A New twist in Kria's lyf KR FF part 7 pg 30 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey..wheneve u fink ov coming back..do update it n pm me too..dat was lovely
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hey guys before u throw chappals or tomatos to me i'm sorry for being really really late.any way I have got an update now I wont say anything much. please read and review. critical response always welcome...

here goes the update

recap: the whole gang got to know that they have to dance together in footloose. Sharon and kriya girly talk and kriya's mom out of town.

kriya went and booked the rehearsal hall for herself and changed.

she started the music on a loud voice and started

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dmgpu3eRVDU ear plugs on

hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte tere bina kya wajood mera X2

she started swaying her body as if she was like water. she rotated her both the hands simultaneously and did a 180 degree split smoothly.

tujse juda agar hojayenge toh khud se hi ho jayenga juda

she raised and swirled across in a circle. se jumped in the air and did a fly kick.

kyunki tum hi ho ab tum hi ho zindagi ab tum hi ho

chain bhi mera dard bhi meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

she lifted her right leg and swirld herself in two rounds. she went two steps forward and stood still for a while and then bent herself and raised her right leg up to 120 degree. then came back to her position.

music

she started swirling around the whole hall and finally came at the centre.

tera mera rishta hai kaisa ek pal door gawara nahi

tere liye har roz hai jeete tujko diya mera waqt sabi

koi lamha mera na ho tere bina

har sans pe naam tera...aaa

shi did 180 splid and rotated her leg and went to the right side of the miroor and touched it

kyunki tum hi ho ab tum hi ho

zindagi ab tum hi ho chain bhi

mera dard bhi meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho

se came back too her position and started swirling around and round

unbeknown to her rey was standing at the door. he came at the rehearsal hall hearing the loud music. he was mesmerized by her dance yet again.. he subconsciously started to move towards her

but to is bad luck te music stopped and kriya spotted him.

she stared at him with questioning look . He was puzzeled for a while but managed to make an excuse.

kriya- aap...aap yeha ya kar rahe hei

rey - well yeh sawal to mujhe tumhe poochna chahiye ki raat ki 7:00 ko tum yaha college ke rehearsal hall mein kya kar rhi ho?

kriya was a bit puzzeled for a bit but then went into hyper mode

kriya - kya sath baj chue hai ... mujhe pata hi nahi chala kaisa tym guzar gaya ... mujhe abhi ke abhi ghar jana hoga...

rey - hey listen hyper mat hona tum chaho toh mein tumhe drop kardoon

kriya- kyun ... aapko itni takleef uthani ki zaroorat nahi mein khud hi chali jaungi

rey aur ithni rat ko tumhe auto milna todha mushkil hoga toh please meri baat maano aur chalo mein tumhe drop kar doonga

ere walking on the road. there was dead silence between the two. He wanted to break the ice so he started

rey – waise tumhara dance accha tha

kriya with slight blush – thanks waise aapne footloose ke bare mei kya socha hai

rey wispers – mei yaha humari bath aage badhane ki soch rahoa hoon lekin isse to sari duniya ki padi hai

kriya kuch kaha aapne

rey ha bas ye kehraha tha ki ye news sun kar sab logon ko yeh idea shayad pasand nahi aya hoga

kriya - shayad jo kal student councellor aaraha hai voh shayad bazi palat de

rey - bazi wat?

Kriya – i mean turning the table

Rey -ok

Kriya – waise aapko kya lagta hai ki woh cousellor e hoga ya she

Rey – mujhe kaise pata hoga... lekin kyun

Kriya – kuch nahi bas meri ek friend hai dehradun mei uske college mein aise hi councellor ayethe lekin woh lagthe nahi ki woh councellor hai

Rey- mathlab?

Kriya – mathlab voh hatte katte the u know biceps triceps 6 packs etc

Rey felt bit jealous but decided to play his cards

Rey – i guess woh she hogi u kno sweet and gorgeous zero size kamar etc

Kriya's expression changed for a while... rey had to supress a smile seeing her expression

Kriya trying to divert the topic – voh jo koi bhi o yeh divide ko mitana chahiye waise agar dekha jaye toh humare teams mei...

She was tell sudeenly shee slipde on her heels and was about to fall but rey caught her just in tym... they both share an intense eyelock

So the chapter ends here

Te next chapter woood be better

Speaking of which the precap: rain romance of kriyansh, kriya gets a shocked after reaching home

-Srujana-

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Posted: 12 years ago
due to some reasons I cant sed PM's to every one
if you wanna recive the PM please buddy me to srujanahpvr
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just nw read the whole ff. . .
Its realy superb. . .
Realy. .
Continue super soon. .
And a requst,plz update lamba dena.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhukumari

Just nw read the whole ff. . .
Its realy superb. . .
Realy. .
Continue super soon. .
And a requst,plz update lamba dena.

i'll try to make them longer
bt I don't know when i'll be updating
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Posted: 12 years ago
u updated tt😳
amazingg update👏
loveedd ttt❤️
continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update
last part ws awsm
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Posted: 12 years ago

can't believe.. u r back 😲

I remember this story 😆

kriya is so shy around rey ...😊

counsellor aaya nhi.. aur ek dusre ko jealous karna shuru 😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
i read this story a long back... i do what pm for this update...
the chapter was fabulous... i really like the dance of kria and
rey is watch her dance is memorized and rey and kria talk till her home...
continue soon and do pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
The whole ff is superb ..
just read it now ...
amazing
cont soon ..
will be waiting and do pm me .. :)

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