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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

thats kind of like time traveller's wife

but i still like it...wonder what his reaction will be life
cant wait to find out! thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
"Now all the ladies at Shantivan, be it nani , paayal, anjali, all of them possessed the adorable property of not suspecting or understanding anything till it hit them right in the face"

Loved it..you cracked me up on that para..but over all I love the fact that you are going very much with the essence of the characters. Thanks for the PM. I'll buddy you pls PM for future updates.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I feel sad that she had to sell her earrings. Please let ASR know about them.
Thanks for the PM and correct link. Eagerly waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Nice part, continue it..
Add me to ur buddy list.. Pm the update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi! I have buddied you ... Please PM when u have an update. Good going so far :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: saucechips

can someone plz help me out.. i'm new to this forum.. how to send pms to ppl who are not on your buddy list in bulk..u know like i have to send it to each one individually or is there sum shortcut?



hi first the answer to ur question is unfrortunately IF has no such system..u have to have them in the buddy list if u wanna send bulk PMs..
just add them to ur buddy list, or ask any1 who wants PMs to add u (anyway that is what most of us do)

anyway aww this update is adorable!! i loved it!! do update soon!!! poor Khushi, she is selling all her gold stuff to buy her laad governor stuff..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
PART 4
He could'nt believe it! What the hell was the matter with her? He makes a fool of himself in the morning so that she goes into this same mode again? whatever.. this time he was'nt doing anything..

"A..aa..arnav ji"

O no no'when khushi broke his name in three part things invariably turned into every wrong direction..

"kya?"

"wo..hum.." she closed her eyes and in one breath completed the rest of the sentence "humse aapka laptop kharab ho gaya.."

"WHAT?"

"Humse gir gaya.. humara irada nahin tha..hum jaante hain aapke liye zaruri hai par ..hum gir gaye'aur.."

by the last part she was all choked up..

"Khushi tum.."

"Ek minute..humari baat khatm nahi hui.." she turned back, opened the cupboard and taking the new laptop out held it towards him.

For the next few seconds..he was speechless'trying to understand what exactly was going on.. and when he did..

"Khushi.."

"wahi model hai.. humne khaas dekh ke liya hai!"

"Khu'"

"wo nai hai? unhone toh hume kaha ke.."

"Kh'"

"hum jaante hain uspe aapki zaruri cheezen bhi thi'par hum who kaise laayen? hum.."

"JUST LEMME FINISH!!"

silence'

"humne kab mana kiya aapko..? aap.."

breathe in..breathe out..breathe in..breathe out.. control..ok..

"tumhare paas paise kahan se aaye?"

she deliberately avoided his eyes..

"aapse matlab? humne aapke liye naya laa diya na? aur agar who nahi hai toh hame waapas kijiye hum doosra wala le aayenge.."

"that's not the answer to my question"

HP- "Khushiji aapko anjalidi bula rahin hain.."

"Haan HariPrakash ji hum hum aa rahe hain" she said edging past Arnav avoiding his hard stare completely.."

AT TEA

Arnav had rummaged his brain long enough but could just not get it how she had bought the laptop'more importantly why? he had waited for 2 days didn't mean he had to get 2 laptops..

Paayal- "Are khushi... tumne naye earrings pehne hain? bahaut sundar hain.. who amma wale utaar diye?"

khushi's cup shook immediately in her hand spilling some of it on her dress' it didn't go unnoticed..at least by a certain someone on the table..

"nai nai'hum thik hain'haan jiji, kitne dinon se ek hi pehne hue the..yeh hume di ne diye hain" she said smiling nervously towards anjali who gave a broad smile..

"aur hume bahaut khushi hai ke hume ye aapke liye chune'bahaut pyaari lag rahin hain aap'"

khushi looked upto Arnav and the look she got back, she immediately looked away'and that made him damn sure! so this was it'

.IN THE ROOM

"Khushi"

"haan?"

"apni earrings lana"

"kya lana?" she could'nt believe her ears'

"earrings..jo subah pahni thin.."

"kyun?"

"kaam hai.."

"aapko kya kaam hai?"she said gulping..

"tum nervous kyun ho rahi ho? earrings hi mangi hain.."

"hum..hume kaam hai abhi .. aur waise bhi, appko kya matlab hamare jhumkon se? kaunse aapko pehenn'."

she stopped mid-sentence as a fuming arnav raised an eyebrow'

" toh tumne earrings bech din.."

she whirled back..how on earth did he..

"haan bech din'toh?apni bechin hain..hamari marzi'"

" O really?"

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up next- so, what's he going to to do..

Please do leave your reviews.. all views welcome.. hope you like it..😊
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Edited by saucechips - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
i think he is gonna be touched n get them back!!! yay!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59

very nice pls update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
u just have to update sooon!! this was a cliffhanger!!! i sooo wanna know what he does next!!

Loved this update!!

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