Virman FF : Ek Duje Ke Vaaste..DISCONTINUED..

VirmanxFan01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Wow

Awsomeee loool

your epiccc

keep it up luved it

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shilpa09

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

omg!!!!!!!!!! loved the way manvi was jealous...i think she would kill heer...if she is given a chance...hmmm...

awsome update dear...keep on good work😊

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Preethi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

sweet part... waiting for next part... loved this part...

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Shivani Rajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Awesome jealous Maanvi... Funny update...!!

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Alice in wonderland ;)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

superb update...padke mazaa aaya...

jealous mannu wz truly a treat 2 read...🤣

hope she spares dat poor gal...her future sis in law...i seriously pity her...😕

but i want prem also 2 cum in midst so dat v get to c a jealous virat tooo...😳

thnx 4 the pm...!!! 😊

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Dii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

AHHH I TOTTLY AND ABOSOLUTLY LOVED IT!!! ❤️❤️❤️ PLEASE UPDATE SOON! 😊

love:

-princess-

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Anon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Read the entire story in one go and I'm absolutely loving it!! Great job!! 👏

I'm especially loving the KDMHMD addition in here - and yes, I do think having a Prem-Heer story to parallel Virat-Manvi is a dhaasu idea! 😆

Oh my gaad. Heer and Virat's clever (or not so clever, depending on how you look at it) plan in fixing our Majnu with his Laila is turning out to have HILARIOUS consequences! 🤣

And I noticed Manvi's pet-phad chai dialogue in there too - which was quite a genius move! 😛

Ooh! A jealous Manvi is a DEVIOUS Manvi! Can't wait to see what she comes up with next! 😉

But I do hope poor Heer doesn't actually end up falling to pray to one of Manvi's more ... er... vicious pranks

Also, just as a random addition to an already lamba-chora post: The amazing thing about your story is that your portrayal of all the characters is so spot-on! Like I could actually imagine Manvi doing something like that, Virat reacting in the ways that he does, Vanshika being a great mother-figure, etc. and I think it's all brilliant! ⭐️

Update soon ... please? 😳

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