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GoGreen

@GoGreen

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Khushi is such a sweet heart...refushing his job offer...she unknowinly qualified for better half post in his life permanently.🤗...Dint she...❤️

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Sukirti Singh Raizada

@sukirtiraizada

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#172

u r a great writer dear...

plz add me to ur pm list

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cookie.d

@cookie.d

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Awesome update!!! Thanks for the pm :)

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603840

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#174

got free time so i popped in hello! :) thanks for heeding my word and made the font a bit bigger. *thumbs up*

part1

love how these two encounter, very funny, but also understandably sound. like that they got their own prob but shared it as a short note. arnav's pursue for getting her attention/attraction brings a smile too. you have set the charatcers out well. off to read the 2nd part. *zoom*

part 2

interesting arnav is a bit weird following her around, but i can go with the flow, lol. he didnt want to mention about his home...hmmm. uff khushi lost her job, damn. not a kool move. but i'll see what job arnav has for her instead.

part 3

ahhh its all rounded up very nicely i must say. *impressed* i just knew she was coming to this and grinned when she found out but i'm proud that she didnt act differently even finding out that he's the owner. even more proud she didnt take the job. adds more structure to her character. love that if they meet again friends is on the table. very nicely put.

OVerall so far i'm quite enjoying the story, so thank you for the link in the first place. really appreciated. you writing skills are terrific and its only been three updates but i feel like i'm in the story. the too characters are terrific. khushi independant, strong, but also considerate. arnav interested but also cheery i must add and not very strict, laid back. :)

thanks again and cant wait for the next part.

*hugs and kisses*

xxx

Edited by -Zara- - 13 years ago

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#175

That was such a brill update. Like others I am so glad Khushi didn't take the job, it adds a lot to her character. I also liked the fact that she said no to the meeting him again thing, as it means they'l meet again and it will show that it's meant to be

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Samia Sobti Tacker :D

@Asr-Ki-Sam

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#176

Realy very nyccc updt dear!!!
Khushi iz damn cute yaarrr..
Loved it!!!

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purplelove

@purplelove

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Yes to the banner, I like it. Yes, yes, yes to more updates 😆 . I'm glad she turned down the job. Waiting to see how their paths cross again. 👏

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Samia Sobti Tacker :D

@Asr-Ki-Sam

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#178

Lovely updt dear!!!!
Loving khushi's charactr

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Sunara

@princessunara

Trailblazer

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#179

aww cute man!! this story is different and the differences in characters is awesome!! and better yet i love the equation they have specially from Arnav's POV!! amazing!! love it love it!!

n no dnt ever slow down!! do update soon!!