"arghh!!! how dare she...!!!!!!! arghh!!!! kal se mera poora mood kharab kardi...kya karoon kya karoon...????/ haan rey tu bhi na...jab wo teri saath hai toh tension ki naam bhi lena galat hai...dategi!!!! chalo ab use baat karta hoon..."rey said to himself in his cabin and sat on the couch with a scrap book in his hand taken 4rm his drawer...
( guys swayam and the rest of the gang were in swayam's cabin coz today they postponed the reharsals...oops i dnt say na...the gang holds an dance academy ...national level wala...rey is the one to come up with the idea and with swayam as partner they strtd the academy...but they didnt find good instructers who would exceed the level they have already seen 4rm college,...that's the gang...the 11 members used to dance as the louians ...(sorry no kriya)...so they finally end up taking the rest of the gang as cheif instructors...all are popular national wide...kk now the things written in blue was in reys cabin and red in swayams)
vish: dude enough kk...yaar 5 saal beethgaye aur hume ab tak ye pata nahi rey kis duniya mei hota hai...
sh: ri8 swayam !!!!! tumne yeh toh bataya ke kal party mei jo thi wahi rey ki wo hai...par tumne ye nahi bataya ki aakhir rey aur uski wo mile kaise??tell me na...
sw: cool sharon...sweety mai sab ko isiliye bulaya ki mai sab ko ajj sab batadu...after all ur our best frnds...
all grinned...
sw: acha toh sweety tumhe bas yahi confusion hai na ki rey aur uski wo kaise mile aur unke beech kya hua??? aur jo kal aayi thi wo rey ko yeh kyun nahi bata rahi thi ki wahi rey ki wo hai...
vicky: shut up guys!!! yeh kya hai??? sharon tum rey ki aur swayam tum rey ki wo ki...kya?argghh!!!!!! tum logon ki wajah se meri bhi dimag kharab hogaya...yeh kya lagarakha hai ...yeh ,wo, wahi,uski wo ,iski wo...arghh!!!!! its damn confusing...swayam pehle tum hame uss ladki ki...wahi tumhari .wo rey ki wo ya kuch aur...i dnt know...uski naam kya hai?? hume tressure hunt nahi khelna hai!!!!!
all: haan batao swayam!!!!
sw: kk...uska naam hai...
r: kriya ghai!!!!!!
he caressed the first page which contained their pic which was taken together and went into flask back...
nil: nice name...ab unki story batayega??
sw: 4r sure...actually
flashback...
(flash back rey ki piont of view ...im mean like he is the narrator...aakhir story uski hai toh wahi pura jaanta hai na??😛)
"rey yeh woh aunty ko deke aana ...jo aaj subah humare bagal ki flat mei aaye the..."
"mom...yeh kya?? aap unhe ye curry kyun de rahe ho???"
"beta wo subah hi shift hue the na...khana kaise banayenge?? aur baahar ka khana??? pata hai na yaha bahar ki khana kaise hoti hai...im sure woh roti banalengi...so curry mai de rahi hun..."
"mom toh aap hi do na mai kyun...mujhe cricket keliye jaana hai...swayam is waiting"
"rey jaate jaate deke chale jaana...now no more arguements...chalo take it"
he took it hesitantly and rang the bell of their neighbours on ri8...a girl opened the door ...soon after seeing the girl rey bit back a smile and called her with full attitude...
"hi moti!"
"WHAT??? how dare u call me that..."
"arey moti ho toh moti hi bulaunga na???"
"u...tumhe manners nahi hai kya...u stupid..."
"oh hello...dnt call me stupid...im very smart kk..."
"beta koun hai???" her mom shouted 4rm inside cmng to the door...
before she could reply her mom came and asked rey...
"beta aap.??"
"aunty woh hum bagal ki flat mei rehtehai...iss appartment ki president ki beta hun...maa ne dene keliye diya tha..."
"acha toh isiliye tum itna show off..."
"kriya chup...andar jao.."
"par maa isne mujhe..."
"maine kaha jao..."
she went in cursing him when he smirked at her...
"thanks a lot beta...and by the way aapka naam??"
"rey...reyaansh singhania aunty...par aap plzz mujhe rey bulayiye ga...coz mujhe koi itna bada naam se bulaye ..mujhe acha nahi lagta..."
"theek hai rey...andar aaona."
"no aunty friends wait kar rahe hai...cricket khelna hai.."he excused and ran...
"toh tumhe lamba naam se bulana acha nahi lagta reyaansh"she said to herself as he left...she was listening hiding in a corner...she went to her room and saw the boys playing in the ground...
(p.s- they were of age 12...😆...and they were the only big one in the chillar gang of that appartment...swayam is reys bestfrnd and studying in same school and same cls..)
in the evening (its a sunday so al the boys as usual sticked to the ground till ni8..) she was gng to the nearby shop when the boys teased her...
"oye moti kaha jaa rahi ho???"
rey and swayam were sitting beside and discussing sm cls notes...they heard it and they looked back to see...they found the boys teasing her...she was on a verge of crying...here rey is fuming with anger...(hahaha🤣 bachpan se hi protective hai humara hero...)
he went there with swayam...
"oye ye tum kya kar rahe ho...woh tumse badi hai...kya badon se aise baatkarte hai?? "
she was surprised that rey was telling that...
"woh bhai"
"bas...i dnt expect dis 4rm u all...sorry bolo usse"
"sorry didi"all said...
she gave a small smile and went into the appartment ...but her tears were not gone unnoticed by rey...he excused himself and followed her...she went to the terrace and sat down on a bench type thing...he stood back of her silently...she looked up...
"universe ji...sab mujhe mooti kyun kehte hai??? jhalli ye kaisi sawal hai...tu hai hi moti...par kyun universe ji ...mai toh jyaada khati bhi nahi hun"
rey smiled at this...ye kitni wierd hai...universe ji??? yeh ladki sach mei alag hai...
"universe ji sab mujhe tease kar rahe hai...plzz mujhe patli banao..."
"tah mai tumhe kaise chidaunga??"he said...
she turned back wiping her tears...he went and sat beside...
"acha ye batao...ye tum kis se baat kar rahi ho??"
"mai tumhe kyun bataun??? and tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?? tumhe toh mujhe chidana pasand hai na?? toh unhe kyun rokha/...mujhe rote hue dekh ke bohut khushi hoti hai na??? aur tum jao yahan se mujhe tumse baat karni hai...jao yahan se..."
rey tried to speak...par wo toh hai hi by birth baatcutter...
"woah!!!!! wait...gimme a sec...u r such a baatcutter...kisiko baat karne nahi deti...and haa i like teasing u but dnt know y i dnt lyk u crying...so maine aisi baat ki...okk sorry ab jhagda chodo...u know i hate fights...let us be frnds...wat say??"
"sach mei tum mujhse frndship karoge?? "
"yah sachi...hmm...dance ki kasam..."
"dance ki kasam!!!!!!!!!!! "
"itna excited kyun ho rahi ho??"
"kyun ki i like dance"...nahi...i love dance..."
she got up and did sm steps ...rey strtd laughing...
"kya hua??"
"oye moti...u look funny dancing..."
she again became sad...he stopped laughing and made her sit...
"sorry...but really ur steps are gud.. acha ye batao mere aanese pehle kis se baat kar rahi thi??"
"woh...apni universe ji se"
"koun??😕"
"universe ji...woh waha joh upar baite hai...pata hai mai sab kuch unse share karti hun...woh bohut ache hai...meri har baat sunte hai aur meri madat karte hai..."
"oh!!!! kk...acha ye batao tera naam kya hai??? "
"mera naam ...mera naam kriya hai reyaansh"
"reyaansh?? plzz dnt call me lyk dat ajeeb lagta hai...call me rey"
"acha...agar mujhe tumhe rey bulana hai toh tum bhi mujhe moti nahi bulaoge..."
"hmm...umm...kk...but i will call u baatcutter ...its too cool..."
"hmm...kkk!!!!!!!"
"then frnds???"
"haan"
"toh batao...kounsi school mai padh rahi ho???"
"... school mai"
"wow!!!! mai bhi usi school ka hun...aur tumhara entrance exam % kya hai???"
"98%"
"wow grt!!!!! 98% and mujhe das din choti ...matlab hum ek hi clss ...infact same section..."
"really ?? par tumhe kaise pata ki mai tumse 10 din choti hun???"
"woh maine papa ki records mei dekha ...wo president haina so he has the record ..."
"ohh...!!!!!!"
"acha toh chale...mai tumse hamari ek aur cls mate se milvatahun... dnt worry wo mera jaisa nahi hai...he is too gud..."
"tum bhi bohut ache ho😳" ( believe me after dis line i was lyk🤣)
"really!!!!!! thank u 😳"
"chale??"
"huh?? oh...haan..."
hamara rey abhi se lost lost...🤣 kriya patli ho ya moti...rey keliye kriya kriya hai...😛
they went down and rey introduced swayam to kriya...
(sorry guys beech beech mei i will ri8 present also...so in pink is flash back)
"terrace pe aisa kya hua hoga swayam ki donon frnds bangaye??"nil asked raising eyebrow...
"pata nahi...jo bhi ho...it was their private talk and maine bohut baar poocha...par rey kabhi bata ta hi nahi...its a sweet memory 4r him,..."
all smiled...
"kahi romance??"vicky
"babu...wo bache the tab..."
"haan par..." bharat
"dude tum logon ki gandi brain use mat karna and u cntinue swayam,,,,,,,,,,"vishaka
rey turned the second page...t was a crying pic of her...( her pics will be arranged in an order coz he frequently talks with her...and talks the same...😆
"moti humesha roti rehti hai...har choti baat keliye/..."
he turned the page...in it her angry pic...
"oops sorry...baatcutter...par kab milogi???"
he turned...she was beating her headwith her palm...
"oh sorry...bohut baar yahi kehta hun na..."
next...her eyebrow raised...
"acha kk...hazar baar...kk...par kya karoon i miss u"
he pouted...next pic...she pouting...
"hmm...ab mujhe pout bhi nahi karne deti...tum itni cutely pout karti ho ki mujhe pout karne mai bhi...i feel embrassed..."
next...with full attitude...collar lifting...
"acha bas karo...bohut udna mat...jitna bhi udo wapas mere paas hi aana hai..."
next...blank...no pic...
"tumhari sharmati hui expression...kab dekhoonga??"
next she laughing...
"acha mai yaha tadap raha hun aur tumhe hasi aarahi hai??? huh!!!!"
showed fake anger...next ...she holding her ears...
"hmm...ab tumse theek se gussa bhi nahi kar sakta"
next...she smiling wide...
"luv u ..."and kissd her photo and again back to flask back...
days passed...they became very good frnds...and swayam and kriya became best frnds...three used to go together to school,reading,writing, all...kriya used to cry for every small thing
"baatcutter plzz dnt cry...i cnt see u crying...4rm the first day"
this sentence would bring her smile back... one yr passed...but suddenly she have to leave coz of her dad...he is a bank manager...so shifting to another place...
three of them cried a lot...but exchanged their no's(apna nahi toh ghar ki..😆...)
"acha toh ab wapas kaisi aayi...?? achanak se??"sharon asked
"achanak se nahi...uski jaane ki theek ek hafte baad ek call aaya tha uska...aur..."
he narrated the story...
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"haan rey tune bulaya??"
all entered as swayam asked rey ...
"rey tum itne tensed kyun ho??"sharon asked...
rey was pacing to and fro in the cabin...
"yaar tuesday ko baatcutter ki birthday hai...aur aaj sunday ...saari arrangements. karni hai...par sab ko kaise bulaun ...no tym help yaar swayam...i want her ..."
"birthday to be special as every year...thats it na...dnt worry rey hum kaam baanth lete hai na..."
"good idea...theek hai toh party ki decorations and location .cake mai dekh loonga...baaki sab tum log karlo...guests invitation and all the rest stuff...tum logon ko jaisa acha lagta hai waise party arrange karlo..."
"kk..par venue kaha hai??" swayam
"beach!!!!!!"
"BEACH!!!!!!!"all shouted..."
"acha rey ye batao/...wo tumhare paas nahi hai...and u dnt kow ki woh hai bhi kaha toh kya karoge??"sharon
"wait"
"10 saal beeth chuke hai...kab tak wait karega???"neha
"till death"
rey went away as he had lot things to do...
" pagal kardiya kriya ne ise poora..."swayam said...
"guys...party...guests hamari marzi!!!"swayam winked and all hooted
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party day...rey was very happy...party strtd at 7:00
all enjoyed till 9:00 when nil anounced a special guest...rey was confused...then entered a girl...rey saw her legs...
then shifted to her top...(but she had a shirt on...black long transperent shirt...just lyk the shirt in the yellow bikini shaks wore in her photoshoot)
and then her face...
NO!!!!!!!!! not again...swayam !!1 i will kill u...par mujhe itna farak kyun padh rah hai??? aaj toh ye sab ko fullstop karke hi rahoonga...lets strtd the game miss...watever!!!!! naam se kya farak padta hai...
( im cutting all the crap...direct dance dekho...i cnt describe the song so imagine 1st part of song ..the same steps of shaks mega auditions...in b/w she opens her buttons and throws the shirt awayyy and 1st stanza she dances in front of rey...now go...)
at 2:28 rey moves frnt...with eyelock...she moves back...at at 2:46 rey keeps his hand on her waist...she shivers at his touch...at
i cnt take this... rey pulls her and lifts her..(her waist oh his houlder...typical idian dulhan ko uthane wala pose...)
he takes her out at the entrance...
"aakhir kya chahiye tumhe???"
"kyun mera dance acha nahi laga??"
"what?? dekho get out ri8 now...nahi i dnt know what i will do..."
"nah u can do anything"
"acha confidence??? kis baat keliye??"
"kyun ki linecutter kabhi baatcutter ko jaane keliye kehsakta hai kya??"
"no"he replied spontaniously but soon froze...he looked at her,...she was smiling naughtily...
"matlab tum??"
she smiled...he got cnfrmation...he frwarded his hand to caress her cheek but pulled back...went 4r a hug but again backed off...and then 4r a kiss but again backed off...finally spoke
"tum yahan ??? kaise?? kab??"
"hug bhi nahi karoge mujhe...after all we are meeting after 10 yrs"
he quickly pulled her into a tight hug as he was waiting 4r her approval...her hair on his face was making him dizzy...he bent to kiss her on shoulder but cntrld and pulled back...
"toh batayiye miss kriya ghai kaise aana hua??"
her face fell...she looked away...she seemed lost and tears 4rmd ...
"baatcutter kya hua.??"
he asked catching her shouldrs...
"no more rey...im not kriya ghai anymore."
what??? matlab iski shaadi...no!!!!!!! his thoughts were cut as she spoke...
"mai kabhi kriya ghai thi hi nahi rey"
r:😕
"mai unki adopted beti hun...actually jab unki koi bache nahi the then they adopted me...at sm 6 yrs lyk dat...par mai hi bhudhu hun kuch yaad nahi...shaayad sonia ki birth tak mujhe bohut pyaar ki...(sonia is 7 yrs small dan kriya) uske baad mai unhe bhooj lagne lagi...jab bhi neri aur sonia ki jhagda hoti thi...maa mujhe bohut daat thi thi...aur hamesha ye yaad dilathi thi ki mei unpe bhoj hun...aur jab hum shift hogaye the...tab theek ek week ke baad bohut badi jhagda hui aur phir se maa aur papa ne ye kaha ki mai sirf unpe bhoj hun...isiliye mai waha se nikal gayi aur ek working womens hstl gayi aur waha ki warden ko maine apni kahani bataya...maine kaha ki mai kaam karke unki rent pay karoongi...unhone kaha hi jab tak meri padai nahi hoti ..meri saari bhoj unhone uthaya...im an orphan rey...koi nahi hai mera apna...bas wo mam hai..."
"kya mai tera apna nahi hun???"
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"acha ye batao ki tum yaha ...tum jaanthi thi na ki mai rey hun??"
"haan😳"
"par kaise??"
"swayam!!!!!!!!"she replied spontaniously but bit her tongue next...
"matlab tum swayam se cntct mei thi par mujhse nahi??? batana bhi zaroori nahi samjha tune???"
"nahi rey...wo ...mujhe pata hai agar mai tumhe bataungi toh tum mujhe apne saath rehne keliye kehte ho...par mai kisipe bhoj nahi banna chahti..."
"what?? tumhe lagta hai ki tum mujhpe bhoj banogi??? how could u even think dat kriya???"
"rey mujhe pata hai...tumhare liye ya uncle aunty keliye mai bhoj nahi banoongi...par tab meri haal aisi thi ki mai apne aap pe sharam karti thi...plzz rey understand..."
"par swayam se hi kyun cntact mei thi??? aur swayam ne mujhe bataya bhi nahi???"
"rey swayam mera bst frnd hai ...tab i need smone..so maine use bataya...aur i took his promise ki woh tumhe nahi batayega..."
"but y??"
"kyun ki tumhe bura lagta ...isiliye...plzz rey ...plzz maaf kardo..."
"oh dnt again pout i cnt be angry"
they smiled...he checked 4rm top to bottom...kriya shivered at his gaze...
"waise bohut patli hogayi😉...aur badal bhi gayi...tum toh bohut shy thi...par aise??😕"
"zindagi sharam sab chodne pe majboor kardeti hai rey...actually mai mam pe jyaada din bhoj nahi banna chahti,,,,,so maine ye field chuni...aur waise bhi patli kyun na hun...india ki top model hun...obviously patli hoongi na...??😉"
"wat top model??"
"haan top model...dekho mai sabse badi model hun par mere linecutter ye tak nahi pata...really rey u dnt suit ur image of cassinova...pata hai i have seen and read many article abt u and ur academy,...but pity on me...mai itni badi model nahi banpayi ki mere linecutter hi mujhe jaanta nahi...phew...rey tum itne ache??? par kaise?? aur..."
"woah!!!!!!! wait...u havent changed...still the same baatcutter...aur tumne kya kaha ki mai??"
"woh...tum itne ache???"
"wo nahi..."
"toh kya??"
"kuch mera linecutter...??????"
he raised his eyebrows...she bushed and looked away...he pulled her waist against him...
"tumhara linecutter???"
she looked down...he lifted her face with index finger...
"pyaar karti hona mujhse???"
she blushed to core...pushed hi and moved...but he pulled her back and again she collapsed in his chest...
he kissed her on her eyes...
"i luv u too"
"pata hai..."she said looking down...
"par...kaise??"
"swayam..."
"matlab mujhpe nazar rakh rahi thi??"
she blushed...he lifted her in his arms/...
"rey ye kya kar rahe ho??? utaro mujhe.."
"chup...aaj no baat..."
he took her to the dias...
the gang were grinnig wide as they got that kriyaansh became one...rey took the mike and strtd announcing...all stopped and looked at him...
"guys mai humesha party deta rah...tumlogon ne hamesha poocha ki mai kiske b'day par ye party deta hun...so her is the one 4r whom i give this party to u all...she is kriya..."
kriya nodded as if saying no rey ...not ghai plz...im just kriya...
"she is...KRIYA REYAANSH SINGHANIA"
all were dumbstruck...she stood frozen there,...he looked at her...
"HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY LIFE!!!!!!!"
tears rolled down her eyes...he left the mike and cupped her face...
"kriya kya hua???? kya tum mujhse..."
before he could cmplt she hugged him tight giving her approval...he pulled her back...
"kriya plzz ro mat...mai tumhe rote hue nahi dekhsakta..."
"pehle din se"she accompined him...they looked at hi abd burst out laughing...she placed her head on his shoulder and laughed...
"u never change rey"
"aur badlunga bhi nahi...kyun aisa pasand nahi hun??"
she blushed..
"batao..."
"p...pasand nahi bohut pasnd ho..."
he hugged her tight...
all hooted...
suddenly fireworks made thier way...
"ab use cake cut karne doge ya??? "swayam asked as the gang got on the dias...
"umm...haa..."
rey said ...
he pulled kriya in front of him...caught her hand placing a knife in it and both cut the cake...his breath touching her neck...so she shivered...
"india ki top model gabra rahi hai???"sharon teased...kriya blushed...
kriya took a piece and rey one...she feeded him...he bought the cake to her mouth and stopped...
"ek baat bata...phir se moti hogayi toh???"
she punched him slightly...he laughed and feeded her...all the gand feeded each other...
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toh ye meri tarah se party samajhlo...but ek last part baaki hai!!!!😉
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Edited by deetha - 13 years ago
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