy for such a chota update i will update the next part tom or day after or may be tday it self lol

sorry if u found this part bpring but next part will be awesome

plzz like n comment

Originally posted by: Ash.TanHa21

Kamini atleast mention my name! Bol na sabko ki meri outline ki vajah se hi tu pura dance seq. likh payi. chup chap credit de! 😎

Originally posted by: achuAR

Awesome update 👏 👏

could feel her pain...

good job askhu 😃

woh sab chod...woh gaana kya tha ???

aah...Dil Sambal Jaa Zara... 😛

Arre waah Ash mujhe toh patha hi nahi tha ki tu lyricist bhi hain... 😉

Badi achi likhi hain tune 😆

I love u yaar...

tere liye main bhi abhi abhi ek gaana likhi hain...

hope ki tujhe acha lage

"Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon

Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon

Kya y

eh sab ko hota hai

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun

Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya

Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai

Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda" ☺️😉

Originally posted by: achuAR

Originally posted by: Ash.TanHa21

aiyoo! aadhi gharwalii! ☺️☺️ tu bhi na! 😳😳

@Akshi: Are haan! sorry maine dekha nhi! :P vese tune thnk u nhi bola toh mai bhi sry kyu bolu? :P i tk my sry bak! :P haan love u too! 😆

Originally posted by: achuAR

Aiyooo ??

that is supposed to be a malayalam word ri8 ?? 😉

Tujhe malayalam bhi aathi hain...

aree waah 😆