~FF-NA JANE KAISE PYAAR HO GAYA~ - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Ctnr6

Deeps! Intro part was GOOD!!! Now post 1st part as soon as possible...
& yes be perfect as our vipu dear as!!!!! Remember u hav competition wid her!!!! :-):-) :-):-)
ALL D BEST !!!!

sani darling😳...vips & i r very good frnds...not only here but also on fb...
she gives me d idea of writing a ff...😊
i wont try to compete wid vipu as dere is no competition in frndship...😊

we both r die hearted fans of jayra...
all d hearties thnxx to u 4 liking my intro part...i hope i will make u like every part of my ff...😊😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Ddhi

sani darling😳...vips & i r very good frnds...not only here but also on fb...
she gives me d idea of writing a ff...😊
i wont try to compete wid vipu as dere is no competition in frndship...




Yes we will never compete with each other...infact we'll enjoy each other's FF!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Bane chahe dushman zamaana (saniya)hamara ,
SALAAMAT RAHE DOSTANA (vipra & deepak) hamara!!!!
:-) :-) :-) :-)
Note: don't take DOSTANA means as KARAN JOHAR's movie!!! ;-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Loved the introduction.. 😃 waiting for the first part...
i'm sure this FF will be different & awesome.. 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Ctnr6

Bane chahe dushman zamaana (saniya)hamara ,
SALAAMAT RAHE DOSTANA (vipra & deepak) hamara!!!!
:-) :-) :-) :-)
Note: don't take DOSTANA means as KARAN JOHAR's movie!!! ;-)

dont worry sani darling...m not saying u as dushman...
we all r frnds here...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: -Heartbreaker-

Loved the introduction.. 😃 waiting for the first part...

i'm sure this FF will be different & awesome.. 😃

thnxx loney...m sure u will defo like this ff...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
FIRST PART


Outside college canteen

karan waiting for jay outside college canteen as it is d first day of last year in college.he whispering to himself:

arey yaar ye jay kahaan reh gaya.m sure abhi tak so raha hoga.aur kyun nhi soye ga itni mehnat jo karta hai wo raat bhar.😆
yaar ye apne saath saath mjhe b late karvayega.iski wajah se mjhe kritu(kritika) ki maar khani padegi. sirf half an hour baaki reh gaya h aur sahab ji ka kuch pata hi nhi.aane ke baad bhi 15 minute to ladkiyon ko dekhega & freshers ko tang karega.yaar ye pakka aaj pehle din hi pitvayega...



as he ws talking to himself...car horn blows...he turned around & gets happy...he saw a black AUDI Q5 heading towards him...it ws jay car...

car stops just in front of him...he feels a sigh of relief...after few seconds he shouted...

aaja mere baap...bahar aaja...😡

car gate opens...jay gets outside d car...he ws looking damn handsome wid black mufti T shirt & blue Levis jeans... every girl passing by wnt to see d hero...

jay goes near to karan & said...
kya hua karu(karan) itni tension me kyun lag raha h...any prblm????😆

karan:wah...prblm puch raki h...any prblm!!!😆
bhai time dekha h...jaldi kar sirf 20 min rah gaye h...agar class me nhi pahuche to kritu bahut maaregi...

jay:arey yaar tu itna darta kyun h...u r a man...kya kar raha h mard ban...b a man...

karan:to abhi kya tjhe ladki dikh raha hoon main...😕

jay:bahar ki packaging dekh kar koi nhi keh sakta ki tu ladki h...but teri harkatein dekh kar koi b keh sakta h ki tu ladki h...itna kyun darta h tu kritika se...ladkiyon ko kbhi itna bhaav nhi dena chahiye...

karan:ok...jay baba...ab chale...



just when they were approaching classroom...jay saw a glimpse of a girl...wid white churdaar suit...2-3 books in hand...open hairs...spects on eyes...

looking at her he said to karan:

abe karu, wo dekh ek chalti phirti encyclopedia aa rahi h...lagta h fresher h...chal mazze lete h

karan tries to stop him but all his efforts gone in vain...

he went close to tht girl...

girl ws too shy...she recognises tht he ws approaching her...so she tries to avoid him...& passed him widout seeing him...
jay gets angry & shouted 4m behind...


hey u white suit...wait...

she turned very shyingly...

he goes towards her & ask: r u a fresher...

she replied(hesitantly): yes...

jay: aaj tak kisi b ladki ne jay raheja ko ignore nhi kiya h...tumhe iski sazza milegi...
naam kya h tumhara...

girl didnt reply...

jay: sunai nhi de raha h...wht is ur name...😡

girl replied fearly: ragini...ragini soni...

jay:ohh...so get ready for ur punishment...

he thinks 4 a while...

then announce...

hey guys...listen here...
is ladki ne mjhe ignore kiya h...to ise aaj main punish karoonga...

somebody ask jay: but jay iski punishment kya h???

iski punishment hai ki...
she will kiss me in front of college...

everybody got shocked hearing this...
ragini ws totally stunned...she almost starts crying...😭


FIRST PART ENDS HERE...

HW WS IT GUYS...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
Loved Jay ki HERO wali entry😍
Gosh bahut attitude hai bande mein...Ragini se theek karegi isse [after they fall in love]😉

bechari Ragini..first day pe hi punishment mil gayi..really looking forward to read the next part..lets see kya hota hai!!

Good work Deeps👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: -MadRaginiFan-

Loved Jay ki HERO wali entry😍

Gosh bahut attitude hai bande mein...Ragini se theek karegi isse [after they fall in love]😉

bechari Ragini..first day pe hi punishment mil gayi..really looking forward to read the next part..lets see kya hota hai!!

Good work Deeps👏

thnxx vips...ya bahut attitude dikhayaga jay aage...

its gonna b worth watching...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: -MadRaginiFan-

Loved Jay ki HERO wali entry😍

Gosh bahut attitude hai bande mein...Ragini se theek karegi isse [after they fall in love]😉

bechari Ragini..first day pe hi punishment mil gayi..really looking forward to read the next part..lets see kya hota hai!!

Good work Deeps👏

thnxxx vipu...😊

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